aapki yaado me raato ko jaagna.......:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

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aapki yaad me raato ko jaagna
ek aadat si ho gayi hai
aapka haal-e-dil pta nhi
hamari duniya aapme kho gyi hai
na din ki fikra hai
na rain ka hai thikana
bas ek hi fikra hai har ghadi
mujhe bas tujhko hai paana
tujhko paa lu to maanunga khuda mil gya
jaha chahat ho jindagi ki eklauti jarurat
sochunga mujhko wo jaha mil gya...
na ruthenge hum kabhi ek duje se
na hogi koi durie darmiya
tere aanchal me chupkar lagega
maano mujhko naya jaha mil gya
no koi ranjish hogi na hoga koi gam
bas ek duje ke honge hum..
par wo jaha shayad mere liye mukarrar nhi hai
tere liye khuda ne banaya koi gair kahi hai
tu uski ho jayegi par mai tera hi rahunga
har pal har lamha yahi kahunga....

na chaho itni sddat se kisi ko
ki bhulne me jamana lage
gar chaho to is kadar tut ke chaho
ki use namumkin kisi gair ko apnana lage


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apriya

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Re: aapki yaado me raato ko jaagna.......

«Reply #1 on: January 17, 2011, 12:50:32 AM »

maaf chahta hu par kuch galtiya ho gyi hai mujhe is poem me...kripya sudhar kar dubara padhe

teri yaad me raaton ko jaagna
ek aadat si ho gyi hai
tera haal-e-dil to pta nhi
par mei duniya to bas tujhme kho gyi hai

aur fir aakhiri panktiyo me....

na chaho itni siddat se kisi ko
ki us ek ko bhulane me jamana lage
fir bhi dil na maane to is kadar tut ke chaho usko
ki use bhi namumkin kisi gair ko apnana lage.....


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Re: aapki yaado me raato ko jaagna.......

«Reply #2 on: January 17, 2011, 02:25:54 AM »

bahut sundar rachna Chote.
padhte hue kho gaya tha isliye galti kya thi pata hi na chala Usual Smile


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Re: aapki yaado me raato ko jaagna.......

«Reply #3 on: January 17, 2011, 02:48:39 AM »

shukriya bhaijee.......

dard ka sagar fir hilore maar rha hai
lagta hai mera pyar mujhe bhula rha hai


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Re: aapki yaado me raato ko jaagna.......

«Reply #4 on: January 17, 2011, 03:19:22 AM »

pyar ka ye bulawa nahi mere bhai
ye to pyar ka Bhulawaa hai
jo rah rahkar hileren maar raha hai


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Re: aapki yaado me raato ko jaagna.......

«Reply #5 on: January 17, 2011, 04:47:07 AM »

bht mast apriya ji ..sahi me flow me galtiyan samjh hi nahin aai..mast likha hai aapne....


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apriya

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Re: aapki yaado me raato ko jaagna.......

«Reply #6 on: January 17, 2011, 03:15:53 PM »

Quote from: killbill on January 17, 2011, 03:19:22 AM

pyar ka ye bulawa nahi mere bhai
ye to pyar ka Bhulawaa hai
jo rah rahkar hileren maar raha hai

maine bhi yahi likha tha bhaijee ki mera pyar mujhe bhula rha hai...


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Re: aapki yaado me raato ko jaagna.......

«Reply #7 on: January 17, 2011, 03:20:47 PM »

Accha likha hai aapne Apriya ji... Jaise Killbill ji ne kaha padte gaye aur galatiyan dikhayi nahi di hame... Nice emotional lines... Keep up.


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Re: aapki yaado me raato ko jaagna.......

«Reply #8 on: January 17, 2011, 04:48:12 PM »

Quote from: apriya on January 17, 2011, 12:44:46 AM

kya hi khoob likha hai apriya ji...bahoot behtreen.....

.aur han aap khud hi likhi hui kisi post ko edit kar sakte hain..agar koi problem ho to mujhe PM karen Usual Smile


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Re: aapki yaado me raato ko jaagna.......

«Reply #9 on: January 17, 2011, 05:52:10 PM »

Janab Apriye sahab Aadaab!

Kia kavitaa kahi hai aapne waah jee...
Aapka sandesh behad khoob laga hume..
Daad hazir hai janab...

Aise hi umdaa likhte rahiye..
Aate rahiye..
Khush o aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez....


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