Aapko Dekhkar

by Miss Kismat on November 18, 2004, 01:18:49 PM
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«Reply #45 on: November 23, 2004, 10:18:54 AM »
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Wah kya likh hai Miss Kismat....bohat khoob
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«Reply #46 on: November 23, 2004, 10:39:52 AM »
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Tu yun gayee rooth kar jaise lotegi nahi...
teri iss ada se sada dare aur darte hain....
tere chehre se hi tha ghar mai ujala...
ab roshni kam, dil jara karte hain....
shayad hamari mout par hi aaye milne...
shayad hamari mout par hi aaye milne...
hum roz bina bhoole ek mout marte hain...
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«Reply #47 on: November 23, 2004, 10:45:00 AM »
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Jo humpe hai guzri, hummi jaanete hai.
Sitam kaun sa hai, nahin jo uthaya.
Humari Mohabbat ka ekh,
inthaan tha, yeh do din ki
thodi si jo dooriya thi.....
Agar sachi hota, mohabbat
tumhara to ghabrane ke tum,
shiekayat na karte.... Puzzled !

Agar bewafa tujhko bechaan jaate,
gudda ki kasam hum
mohabbat na karte.
Jo malum hota yeh aanjane
ulfat to dil ko legana
ki jurath na karte....
:oops:
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«Reply #48 on: November 23, 2004, 12:20:22 PM »
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Well nice stuff Miss Kismat but sorry to say a little spelling mistakes like
inthaan =imtihaan
bechaan +pehchaan
gudda +khudda

other wise its nice well i like the song 2 sorry haan if u mind  glasses2
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«Reply #49 on: November 23, 2004, 12:23:47 PM »
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Hi Lovebites: Haha No Koi baat nahin. I don't mind it at all yaar...My Hindi is not too Good that's why. I understand it all, but Likhna thodi Muskil!! Some Little mistakes...Oeppss sorry...But thnx anyways...We only can learn from each other, hai naa?
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«Reply #50 on: November 23, 2004, 12:37:01 PM »
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bohat achhe
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lovebites
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«Reply #51 on: November 23, 2004, 12:42:31 PM »
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Hi Miss-Kismat  yes we can learn from eachother dats why we all r here to learn any hows don't worry we learn from mistakes
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Miss Kismat
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«Reply #52 on: November 23, 2004, 12:50:51 PM »
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Kaun kehte hai ki humney tumko bhula rakha hai. Teri tasveer ko humney seeney se laga rakha hai.
Hoton pe koi kiss nahin,
aankhon mein koi aansu nahin.
Humney har raaz seeney
mein chuppa rakha hai.

Dekhlo aaine mein humari chehra nazar aayega.
Dekhlo humari yaadein chor kar,
humara gayaal nahi jayega.
Dekhlo apne dil mein, humara naam
waha painge.
Dekhlo humain bhula ke,
magar bhula na paonge.
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«Reply #53 on: November 23, 2004, 12:54:33 PM »
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mere saath jugnu hain humsafar, magar is sharar ki bisaat kya
yeh charaagh koi charaagh hai, na jala hua na bujha hua



mujhe maloom hai uska thikaana phir kahan hoga
parinda aasmaan chooney me jab naakaam ho jaaye
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«Reply #54 on: November 23, 2004, 02:44:43 PM »
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Jeevan kya hai.
Chalta bhirta hai, ek khilona hai.
Do aankho ne,
ek se hasna, ek se rona.
Jo jee chahe woh mil jaaye,
kab aisa hota hai?
Har Jeevan Jeevan me likha samjhota
hota hai.  :oops:

DOOR TAK JAHAN BHI NAZAR JATI HAI,
GAM KI PARCHAYIAN NAZAR AATI HAI.
MERE DIL KE AAINE KE HAR TUKDE MEIN
TERI TASVIR NAZAR AATI HAI.
 tongue3

Wahhhh LoveBites...!!!  :D
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«Reply #55 on: November 23, 2004, 03:43:15 PM »
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Kuch Bhi na Kaha Kuch Keh bhi Gaye. Kuch Kehte Kehte re bhi Gaye.
Ish Mehfil mein, dil hi dil mein aap se Jaaneman. Kis Ka hai Kya Nishaana...Kisne Yahan yeh Jaana Yaar Sanam...Kuch Sharmaake, kuch Ghabraake aapse Jaaneman kuch bhi na kaha, kuch keh bhi gaye. Kuch Kehte Kehte reh bhi gaye..Ish Mehfil mein, dil hi dil mein aapse jaaneman... Puzzled !

Naseeba de khel ve bade ajeeb ve...Hai Lambi judaaiyan dila de kareeb ve. Koi Jeet jaaye Mohabbat ki Baazi, kisi ko na bhaaye khushi yeh zara bhi khushi yeh zara bhi..Sajna main Haari...Aaa Jao ek vaari...DIL lagda nahin tere bin haaniya...!!!!!!  :oops:
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«Reply #56 on: November 23, 2004, 03:57:05 PM »
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niceeee Usual Smile
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«Reply #57 on: November 23, 2004, 04:18:53 PM »
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wow wow wow all...... sabhi logon ne bahot bahot bahot accha likha hai ....
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«Reply #58 on: November 23, 2004, 08:48:18 PM »
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Chaand hi qismat mein na ho,
hum kaise ulji raat karen.
Kal murza jayega lekin,
yadon main chehre ye kilega.
Sapno mein shehnayee bajegi,
sajni se saajan bhi milega.
Such hona inka mumkin nahin,
phir kyon sapno ki baat karein.  :oops:  Puzzled !
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«Reply #59 on: November 23, 2004, 08:51:18 PM »
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WAH BAHOOT KHOOB!!!
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