" AaTi kYa kHaNdaLa ? "

by Rishi on October 28, 2004, 03:26:39 AM

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Rishi

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Sorry for posting it twice....hope u people won't mind Usual Smile

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bade zor ki barsaat thi, saawan ka mahina wo suhana tha,
aise mein kya gazab un ka wo mujh se mod pe takrana tha,
uff wo baarish ki boondon ka un ki julfon se gaalon pe tapakna,
kya khoob us par wo un ka simat kar haule se sharmaana tha....
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nd then....
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isi bekhayaali mein hum jaane kab keh gaye.."aati kya khandala?"
walaah kya sitam us zaalim ka jawaab mein chaanta lagana tha....
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Neelam

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" AaTi kYa kHaNdaLa ? "

«Reply #1 on: October 28, 2004, 06:22:48 AM »

nice Rishi


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Neelam

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" AaTi kYa kHaNdaLa ? "

«Reply #2 on: October 28, 2004, 06:23:08 AM »

nice Rishi


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nishita

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" AaTi kYa kHaNdaLa ? "

«Reply #3 on: October 28, 2004, 07:45:07 AM »

funny section na?


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Fantasy

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" AaTi kYa kHaNdaLa ? "

«Reply #4 on: October 28, 2004, 10:01:28 AM »

good rishi


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Rishi

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" AaTi kYa kHaNdaLa ? "

«Reply #5 on: October 29, 2004, 02:28:27 AM »

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Thanx everyone !
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nd no Nishita, it's not for funny section. the poem is romantic ( see the first stanza) , i just wrote the last two lines in case any one wants to make fun outta it nd anyway the last two lines had no beauty if written somewhere seprately....right Huh?

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now this is funny....
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kudiyaan wicho koi Sassi labda, koi labda Heer,
assi te yaaro Sahiba labni, te kuttne oh de veer....
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Tosha

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«Reply #6 on: October 29, 2004, 07:04:56 AM »


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Rishi

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" AaTi kYa kHaNdaLa ? "

«Reply #7 on: October 30, 2004, 05:24:48 AM »

sorry people, i hope everyone understands that much punjaabi, otherwise i better translate.....
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ladkiyon mein koi Sassi dhoondhta hai, koi dhoondhta hai heer,
mujhe to yaaron sahiba dhoondhni hai, aur pittne us ke veer(bhai)....
( pittne - beat )
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chaand bhi tera, saare sitaare bhi tere,
ye wadiyan sari, ye saare nazaare tere,
meri saansein teri, mere saare waade tere,
meri bahein teri, mere saare sahaare tere,
do jahaan ki har khushi ho tujh ko haasil,
maangi dil ne dua jab bhi utthe haath mere.....
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