Aasoo Ghayel ka.......(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on February 15, 2009, 01:13:38 PM
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«Reply #15 on: February 19, 2009, 07:28:20 AM »
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ary sajid sahab ur most welcome aap ki poetry hai hi daad ke qabil to na cahte huwai bhi kia kia jaye kambakht dil manta hi nhi tareef kiye baghair.......................................

tum jo likhte ho to kai dil bhi machalte honge
dagmagate huway kai log kai sambhalte honge
aisa jaadu hai teri shayri mai ey aslam
wo bnke shma tere intezaar mai pighlte honge


Bilkul mere bhai yaqeeqan kaiee shamao ko shaheed kiya hoga ab tak tumne  DOH well achcha hain hum parwane hain  Giggle bohat khoobsurat likhte ho tum. Khuda tumhe bohat khushiya de......
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«Reply #16 on: February 19, 2009, 09:53:05 AM »
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tum jo likhte ho to kai dil bhi machalte honge
dagmagate huway kai log kai sambhalte honge
aisa jaadu hai teri shayri mai ey aslam
wo bnke shma tere intezaar mai pighlte honge


bahaut khoob Aslam jee...

beshak kuch pighalte honge hum toh roh padte hai,
tujhe padkar ae dost;teri shayri main Rahim ko dhundne lagte hai...
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«Reply #17 on: February 19, 2009, 10:15:40 AM »
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Tujhse rishta nahi koi, tu q apna sa lagta hain
Pukare nam koi tera, to mera nam lagta hain

Tujhe dekha nahi tujhe jana nahi, tu har waqt pass lagta hain
Teri pehchaan bas itni hain, tu bohat khas lagta hain

Dard tujme jo chipa hain, who q apna sa lagta hain
Aasoo GHAYEL ka, teri aakh me tehra sa lagta hain

-Sajid Ghayel-


Very nice Sajid ji Applause Applause
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aaina
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«Reply #18 on: February 19, 2009, 12:58:19 PM »
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Bilkul mere bhai yaqeeqan kaiee shamao ko shaheed kiya hoga ab tak tumne  DOH well achcha hain hum parwane hain  Giggle bohat khoobsurat likhte ho tum. Khuda tumhe bohat khushiya de......

shukriya sajid sahab.......keh di na ustadon wali baat arry sir ji abhi to bhut kuch seekhna hai aapse, yaqeenan aapki srparsti se hamesha mustafeed hota rahunga.........azhar inayati sahab ka ek shair yaad aa rha hai jo gaye waqto ki trjumani karta hai mehfil e aadab ke baare mai jo mere paas ho kar nhi bhatka......dua karin ki Allah mujhay in aadabon se nawazay....

izhaar par to pehle bhi pabandiyaan na thin
lakin bado ke saamne hum bolte na thay(azhar inayti)
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #19 on: March 10, 2009, 09:30:50 AM »
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shukriya sajid sahab.......keh di na ustadon wali baat arry sir ji abhi to bhut kuch seekhna hai aapse, yaqeenan aapki srparsti se hamesha mustafeed hota rahunga.........azhar inayati sahab ka ek shair yaad aa rha hai jo gaye waqto ki trjumani karta hai mehfil e aadab ke baare mai jo mere paas ho kar nhi bhatka......dua karin ki Allah mujhay in aadabon se nawazay....

izhaar par to pehle bhi pabandiyaan na thin
lakin bado ke saamne hum bolte na thay(azhar inayti)

Thanks for this beautiful sharing Aslam......Khuda khush rakhe tumhe.
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