AB TO SUN LE KHUDA

by tinda on March 13, 2008, 12:17:18 PM
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tinda
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aye khuda! ankhon ko kuch aisi khudai de
jidhar dekhun bas wo hi dikhai de !
kaash aisa talmel ho hamara hawa se
use pukarun aur sirf usi ko sunai de !!


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«Reply #1 on: March 13, 2008, 02:42:04 PM »
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Wah Tinda ji... bahoot jabardast  janab!! char line mai poori Ishae-e-kitab kah di apne!!! Good sharing!!
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chitra
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«Reply #2 on: March 16, 2008, 02:08:18 PM »
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khudajee sun lijiye inki
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tinda
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«Reply #3 on: March 17, 2008, 09:13:46 AM »
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thanx pooja for your words! and chitra, duwa karta hun khuda se meri na sahi aapki bat hi sun le, thanx,

tu laakh duur nazar ke sahi,
dil se duur ek pal bhi nahin!
sansen bhulun lena sahi,
tujhe bhulun ek pal bhi nahin!!
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Talat
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«Reply #4 on: March 17, 2008, 11:12:46 AM »
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Bohot khoob Tinda ...!!
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tinda
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«Reply #5 on: March 17, 2008, 11:36:32 AM »
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shukriya zarra nawazi ka Talat ji!
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«Reply #6 on: March 17, 2008, 11:45:39 AM »
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aye khuda! ankhon ko kuch aisi khudai de
jidhar dekhun bas wo hi dikhai de !
kaash aisa talmel ho hamara hawa se
use pukarun aur sirf usi ko sunai de !!


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Beautiful.. Very Nice Sharing, Tinda...

Another version of somewhat same lines, which were in my Diary... icon_smile

"Kaash Aisa Taalmeil Sakuut aur sada mein ho,
Usko pukaarun to sirf usi ko sunaai de...
Dena hai to nigaah ko kuch aaisi rasaai de,
Dekhun main aaina, to mujhe "Tu" dekhaai de...
Kaash is mukaam par pahuncha de uska pyaar,
Wo kamyaab hone par mujhko badhaai de"

(NM)
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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: March 17, 2008, 03:43:51 PM »
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good sharing Shikha!!!
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tinda
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«Reply #8 on: March 17, 2008, 05:10:22 PM »
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thanx..Shikha ji...

aapke jawab ka andaz hume khub bhaya
shukriya jo aaine me ye aks dikhaya..
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«Reply #9 on: March 18, 2008, 04:50:18 AM »
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icon_smile

Thanks Pooja di and Tinda..
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