----- /// Aarzoo Dil Ki /// ----- klaskar

by klaskar on July 16, 2010, 09:01:02 AM
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kuch tumhaari mohabbat ka asar yun humpe bhi hai,
betabi wahan hai to kuch bekarari yahaan bhi hai,

sambhala tha arse se dil ko kisi khaas ke liye,
talash thi jis dil ki wo shayad tumhaara hi hai,

tasveer tumhaari is dil me bana to rakhi hai humne,
use chahat se rangne ki tamanna kuch hamari bhi hai,

fizaaon me mohabbat ki mehek kuch is tarha si hai,
ki shama pe mar mitne ko tayyar ye parwana bhi hai,

tum aajao ki ab nahi sahi jati ye doori aur humse,
tumhe baahon me bharne ki tamanna hamari bhi hai,

tadap rahe hain tumhe paane ke liye hum barso se,
tumhe apna banane ki aarzoo dil me hamare bhi hai...


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«Reply #1 on: July 16, 2010, 09:35:04 AM »
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iski tareef to hum kar chuke hain Hriday ji.....

sach me bht hi khub hai aapki saadgi
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«Reply #2 on: July 16, 2010, 02:14:38 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji...sach kahu to main aapka shukraguzaar hoon.. kai din se kuch likha hi nahi ja raha tha.. aaj aapke likhe huye ka jawaab dene ke bahane kai kavitaayein likh daali maine... shukriya...!!!
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«Reply #3 on: July 16, 2010, 02:30:30 PM »
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Aaye Haye.. Madhosh kar Dene wale Alfaaz Likhe hain kapil Bhai.. ek ek Lafz me mohabbat bhari hai.. Behad Hi Pyaari bhari aur Lajawab Peshkash Hai.. Applause Applause


Daad Kubool karen..   Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley




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«Reply #4 on: July 16, 2010, 02:47:09 PM »
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yehi to main kehne wali thi KALASKAR ji.....wakai aapke sath likh kar kuch wakai me achchi kavitain likh li hain....ummeed karti hun ye silsila yunhi chalta rahega aur hum dono achchi kavita likhte rahenge sath milkar.....

shukriya jo aapne itni khubsurti se sath diya hamara
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«Reply #5 on: July 16, 2010, 09:43:49 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Mann ji... maine aapki daad dil se qubool ki...!!!

Quote from: Mann on July 16, 2010, 02:30:30 PM
Aaye Haye.. Madhosh kar Dene wale Alfaaz Likhe hain kapil Bhai.. ek ek Lafz me mohabbat bhari hai.. Behad Hi Pyaari bhari aur Lajawab Peshkash Hai.. Applause Applause


Daad Kubool karen..   Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley




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«Reply #6 on: July 16, 2010, 09:44:35 PM »
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Kasak ji shayad aapne galat jagaah post kar diya apna comment... shayad aap Khwaish ji ko likh rahi thi.... Usual Smile

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 16, 2010, 02:47:09 PM
yehi to main kehne wali thi Khwaish ji.....wakai aapke sath likh kar kuch wakai me achchi kavitain likh li hain....ummeed karti hun ye silsila yunhi chalta rahega aur hum dono achchi kavita likhte rahenge sath milkar.....

shukriya jo aapne itni khubsurti se sath diya hamara
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«Reply #7 on: July 17, 2010, 01:12:25 AM »
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Kapil Dosttttt...Behaddddddddddddddddd khubsoorat likha hai apne...Bahaut achi tamanaein aur arzuon ka zikr kiya hai apne...InshAllah tamam puri hongi...Dua hai...

Maafi chahunga mohobat ki iss hawa main, dard ki mehak jhonk raha hoon...

Tamanaein toh yeh tamam meri bhi hai Rahim,
Jo puri kar sakta hai inhe woh hone nahin deta...!

Khush rahiye aur likte rahiye!
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«Reply #8 on: July 17, 2010, 02:15:58 AM »
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Bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai aap ki Kapil
Ashish hai ki har aarzoo dil ki teri puri ho
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«Reply #9 on: July 17, 2010, 04:48:45 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on July 16, 2010, 09:01:02 AM
kuch tumhaari mohabbat ka asar yun humpe bhi hai,
betabi wahan hai to kuch bekarari yahaan bhi hai,

sambhala tha arse se dil ko kisi khaas ke liye,
talash thi jis dil ki wo shayad tumhaara hi hai,

tasveer tumhaari is dil me bana to rakhi hai humne,
use chahat se rangne ki tamanna kuch hamari bhi hai,

fizaaon me mohabbat ki mehek kuch is tarha si hai,
ki shama pe mar mitne ko tayyar ye parwana bhi hai,

tum aajao ki ab nahi sahi jati ye doori aur humse,
tumhe baahon me bharne ki tamanna hamari bhi hai,

tadap rahe hain tumhe paane ke liye hum barso se,
tumhe apna banane ki aarzoo dil me hamare bhi hai...


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Its too good ....klaskar Ji ! nice creation.....dil se daad !
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«Reply #10 on: July 17, 2010, 05:34:13 AM »
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Klaskar jii bhut khoob eshsaas............achi kaawish par daad hazir hai qubool kareiN, likhte rahiye



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«Reply #11 on: July 17, 2010, 06:17:47 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rahim bhai...!!!

Quote from: -Rahim- on July 17, 2010, 01:12:25 AM
Kapil Dosttttt...Behaddddddddddddddddd khubsoorat likha hai apne...Bahaut achi tamanaein aur arzuon ka zikr kiya hai apne...InshAllah tamam puri hongi...Dua hai...

Maafi chahunga mohobat ki iss hawa main, dard ki mehak jhonk raha hoon...

Tamanaein toh yeh tamam meri bhi hai Rahim,
Jo puri kar sakta hai inhe woh hone nahin deta...!

Khush rahiye aur likte rahiye!
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«Reply #12 on: July 17, 2010, 06:18:14 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on July 17, 2010, 02:15:58 AM
Bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai aap ki Kapil
Ashish hai ki har aarzoo dil ki teri puri ho
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«Reply #13 on: July 17, 2010, 06:18:51 AM »
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Thank u so much Naresh ji...!!!

Quote from: Anshumali on July 17, 2010, 04:48:45 AM

Its too good ....klaskar Ji ! nice creation.....dil se daad !
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«Reply #14 on: July 17, 2010, 06:19:32 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Aslam ji... maine aapki daad dil se qubool ki...!!!

Quote from: aaina on July 17, 2010, 05:34:13 AM
Klaskar jii bhut khoob eshsaas............achi kaawish par daad hazir hai qubool kareiN, likhte rahiye



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