Ab Yeh Aalam Hai!

by Shireen Hakani on May 09, 2012, 06:22:21 PM
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Tum Se Judai Ki Raaton Mein Ab Toh Yeh Aalam Hai,
Aankhe Thak Kar So Jati Hai, Par Dil Jaagta Rehta Hai,
Dil Ko Kabhi Sukun-O-Rahat Nahi Hoti Intezar Mein,
Dhakan Baad Mein, Naam Pehle Tumhara Dhadkta Hai..!!

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«Reply #2 on: May 10, 2012, 04:15:17 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: May 12, 2012, 06:32:07 PM »
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ThanX!
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«Reply #4 on: May 12, 2012, 06:54:38 PM »
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kuch sujhaav

3rd line mein "hoti" ki jagah "miltee"
4th line mein "dhadkta" ki jagah "aataa"
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«Reply #5 on: May 12, 2012, 06:59:17 PM »
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4th line i wanted to say that dhadkan se pehle naam unka aata hai, dhadkta hai...
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