ABB KE TERE SHAHER SE ...............REHAN MUBARAK "TANHAA"

by haan on October 13, 2010, 06:25:59 PM
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ABB KE TERE SHAHER SE BARE SOOGBAAR AAE !
[/color]FAQAT DIL THA APNA WO BHI HAAR AAE   !!
[/b][/color]YE KAH RAHE CHAMAN KE SUKHE HUE PHOOL !
[/color] DEKHE JO EK NAZAR TU UN PAR BAHAAR AAE!!
[/color] KAB MILA JAWAB KISI SIMT SE MUJHE    !
[/color] DASHT O SAHRA ME TUJH KO PUKAAR AAE !!
[/color] KABHI ITTEFAQ SE YE BHI ITTEFAQ HO   !
[/color] YAK BA YAK SAAMNE WO BE IKHTIYAAR AAE !
[/color]JO GUZREN KABHI WO RAHGUZAR SE APNI   !
[/color]RAASTE  ME  UNKE  MERA  MAZAAR  AAE   !!
[/b][/color]KISKE INTEZAAR ME HAIN DARIYA PE NIGAHEN !
[/color]KOI TO KASHTI GUZRE KOI TO PAAR AAE    !!
[/color]KABHI DEKHUN USE JO  EK NAZAR "TANHAA" !
[/color]DIL E BEQARAAR KO KUCHH TO QARAAR  AAE !!
[/color]REHAN MUBARAK "TANHAA" TILHAR .UP. INDIA
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«Reply #1 on: October 13, 2010, 07:23:42 PM »
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waahhhhhhhhhh bht khubb likha hai aapne rehaan ji...bht hi achcha....bas presentation bhi thik kar lijiye,,,
ye ghuchpuch me padhne me dikkat hoti hai....
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«Reply #2 on: October 13, 2010, 07:42:21 PM »
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bahut achha likha hai aapne Rehan sahab... bas ek baat ye ki kasak ji ki baaton par thoda dhyan dijiye... !

Intezar

waahhhhhhhhhh bht khubb likha hai aapne rehaan ji...bht hi achcha....bas presentation bhi thik kar lijiye,,,
ye ghuchpuch me padhne me dikkat hoti hai....

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«Reply #3 on: October 17, 2010, 03:16:17 PM »
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Janab Rihaan Sahab Aadab!

SHayad hi aapko pahele padhe ho... par aapki yeh kalaam behad khub hai janab..
Be Intehaan khoob aur umdaa ashaar kahe hai aapne

Aapki kalaam per dobaara aayeNge...
Abhi to chalte hai ... bus aap ise thik se paros nahi paye the so kuch humne thik kar diya hai shayad abhi log is thik se padh sakeN...Usual Smile

Bad emiN aate hai apna khayaal rakhiye..
Khush O aabad rahiye......
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile


ABB KE TERE SHAHER SE BARE SOOGBAAR AAE !
FAQAT DIL THA APNA WO BHI HAAR AAE   !!

YE KAH RAHE CHAMAN KE SUKHE HUE PHOOL !
DEKHE JO EK NAZAR TU UN PAR BAHAAR AAE!!

KAB MILA JAWAB KISI SIMT SE MUJHE    !
DASHT O SAHRA ME TUJH KO PUKAAR AAE !!

KABHI ITTEFAQ SE YE BHI ITTEFAQ HO   !
YAK BA YAK SAAMNE WO BE IKHTIYAAR AAE !

JO GUZREN KABHI WO RAHGUZAR SE APNI   !
RAASTE  ME  UNKE  MERA  MAZAAR  AAE   !!

KISKE INTEZAAR ME HAIN DARIYA PE NIGAHEN !
KOI TO KASHTI GUZRE KOI TO PAAR AAE    !!

KABHI DEKHUN USE JO  EK NAZAR "TANHAA"
DIL E BEQARAAR KO KUCHH TO QARAAR  AAE !!

REHAN MUBARAK "TANHAA" TILHAR .UP. INDIA


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«Reply #4 on: October 17, 2010, 05:05:05 PM »
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Rehan saaheb,
             Namaskaar!aap ke is behatareen kalaam ke liye dher see badhai saath hee is mehfil me aap ka dili swaagat hai.
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«Reply #5 on: October 17, 2010, 05:55:29 PM »
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Janab Aapki is khubtar Gazal ne hume yahaaN dobara khiNch laya... Usual Smile

Badi masarrat ho rahi hai aapki is umdaa gazal se ruberu hokar...

Chaliye aapki kalaam par aate hai ... Usual Smile   



ABB KE TERE SHAHER SE BARE SOOGBAAR AAE !
FAQAT DIL THA APNA WO BHI HAAR AAE   !!

Kia gazab ka matla kaha hai janab..
Bahut umdaa behad khoob... Daad Usual Smile     



YE KAH RAHE CHAMAN KE SUKHE HUE PHOOL !
DEKHE JO EK NAZAR TU UN PAR BAHAAR AAE!!

