Aasoo Ghayel ka.......(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on February 15, 2009, 01:13:38 PM
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Tujhse rishta nahi koi, tu q apna sa lagta hain
Pukare nam koi tera, to mera nam lagta hain

Tujhe dekha nahi tujhe jana nahi, tu har waqt pass lagta hain
Teri pehchaan bas itni hain, tu bohat khas lagta hain

Dard tujme jo chipa hain, who q apna sa lagta hain
Aasoo GHAYEL ka, teri aakh me tehra sa lagta hain

-Sajid Ghayel-
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«Reply #1 on: February 15, 2009, 01:31:56 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 15, 2009, 01:13:38 PM
Tujhse rishta nahi koi, tu q apna sa lagta hain
Pukare nam koi tera, to mera nam lagta hain

Tujhe dekha nahi tujhe jana nahi, tu har waqt pass lagta hain
Teri pehchaan bas itni hain, tu bohat khas lagta hain

Dard tujme jo chipa hain, who q apna sa lagta hain
Aasoo GHAYEL ka, teri aakh me tehra sa lagta hain

-Sajid Ghayel-


wah kya kahein ab kya likh diya hia aapne..

Aasoo GHAYEL ka, teri aakh me tehra sa lagta hia,

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee....


Socha nahi samjha nahi phir bhi na jaane kyon,
tera likha hua har lavz paak sa lagta hai,

Khada Hua hai Jheel ke us kinaare pe Phir bhi,
Tera Saaya hamesha mere aas paas sa lagta hai...
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«Reply #2 on: February 15, 2009, 04:16:31 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 15, 2009, 01:13:38 PM
Tujhse rishta nahi koi, tu q apna sa lagta hain
Pukare nam koi tera, to mera nam lagta hain

Tujhe dekha nahi tujhe jana nahi, tu har waqt pass lagta hain
Teri pehchaan bas itni hain, tu bohat khas lagta hain

Dard tujme jo chipa hain, who q apna sa lagta hain
Aasoo GHAYEL ka, teri aakh me tehra sa lagta hain

-Sajid Ghayel-


Bohot pyara likha hai aapne Sajid Ji Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: February 15, 2009, 04:17:04 PM »
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Quote from: angel4u on February 15, 2009, 01:31:56 PM
wah kya kahein ab kya likh diya hia aapne..

Aasoo GHAYEL ka, teri aakh me tehra sa lagta hia,

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee....


Socha nahi samjha nahi phir bhi na jaane kyon,
tera likha hua har lavz paak sa lagta hai,

Khada Hua hai Jheel ke us kinaare pe Phir bhi,
Tera Saaya hamesha mere aas paas sa lagta hai...


Very nice reply Angel
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«Reply #4 on: February 15, 2009, 04:18:16 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 15, 2009, 01:13:38 PM
Tujhse rishta nahi koi, tu q apna sa lagta hain
Pukare nam koi tera, to mera nam lagta hain

Tujhe dekha nahi tujhe jana nahi, tu har waqt pass lagta hain
Teri pehchaan bas itni hain, tu bohat khas lagta hain

Dard tujme jo chipa hain, who q apna sa lagta hain
Aasoo GHAYEL ka, teri aakh me tehra sa lagta hain

-Sajid Ghayel-


Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause wah wah wah wah!!!Sajid jee kamal ka likha hai apne....too good!!!

dhoor hone ke bawajud tu thoda paas lagta hai,
bewaffa hone ke bewajud tu mera dildar lagta hai...

arey pyaar nahin paa saka main toh teri kya galti hai zalim,
bewaffai ke in ilzaamon ke saath tu toh ek murja hua sa gulab lagta hai...

har roz thokar khata hai tu ashiqon ke darbaron se,
mujhe toh tu bhi pyaar ka pyaasa lagta hai...
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«Reply #5 on: February 15, 2009, 04:20:05 PM »
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Quote from: angel4u on February 15, 2009, 01:31:56 PM
wah kya kahein ab kya likh diya hia aapne..

Aasoo GHAYEL ka, teri aakh me tehra sa lagta hia,

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee....


Socha nahi samjha nahi phir bhi na jaane kyon,
tera likha hua har lavz paak sa lagta hai,

Khada Hua hai Jheel ke us kinaare pe Phir bhi,
Tera Saaya hamesha mere aas paas sa lagta hai...


Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: February 15, 2009, 04:21:16 PM »
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Quote from: dead heart on February 15, 2009, 04:18:16 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause wah wah wah wah!!!Sajid jee kamal ka likha hai apne....too good!!!

dhoor hone ke bawajud tu thoda paas lagta hai,
bewaffa hone ke bewajud tu mera dildar lagta hai...

arey pyaar nahin paa saka main toh teri kya galti hai zalim,
bewaffai ke in ilzaamon ke saath tu toh ek murja hua sa gulab lagta hai...

har roz thokar khata hai tu ashiqon ke darbaron se,
mujhe toh tu bhi pyaar ka pyaasa lagta hai...







Bohot achcha reply likha hai aapne, Heart
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«Reply #7 on: February 15, 2009, 04:23:08 PM »
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Shukriya Talat jee
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«Reply #8 on: February 15, 2009, 04:34:25 PM »
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Bohat Achche Ghayal Bhai,.
Nice One,.

And Nice Oen Rahim Bhai,.
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«Reply #9 on: February 15, 2009, 04:44:37 PM »
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Shukriya Azeem bhaijan...
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«Reply #10 on: February 17, 2009, 09:06:43 AM »
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Quote from: angel4u on February 15, 2009, 01:31:56 PM
wah kya kahein ab kya likh diya hia aapne..

Aasoo GHAYEL ka, teri aakh me tehra sa lagta hia,

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee....


Socha nahi samjha nahi phir bhi na jaane kyon,
tera likha hua har lavz paak sa lagta hai,

Khada Hua hai Jheel ke us kinaare pe Phir bhi,
Tera Saaya hamesha mere aas paas sa lagta hai...


Mere sher tumhe pasand aaye mere shero ki Khushnasibi hain and as always beautiful line by u.  Clapping Smiley

Quote from: Celmira on February 15, 2009, 04:16:31 PM
Bohot pyara likha hai aapne Sajid Ji Applause Applause

Bohat Shukriyaan Talat....

Quote from: dead heart on February 15, 2009, 04:18:16 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause wah wah wah wah!!!Sajid jee kamal ka likha hai apne....too good!!!

dhoor hone ke bawajud tu thoda paas lagta hai,
bewaffa hone ke bewajud tu mera dildar lagta hai...

arey pyaar nahin paa saka main toh teri kya galti hai zalim,
bewaffai ke in ilzaamon ke saath tu toh ek murja hua sa gulab lagta hai...

har roz thokar khata hai tu ashiqon ke darbaron se,
mujhe toh tu bhi pyaar ka pyaasa lagta hai...


Nawazish Karam dost and thanks for your beautiful lines  Clapping Smiley

Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 15, 2009, 04:34:25 PM
Bohat Achche Ghayal Bhai,.
Nice One,.

And Nice Oen Rahim Bhai,.

Thank You Chote.....
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«Reply #11 on: February 17, 2009, 11:35:56 PM »
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tujhse risha nhi koi, tu q apna sa lagta hai
pukare naam koi tera, to mera naam lagta hai



kia baat hai sajid sahab bhut khoob kaha hai janaab.........very nice.............
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«Reply #12 on: February 18, 2009, 03:49:56 PM »
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Ur welcome Sajid saheb
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«Reply #13 on: February 18, 2009, 06:39:28 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on February 17, 2009, 11:35:56 PM
tujhse risha nhi koi, tu q apna sa lagta hai
pukare naam koi tera, to mera naam lagta hai

kia baat hai sajid sahab bhut khoob kaha hai janaab.........very nice.............


Izzat dene ka bohat bohat shukriyaan Aslam..
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«Reply #14 on: February 19, 2009, 06:25:58 AM »
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ary sajid sahab ur most welcome aap ki poetry hai hi daad ke qabil to na cahte huwai bhi kia kia jaye kambakht dil manta hi nhi tareef kiye baghair.......................................

tum jo likhte ho to kai dil bhi machalte honge
dagmagate huway kai log kai sambhalte honge
aisa jaadu hai teri shayri mai ey aslam
wo bnke shma tere intezaar mai pighlte honge
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