Ab, tum jaaougey kahaan?

by abdbundeli on October 19, 2008, 08:46:37 AM
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Ab, tum jaaougey kahaan?
Chhorhou ye chhal-chhand!
Tumhain qaid kar hrudya mein,
Dwaar kiyaa hai band!!

        - Rawatiya/abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: October 19, 2008, 10:15:09 AM »
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Nice One And Ji,.

Band Karke Bhi Darwaaze Mohabbat Rok Na Paaoge,.
ye To Wo Hawa Hai,.
Jiske Liye Ek Daraar Bhi Kaafi hai Andar Aane Ke Liye,.
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«Reply #2 on: October 19, 2008, 12:08:45 PM »
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Nice One And Ji,.
Band Karke Bhi Darwaaze Mohabbat Rok Na Paaoge,.
ye To Wo Hawa Hai,.
Jiske Liye Ek Daraar Bhi Kaafi hai Andar Aane Ke Liye,.
Shukriyah Jaanasheen ji!
Janaab, darwaazah baahar sey band kiyaa gayaa hai, andar sey naheen! Mohabbat ko andar aanaa ho, kundah kholey aur andar aa jaaye! Leikin, jo andar hai, wo baahar naheen jaa paaye: sirf itnaa hi itizaam kiyaa gayaa hai! Mahaatmaa 'Soor Das' kaa eik dohaa hai:
"Haath chhurhaaye jaat hou, nibal jaan key moya!
 Heeye mein soun jaahugey, marad badoungou toya!!"


Dil kaa darwaazah muqaffal hai: kahaan jaaougey?
Yeh koyee qaid naheen hai, ki, torh paaougey?

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«Reply #3 on: October 20, 2008, 07:26:03 AM »
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Great Bhaijaan,.
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«Reply #4 on: October 20, 2008, 03:35:13 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Abd Ji Applause
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«Reply #5 on: October 20, 2008, 05:56:09 PM »
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Thanks Celmira ji!
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«Reply #6 on: October 20, 2008, 08:35:35 PM »
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Iss Qaid se badhkar koi rihaayi nahin
Tere dil ke paar koi raah nazar aayi nahin !!
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«Reply #7 on: October 21, 2008, 04:57:10 AM »
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Celmira ji!
Qaidee hoon, rihaa honey kee khwaahish naheen jis ko:
Aagosh mein rahoon, ki dil mein; qaid rahoon mein!
Marzee hai us kee: jo usey karnaa ho, Woh karey;
Kuchh bhi to naheen chaahiye mujh ko, ki, kahoon mein!!

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«Reply #8 on: October 21, 2008, 05:00:01 AM »
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bahoot khoob Abd ji
nice lines celmira
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«Reply #9 on: October 21, 2008, 08:28:30 AM »
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Shukriyah Pooja ji!
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