Aao aaj shukriyaan keh de.......(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on February 07, 2009, 04:24:44 PM
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«Reply #15 on: February 08, 2009, 12:27:05 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on February 08, 2009, 04:32:11 AM
Sajid ji..

Khushi aap ke liye, gam humre liye.
Muskurahat aapke liye, aansu humre liye.
Zindagi aap ke liye, mout humare liye.
Phool aap ke liye, kante humare liye.
Sab kuch aapke liye aur Aap sirf Hamare liye Jaana  love9

Arey wah itni badi dua dekh apni baat se palatna nahi samjhi.. Giggle
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«Reply #16 on: February 08, 2009, 12:32:49 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on February 08, 2009, 05:33:55 AM

Bahut khoob... kahi kahi dil ko chu gaya aapka likha yeh lines padkar..

Pyaar bhari koi daastan raheti to zaroor likhta
Ghamo se bhari hai meri kitaab wo likhon

Bata gahyel velantine pe kya likhon

Pyaar bhari koi daastan reheti to zarro likhta
Ghamo se bhari hai meri kitaab wo likhon


Haan haan .... batao ghayalji... likhe toh b kya likhe..  sad7
Very well expressed lines bhaiya.

Kuch bhi likh jo lage pyaara sa
Mujhe woh kehde main lagu tera sa
Pyaar woh shay nahi jispe koi pabandi ho
Tu bhi chahna use jo sirf lage GHAYEL sa.

                       -SG-
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«Reply #17 on: February 08, 2009, 12:40:44 PM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on February 08, 2009, 05:14:55 AM
Sajid Sahab velantine per to sirf hum yahi likh sakte hain "Ghayel" aur apse bahetar is ahesas ko kaun mahesos kar sakta hai ap bhi pardesi hum bhi pardesi !!

Bata ghayel velantine pe kya likhon !!

Usse bichad ke jo guzri wo likhon !!
Ya jo guzarne wali hai wo likhon !!

Bata gahyel velantine pe kya likhon !!

Pyaar karne wala koi mila hi nahi !!
Nafarth walon ke naam beshumar hain wo likhon !!

Bata ghayel velantine pe kya likhon !!

Pyaar bhari koi daastan raheti to zaroor likhta !!
Ghamo se bhari hai meri kitaab wo likhon !!

Bata ghayel velantine pe kya likhon !!

Mai chala aya kissi ko sisakta chodke !!
Mere intezaar me tadapti eak ladki uska  naam likhon !!

Bata ghayel velantine pe kya likhon !!

Usse hum- kalam howe eak muddath guzar gayi !!
Howi jo qabon me guftagu uska unwan likhon !!

Bata ghayel valentine pe kya likhon !!

Apne log apne watan se dor raheta hai “Qadeer”!!
Jahan sub para-A- hain uss Shaher ka naam likhon !!

Bata ghayel valentine pe  kya likhon !!

Qadeer Toopchi



Wah Qadeer wah yaar khud to chutti ja rahe ho hame q rula ke ja rahe ho... DOH

Sab kuch to keh diya tune
Ek izhare mohabbat ke siwa

                  -SG-
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«Reply #18 on: February 08, 2009, 12:45:48 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on February 08, 2009, 07:41:03 AM
SG ji! Bahut khoob!  Clapping Smiley
Aapkey,"But i am still waiting from all of you to plz write something for someone you love." eik 'choupadi' haazir kar rahaa hoon! Mulaahizah farmaanyen! Velantine ki usee din key liye chhorhiye!

Ay meyrey Mahboob!

Mein tujhko eik surkh kalee dey gulaab kee,
Chaahuungaa usey zeyhan mein, dil mein tu chhupaa ley!
Badley mein, muskuraa key, khil key, gul mein badal jaa;
Meyrey di-o-jigar ko tah-e-dil mein sajaa ley!!

                           - abd bundeli
 

Wah abd bhai kya baat hain... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Ab bhai ek puri ghazal likhiye jo mohabbaaaaat se bhari ho sach me bohat dil kar raha hain aapse is Haseen mauke pe kuch special suna jaye.
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«Reply #19 on: February 08, 2009, 12:51:47 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 08, 2009, 12:32:49 PM
Kuch bhi likh jo lage pyaara sa
Mujhe woh kehde main lagu tera sa
Pyaar woh shay nahi jispe koi pabandi ho
Tu bhi chahna use jo sirf lage GHAYEL sa.

                       -SG-

Wah Wah Sajid sahab maan gaye ustaab shayari ko sharafath se anjaam dene ka andaaz nirala paya hai apne allah tumhe bad nazar mahefos rakhe sahab !! khuch aisa kar diya apne ke !!

jo dekha haal mera apna haal bhol gaya !!
jawab mangne wala sawal bhool gaya !!

Bahoth umda jawab sajid sahab !!

Qadeer Toopchi

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«Reply #20 on: February 08, 2009, 12:55:38 PM »
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Yaar meri sab se request hai ke is thread ko pyaar se bhar do yaar aur yaadgar banado is velantine ko !! aur sajid sahab sahi kaha apne 'Abad" sahab ke eak naya andaaz ho hi jaye yahan !! betaab hai sunne ke liye hum sab apko abad sahab !! Aur sajid the cridit of this velantine goes to sajid he is the one who intiated the thread on this beautiful day !! thanks a lot sajid sahab !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #21 on: February 08, 2009, 12:58:56 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on February 08, 2009, 07:41:03 AM
SG ji! Bahut khoob!  Clapping Smiley
Aapkey,"But i am still waiting from all of you to plz write something for someone you love." eik 'choupadi' haazir kar rahaa hoon! Mulaahizah farmaanyen! Velantine ki usee din key liye chhorhiye!

