Aapke Jaane Ke Baad.......( Sanjay Karndhar )

by karndhar on January 12, 2010, 07:55:41 AM
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बहुत तन्हा तन्हा सा हूँ आपके जाने के बाद,
तोड़ा सहमा सहमा सा हूँ आपके जाने के बाद,
मेरी जान तो मेरी जान के साथ चली गई,
बस कहने को ज़िंदा हूँ आपके जाने के बाद !

सोचता हूँ क्या करूँ आपके जाने के बाद,
ये तन्हाई कैसे सहुं आपके जाने के बाद,
आप होतीं तो आप पर मैं जाँ वार देता,
अब कहो किसपे मरूं आपके जाने के बाद !

सूना है मेरा घर आपके जाने के बाद,
सब कुछ है बदतर आपके जाने के बाद,
आप थीं तो दिल मेरा था एक गुलिस्ताँ,
अब दिल है एक खंडहर आपके जाने के बाद !

आपकी यादों का सहारा है आपके जाने के बाद,
दिल ने आपको पुकारा है आपके जाने के बाद,
सह लेंगे ये तन्हाई, झेल जाएँगे हर ग़म,
गर आपको "कर्णधार" प्यारा है आपके जाने के बाद !

- संजय कर्णधार

Bahut tanha tanha sa hun aapke jaane ke baad,
Thoda sahma sahma sa hun aapke jaane ke baad,
Meri jaan to meri "JAAN" ke saath chali gayee,
Bas kehne ko zinda hun aapke jaane ke baad !

Sochta hun kya karun aapke jaane ke baad,
Ye tanhai kaise sahun aapke jaane ke baad,
Aap hotin to aap par main jaan waar deta,
Ab kaho kispe marun aapke jaane ke baad !

Soona hai mera ghar aapke jaane ke baad,
Sab kuchh hai badtar aapke jaane ke baad,
Aap theen to dil mera tha ek gulistaan,
Ab dil hai ek khandahar aapke jaane ke baad !

Aapki yaadon ka sahara hai aapke jaane ke baad,
Dil ne aapko pukaara hai aapka jaane ke baad,
Sah lenge ye tanhaai, jhel jaayenge har ghum,
Gar aapko "Karndhar" pyara hai aapke jaane ke baad !

- Sanjay Karndhar
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«Reply #1 on: January 12, 2010, 10:02:42 AM »
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BAHOT BAOT HI ACHHA LIKHA HE.....
TO GOOD....AWESOME......
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«Reply #2 on: January 12, 2010, 02:15:56 PM »
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Bahut Hi Sundar Likha Hai Aapne
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«Reply #3 on: January 12, 2010, 06:19:45 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


   S.K BAHUT DINO KEY BAAD AAPKI NAZM/ KAVITA  PADHNEY KO MILI...!!
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«Reply #4 on: January 13, 2010, 05:07:17 AM »
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Thanks a lot to all the above persons for appreciating my work !
You all keep encouraging and I'll keep writing.
Once again, THANKS A LOT !!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: January 13, 2010, 10:51:07 PM »
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Bahut khoob Karndhar Ji
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«Reply #6 on: January 14, 2010, 06:18:39 AM »
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Wonderful Creation... Bahoot Khoob Sanjay ji...
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«Reply #7 on: January 14, 2010, 07:09:38 AM »
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Great creation Sanjay ji,too good Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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