Aaou pahloo mein yahaan, kyoun baithhey ho door?

by abdbundeli on October 18, 2008, 12:37:13 PM
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Jeewan hai yah: kyoun na ham
Jiyen isey bharpoor?
Aaou pahloo mein yahaan,
Kyoun baithhey ho door?

                        
          Ramwatiya / abd bundeli


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«Reply #1 on: October 18, 2008, 09:05:16 PM »
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Wah abd ji achha she'ar he, or baat-chit mien istemal hosake itna aasan bhi he.
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«Reply #2 on: October 19, 2008, 05:04:14 AM »
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Shukriyah Sayyid Randeri ji,
Yah eik 'dohaa' hai, aur bhaashhaa hai Hindustaanee Hindi, Bhaarteeya Prayadeep mein lagbhag sabhi samajhtey hain!
Hindi bhaashhaa hai saral, bol-chaal ki! Mitra!
Har pal bantey hain jahaan, mrudu shabdoun key chitra!!

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«Reply #3 on: October 19, 2008, 05:12:28 AM »
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Jeewan hai yah: kyoun na ham jiyen isey bharpoor?
Aaou pahloo mein yahaan, kyoun baithhey ho door?

                         Ramwatiya / abd bundeli


acha hai
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«Reply #4 on: October 19, 2008, 06:28:26 AM »
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Thanks NODER ji!
       - abd bundeli
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«Reply #5 on: October 19, 2008, 06:40:09 AM »
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Bohat khoob Abd ji... Applause

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«Reply #6 on: October 19, 2008, 06:55:54 AM »
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Thanks honeyrose ji!
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