~~~Ab Jaan Ban Gaye Ho ~~~:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

Pooja

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Ruki hue zindagi ki patwaar ban gaye ho
Pahle bane hum, phir humdum, ab jaan ban gaye ho

Pata na chale waqat ka, meri Subah-O-Sham ban gaye ho
Kadakti dhoop thi zindagi, ek thundi chaw ban gaye ho

De gaye ansoo jo kabhi hua karte the apno main
Tham kar ajj hath mera, meri muskaan ban gaye ho

Ruki hue zindagi ki patwaar ban gaye ho
Pahle bane hum, phir humdum, ab jaan ban gaye ho….


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Roja

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Re: ~~~Ab Jaan Ban Gaye Ho ~~~

«Reply #1 on: April 09, 2009, 02:56:43 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on April 08, 2009, 08:00:58 PM

Aaahaaa... pehla do line padkar aap meri Jaan ban gayi ho... reply karne ko dil kar raha hai.. but waqt ki kami hai...


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: ~~~Ab Jaan Ban Gaye Ho ~~~

«Reply #2 on: April 09, 2009, 04:08:32 AM »

Bohat khoob Pooja..


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deepika_divya

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Re: ~~~Ab Jaan Ban Gaye Ho ~~~

«Reply #3 on: April 09, 2009, 06:14:59 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on April 08, 2009, 08:00:58 PM

So sweet Pooja di.. bahoot hi pyara likha hai aapne.


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karndhar

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Re: ~~~Ab Jaan Ban Gaye Ho ~~~

«Reply #4 on: April 09, 2009, 07:27:22 AM »

Very sweet poem, Pooja Ji !!!!!!!


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k.shael

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Re: ~~~Ab Jaan Ban Gaye Ho ~~~

«Reply #5 on: April 09, 2009, 08:21:03 AM »

Bahut Hi Pyaar Se Aur Bahut Hi Pyara Likha hai Didi icon_flower

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Shally.


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Re: ~~~Ab Jaan Ban Gaye Ho ~~~

«Reply #6 on: April 09, 2009, 02:21:10 PM »

Nice One Pooja Sis,. Har baar Ki taraah,.


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Pooja

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Re: ~~~Ab Jaan Ban Gaye Ho ~~~

«Reply #7 on: April 09, 2009, 03:41:28 PM »

Quote from: Roja on April 09, 2009, 02:56:43 AM

Aaahaaa... pehla do line padkar aap meri Jaan ban gayi ho... reply karne ko dil kar raha hai.. but waqt ki kami hai...

Thanks Roja!!!


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Pooja

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Re: ~~~Ab Jaan Ban Gaye Ho ~~~

«Reply #8 on: April 09, 2009, 03:43:13 PM »

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 09, 2009, 04:08:32 AM

Bohat khoob Pooja..

Thanks Sajid!!!

Quote from: Sophi on April 09, 2009, 06:14:59 AM

So sweet Pooja di.. bahoot hi pyara likha hai aapne.

Thanks you so much Sophi!!

Quote from: karndhar on April 09, 2009, 07:27:22 AM

Very sweet poem, Pooja Ji !!!!!!!

Shukaria karndhar ji!!

Quote from: k.shael on April 09, 2009, 08:21:03 AM

Bahut Hi Pyaar Se Aur Bahut Hi Pyara Likha hai Didi icon_flower

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Shally.

Thanks Shally!!

Quote from: Jaanasheen on April 09, 2009, 02:21:10 PM

Nice One Pooja Sis,. Har baar Ki taraah,.

Thanks Lil bro!!!


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Talat

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Re: ~~~Ab Jaan Ban Gaye Ho ~~~

«Reply #9 on: April 09, 2009, 03:57:37 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on April 08, 2009, 08:00:58 PM

Kya baat hai Pooja Applause

Aajkal aapko Khumar-e-Ishq main padhna achcha lagta hai... !


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Pooja

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Re: ~~~Ab Jaan Ban Gaye Ho ~~~

«Reply #10 on: April 09, 2009, 04:04:09 PM »

Thanks Celmira.... jahan acha sath mil jaaye likhne ko... waha kalam chal padti hai!!!


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angel4u

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Re: ~~~Ab Jaan Ban Gaye Ho ~~~

«Reply #11 on: April 09, 2009, 04:50:28 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on April 08, 2009, 08:00:58 PM

Bahut hi khoobsurat Pooja Di..

Ek chhoti si koshish kar rahi hoon..

Meri zindagi mein rahe hamesha shaamil se hi ajnabiyon ki tarah,
pata na tha ke itne kareeb aaoge, ke mujhme hi sama gaye ho tum,

kuch dardki badliyaan kuch ashqonki barsaat kuch dinose hai lapata,
dilke aasman pe chha ke mere mausamon ki jaan ban gaye ho tum...


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_Vicky_

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Re: ~~~Ab Jaan Ban Gaye Ho ~~~

«Reply #12 on: April 09, 2009, 05:19:54 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on April 08, 2009, 08:00:58 PM

Oye Hoye.. Kya Kya Bana diya aapne Apne Dilbar Ko.. Hahahahaha
Bahut Accha Likha Hai Humesha Ki Tarah..!! Applause

Kis Tarah Aaun Tu Bata, Tujhse Milne Main Sanam,
Dil Hai Mera Pareshan Behad, Teri Jaan Ki Qasam...

Aankhen Bhi ab To, Tere Deedar Ki Tamannaai Hain,
Intzaar Nahi Ab Hota Zaalim, Teri Jaan Ki Qasam....

Ho Kuch Aisa, Tu Mujhme Aur Main Tujhme Sama Jaun,
Bas Main Aur Tu Ban Jayen Hum, Teri Jaan Ki Qasam..!!

**~** Mann **~**


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Re: ~~~Ab Jaan Ban Gaye Ho ~~~

«Reply #13 on: April 10, 2009, 10:54:40 AM »

Nice One Huzaina Sis, And Mann Ji,.


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Re: ~~~Ab Jaan Ban Gaye Ho ~~~

«Reply #14 on: April 10, 2009, 11:25:51 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on April 08, 2009, 08:00:58 PM

Bahut khoob Pooja di
kamaal likha hai aapne Applause


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