Aap Ki Mohabbat Ne..!!.....Shireen Hakani

by Shireen Hakani on June 09, 2012, 08:40:24 AM
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Har Dehleez Par Thokar Khayi, Har Rehguzar Ne Thukraya Mujhe,
Yu Hi Raah Chalte Ek Roz Taqdeer Ne Aap Se Milaya Mujhe,
Chahat Ki Nazar Aur Apne Dil Mein Panaah Di Aap Ne
Aap Ki Mohabbat Ne Khaak Se Aaftaab Hai Banaya Mujhe..!!

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«Reply #1 on: June 09, 2012, 08:49:30 AM »
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waah waah
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«Reply #2 on: June 09, 2012, 10:22:54 AM »
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Bahut khoob shireen jee
Applause Applause


Mai jindgee ki talaash me niklaa tha
ek mulakaat ho, aankho me sapna tha
kismat ka kahar humpe aisa toota
pal bhar bhee vo thahar na saka,
jo kahta mujhe sirf apna tha
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«Reply #3 on: June 09, 2012, 10:49:19 AM »
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WAAH SHIREEN JEE.
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: June 10, 2012, 01:28:36 PM »
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Aaye Haaye.. Wah Wah Wah.. Kya Baat Hai Shireen Ji.. Aapki Yeh 4 Line Dil Pe Asar Chod gain.. Behad Khubsoorati se aapne Apne Ehasaason Ko Lafzon me utaara Hai.. Applause Applause

In Khubsoorat Alfaazon Ke Liye Dil Se daad Kubool Karen..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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«Reply #5 on: June 11, 2012, 01:42:22 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Shireen ji...!!!

main kaun hota hoon bhalaa tumhe kuch banaane waalaa,
har kisi ko banaane waalaa hai bas ek wo uparwaalaa,
kismat to meri kuch achchi thi jo mujhe tum mil gaye,
paake tumko samajhta hoon main khud ko taqdeerwaalaa...
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«Reply #6 on: June 12, 2012, 07:24:05 AM »
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Wah Kya Baat Hai Hriday Jee!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Lijiye Aap Ka Jawab:

Apne Jadu Se Hai Khud Hi Be-Khabar Aap Mere Chahne Wale,
Meri Zindagi Sawari Ban Kar Khuda Aap Ne Mere Dil Wale,
Koi Peechle Janam Ke Aache Karam Ke Mil Gaye Aap Mujhe,
Chahat Ki Raahon Mein Nahi Koi Aur Aap Sa Mere Ishq Wale..!!

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«Reply #7 on: June 12, 2012, 07:27:11 AM »
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Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: June 12, 2012, 11:57:32 AM »
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Shukriyaa shukriyaa ... aapne bhi bahut bahut khoob jawaab likha hai... bahut khoob....!!!

tum kya jaano tumhaare aane se meri zindagi kya se kya ho gayi,
tum kya jaano tumhaare aane se meri khushiyaan jawaan ho gayi,
ab tak bas kaanto ke sej pe bichhi thi ye zindagaani meri, par
tumhaare aane se meri ye zindagi jaise koi hasi kahaani ho gayi...

Wah Kya Baat Hai Hriday Jee!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Lijiye Aap Ka Jawab:

Apne Jadu Se Hai Khud Hi Be-Khabar Aap Mere Chahne Wale,
Meri Zindagi Sawari Ban Kar Khuda Aap Ne Mere Dil Wale,
Koi Peechle Janam Ke Aache Karam Ke Mil Gaye Aap Mujhe,
Chahat Ki Raahon Mein Nahi Koi Aur Aap Sa Mere Ishq Wale..!!


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«Reply #9 on: June 12, 2012, 01:21:05 PM »
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Bohat Khub Hriday Jee Applause Applause


Kahani Nahi Koi Haqiqat Hai Hoon Mujhe Jaan Le,
Nahi Milegi Koi Mujh Si Chahne Wali Yeh Maan Le,
Tum Hi Se Shuru Aur Khatam Hoti Zindagani Meri,
Yakeen Karo Mohabbat Ka, Chahe Jo Mera Imthehan Le..!!
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«Reply #10 on: June 12, 2012, 01:30:17 PM »
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thank u ji thank u... aur aapne khoob jawaab diya hai...!!!  Applause Applause Applause

chaahaa hai tumhe maine, ab imtihaan ki jarurat kya hai,
paake tumhe paayaa sab kuch kisi aur ki jarurat kya hai,
chaahunga tumhe main har kisi se badhke meri jaanaa, agar
tum chaaho mujhe kisi aur chaahne waale ki jarurat kya hai...
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«Reply #11 on: June 12, 2012, 07:18:31 PM »
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Bohat Aache Hriday Jee! You are super fast in writing! I will never be able to beat you...Usual Smile

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Tumhe Pa Kar Hue Sare Khawab Mukammal Is Zindagani Ke,
Mil Kar Bunege Ab Naye Armaan Hum Is Dil Ki Kahani Ke,
Na Thakengi Meri Aankhe Kabhi Tumhe Dekhte Hue Jana,
Chalenge Saath Hum Jahan Padte Saye Pyar Ki Roshni Ke..!!
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«Reply #12 on: June 12, 2012, 07:37:37 PM »
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Are Shireen ji kaisi baat kar rahe hain .. yahaan koi race nahi chal rahi.., mera to ye hai ki jab jaisa ban pada banaa deta hoon... heheheheh... koi competition nahi hai aapse... Usual Smile

bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne... too good ji....!!! Applause Applause Applause


tumhaare raahon pe main phoolon ki sej bichha dunga,
kaaton ko chunke tumhaare daaman se main rakh lunga,
khushiyon se sajaa dunga tumhaari zindagi meri jaanaa,
aansuo pochh ke tumhaare har lamha tumhe hasaa dunga...
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«Reply #13 on: June 12, 2012, 07:41:38 PM »
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Beat you not in the competition but in replies....Yaha mujhe race jaisa bilkul nahi lagta, i love to reply...but aap toh kamal ho...

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«Reply #14 on: June 12, 2012, 07:49:09 PM »
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aur mujhe bhi aapke saath likhne me bahut mazaa aataa hai.. keep writing... aap bahut achcha likhte hain.. aapke jawaab ka intezaar rahegaa..!!! Usual Smile
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