““ aap ki surat achchi ””:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

nirala

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aapki surat achchi
aapki seerat achchi

aapki sohbat achhi
aapki mohabat achi

lagti ho bilkul akkl ki kachchi
dil ki sachchi masoom si bachchi

ankho me sararat
baato me chahchahat

umango ummeddo ki dil me samahat
uss par badi qatil si hai naazuk hoto par muskurahat

gulaab ki pankhudiyo sa ye gaal gulaabi
dekhne ki ada bhi hai sharaabi

phool jhare jab hansti aap
aa jaata tab nir ke mann me bhi paap

phoolo.n sa khilti raho sada
daaman me na aaye kaante sada inse bachti raho


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brokenbyluv

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Re: ““ aap ki surat achchi ””

«Reply #1 on: March 25, 2011, 04:27:01 PM »

Bahut khoob nirala ji per akhri ki do lines ne kavita ko kuch phika kar diya pooro kavita mein khumar nazar aaya per akhir ki lines kuch jami nhi..


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SURESH SANGWAN

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Re: ““ aap ki surat achchi ””

«Reply #2 on: March 25, 2011, 04:34:30 PM »

kya baat hai Nirala ji bahut umda,excellent.

aapki kavita achhi
aapki soch achhi.

aapki sohbat achhi,
aapki samjhane ki ada achhi.


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nirala

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Re: ““ aap ki surat achchi ””

«Reply #3 on: March 25, 2011, 05:27:00 PM »

thanx geet ji aur suresh ji.
geet ji::aapne sahi kaha magar likhte waqt mai bhul gaya k ye khumaar wali kavita he sad5

meme akhir me socha k me funny chij likh raha hu so aisa ho gaya.


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deepika_divya

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Re: ““ aap ki surat achchi ””

«Reply #4 on: March 25, 2011, 06:07:08 PM »

bahoot Bahoot Khoob Nirala Ji.. bahoot Khoob !


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ANAAM

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Re: ““ aap ki surat achchi ””

«Reply #5 on: March 25, 2011, 06:15:41 PM »

Ye kavita nirali
Tu bhee Niralaa

Tune kavita sunaali
Humne taali bajaali

Ye baat hai achchhi
Haan bilkul sachchi

Quote from: nirala on March 25, 2011, 07:49:15 AM

aapki surat achchi
aapki seerat achchi

aapki sohbat achhi
bapki mohabat achi

lagti ho bilkul akkl ki kachchi
dil ki sachchi masoom si bachchi

ankho me sararat
baato me chahchahat

umango ummedo ki dil me samahat
tis par badi qatil si hai ndzuk hoto pe muskurahat

gulaab ki pankhudiyo sa ye gaal gulaabi
dekhne ki ada bhi hai sharaabi

phool jhare jab hansti aap
aa jaata tab nir jaiso ke mann me paap

guzarish hai suniye aap
char mirchi ek nimbu jude me latkao aap

aap achi


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veenavarsha

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Re: ““ aap ki surat achchi ””

«Reply #6 on: March 26, 2011, 06:57:03 AM »

Quote from: nirala on March 25, 2011, 07:49:15 AM

aapki pakke, aapki nazaro ki daad purani
kah kar usko achhi ,aapne apni shaan badai
ek chatur insaan ne chlaki dhikai
ki is kavita se apni sari samajdari lutai


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nirala

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Re: ““ aap ki surat achchi ””

«Reply #7 on: March 26, 2011, 07:04:59 AM »

haha varsha ji mast baat kahi aapne thanx.
sophi ji aapke reply se acha lga k aapne meri nakaam kosis ko saraha…thanx
anaam ji apki baat sachi…aapki adayegi achi…aapki saadgi bot achi:) Usual Smile

thanx


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