Ay meyrey Mahboob!

Mein tujhko eik surkh kalee dey gulaab kee,
Chaahuungaa usey zeyhan mein, dil mein tu chhupaa ley!
Badley mein, muskuraa key, khil key, gul mein badal jaa;
Meyrey di-o-jigar ko tah-e-dil mein sajaa ley!!

                           - abd bundeli
 

Wah Wah Abad sahab masha allah aj bhi apki qalam se jawani tabakti hai sahab !! sahi kaha hai kissi ne ke shayar hamesha jawan hota hai wah wah !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #22 on: February 08, 2009, 03:32:52 PM »
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Waah Kya Khoob Likha Hai, Sajid Bhaiya.
Aapne Bhi Bohat Achcha Likha Hai Qadeer Bhaiya..

Pardhkar Dil Aashiqaana Aur Bhi Hogaya Apna Bhi,.

May Allah Bless You, Allah Sachchi Mohabbat Nibhaane Waalo Ka Saath De Is Valentine Par,.

AAMEEN,.
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«Reply #23 on: February 09, 2009, 03:11:19 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 08, 2009, 03:32:52 PM
Waah Kya Khoob Likha Hai, Sajid Bhaiya.
Aapne Bhi Bohat Achcha Likha Hai Qadeer Bhaiya..

Pardhkar Dil Aashiqaana Aur Bhi Hogaya Apna Bhi,.

May Allah Bless You, Allah Sachchi Mohabbat Nibhaane Waalo Ka Saath De Is Valentine Par,.

AAMEEN,.

Shukriya Janasheen !! allah tumhe khush rakhe !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #24 on: February 09, 2009, 03:22:31 AM »
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Good work all..
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«Reply #25 on: February 09, 2009, 09:05:27 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 08, 2009, 12:45:48 PM
Wah abd bhai kya baat hain... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Ab bhai ek puri ghazal likhiye jo mohabbaaaaat se bhari ho sach me bohat dil kar raha hain aapse is Haseen mauke pe kuch special suna jaye.
Eik gazal kal post ki thee, neechey bhi quote kar rahaa hoon! Padhh kar deykhiye, kuchh aisaa hi chaahtey hain aap, yaa kuchh aur?

Hai jagah pooree dil mein tumhaarey liye!
Tum banaaou zaraa-sii hamaarey liye!!

Muskuraaye ho jab bhi milee hai nazar;
Maan lo, dil mein hai kuchh hamaarey liye!

Arsh mein abra hongey hameyshaa naheen;
Raat aayegee fir chaand taarey liye!

Deykh lo, ab hawaa aa rahee hai idhar:
Jism chhoo kar tumhaaraa, hamaarey liye!

Kyaa huaa hai? Kahaan hai tumhaaree nazar?
Hoon yahaan, aasmaan key sitaarey liye!

Baag hai yah wahee, aashiyaanah wahee;
Fir bahaar aa gayii hai nazaarey liye!

Pankh suljhaa rahaa hai chirhee key chirhaa;
Kis suhaaney lamhey key ishaarey liye?

Aa gayaa hoon, chalo, fir safar par chaleyn;
Ishq hai saath, saarey idaarey liye!

Shaam dhhaltey hi, ab shab nayee aayegee:
Zindagee mein naye khwaab pyaarey liye!

Sach yahee hai, ‘abd’, chaahtaa hoon tumhain;
Ham tumhaarey liye, tum hamaarey liye!!

                             - abd bundeli
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«Reply #26 on: February 09, 2009, 09:10:05 AM »
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Thank u so much bhai for this beautiful loving Poem iska reply maine diya hain...new post me  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #27 on: February 09, 2009, 09:30:27 AM »
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Wow.. Well written all. Claps for u all.
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«Reply #28 on: February 09, 2009, 10:50:24 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 09, 2009, 09:10:05 AM
Thank u so much bhai for this beautiful loving Poem iska reply maine diya hain...new post me  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Quote from: Sophi on February 09, 2009, 09:30:27 AM
Wow.. Well written all. Claps for u all.
Bahut-bahut shukriyah sajid_ghayel /Sophi ji!

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«Reply #29 on: February 09, 2009, 12:04:53 PM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on February 08, 2009, 03:33:28 AM
Bahoth qoob ghayel !! yaar mauzo pe likhna to koi tum se sikha mere bhai !! kasam se maza agaya ghayel sahab !! waise hum pardes me rahene walon ki nazar karta hon ye 4 lines !!

eak shaks meri sanson me samaya bhi bahoth lagta hai !!
magar wohi shaks mujhe paraya bhi bahoth lagta hai !!
usse milne ko dil bahoth karta hai "Ghayel"
magar ane jane me kiraya bhi bahoth lagta hai !!

...............Janab Rahat Indori Sahab ...................

ye 4 lines me pyaar bhi shikwa bhi gurbath bhi shikayath bhi !!

Qadeer Toopchi

Waah Waah, Kya baat Hai Rahat Indori Sahab Ki,.

Thank U Bhai, For Sharing THis Lines,.
Aur Allah kare Aapki Partner Aapke saath Jald Hi Aa jaaye,..
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