Waah behad khoob khayaal aur achchi bayaani lagi hume... Daad janab Daad   


KAB MILA JAWAB KISI SIMT SE MUJHE    !
DASHT O SAHRA ME TUJH KO PUKAAR AAE !!

Waah waah aur aik behtreen khayaal kia baat hai janab dil se daad hazir hai.. Usual Smile   


KABHI ITTEFAQ SE YE BHI ITTEFAQ HO   !
YAK BA YAK SAAMNE WO BE IKHTIYAAR AAE !

Kia gazab ka khayaal hai janab bahut umdaa..
Daad hazir hai... Par humne kabhi be Ikhtiyaar aae" aisa
lafz suna nahi hai... Par tarjumani meiN dekheN to sher behad
khoob khil raha hai.... Usual Smile     



JO GUZREN KABHI WO RAHGUZAR SE APNI   !
RAASTE  ME  UNKE  MERA  MAZAAR  AAE   !!

Janab sher achcha hai daad ... Usual Smile
HaaN Mazaar ke liye mera nahi meri istemaal hoNga.. Usual Smile   



KISKE INTEZAAR ME HAIN DARIYA PE NIGAHEN !
KOI TO KASHTI GUZRE KOI TO PAAR AAE    !!

Yeh bhi sher behad achcha laga.. Daad

Aik surat humare zaheN meiN bhi aayi is sher kii

Kis ke intezaar meiN haiN daryaa pe nigaaheN
KoyiN to kashti guzare aur is paar aaye     



KABHI DEKHUN USE JO  EK NAZAR "TANHAA"
DIL E BEQARAAR KO KUCHH TO QARAAR  AAE !!

Waah janab Waah dil khush kar diyaa aapke is sher ne Usual Smile hazaroN daad Usual Smile   


REHAN MUBARAK "TANHAA" TILHAR .UP. INDIA



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Janab aapki is kalaam ke tamaam ashaar behad umdaa lage hume.... Is khubsurat kalaam per dil se daad hazir hai....

Aise hi umda kalaamoN ke saath aage bhi aap aate raheNge..
Aur mehfil ko roshan karte raheNge yehi ummid .... Usual Smile

Khush O aabad rahiye....
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile   

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«Reply #6 on: October 17, 2010, 06:04:21 PM »
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maza aagaya parwaz ji ye aapka reply padhke too good ji
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«Reply #7 on: October 21, 2010, 08:19:54 AM »
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Janab Rihaan Sahab Aadab!

SHayad hi aapko pahele padhe ho... par aapki yeh kalaam behad khub hai janab..
Be Intehaan khoob aur umdaa ashaar kahe hai aapne

Aapki kalaam per dobaara aayeNge...
Abhi to chalte hai ... bus aap ise thik se paros nahi paye the so kuch humne thik kar diya hai shayad abhi log is thik se padh sakeN...Usual Smile

Bad emiN aate hai apna khayaal rakhiye..
Khush O aabad rahiye......
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile


ABB KE TERE SHAHER SE BARE SOOGBAAR AAE !
FAQAT DIL THA APNA WO BHI HAAR AAE   !!

YE KAH RAHE CHAMAN KE SUKHE HUE PHOOL !
DEKHE JO EK NAZAR TU UN PAR BAHAAR AAE!!

KAB MILA JAWAB KISI SIMT SE MUJHE    !
DASHT O SAHRA ME TUJH KO PUKAAR AAE !!

KABHI ITTEFAQ SE YE BHI ITTEFAQ HO   !
YAK BA YAK SAAMNE WO BE IKHTIYAAR AAE !

JO GUZREN KABHI WO RAHGUZAR SE APNI   !
RAASTE  ME  UNKE  MERA  MAZAAR  AAE   !!

KISKE INTEZAAR ME HAIN DARIYA PE NIGAHEN !
KOI TO KASHTI GUZRE KOI TO PAAR AAE    !!

KABHI DEKHUN USE JO  EK NAZAR "TANHAA"
DIL E BEQARAAR KO KUCHH TO QARAAR  AAE !!

REHAN MUBARAK "TANHAA" TILHAR .UP. INDIA



Janab Rihaan Sahab Aadab!

SHayad hi aapko pahele padhe ho... par aapki yeh kalaam behad khub hai janab..
Be Intehaan khoob aur umdaa ashaar kahe hai aapne

Aapki kalaam per dobaara aayeNge...
Abhi to chalte hai ... bus aap ise thik se paros nahi paye the so kuch humne thik kar diya hai shayad abhi log is thik se padh sakeN...Usual Smile

Bad emiN aate hai apna khayaal rakhiye..
Khush O aabad rahiye......
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile


ABB KE TERE SHAHER SE BARE SOOGBAAR AAE !
FAQAT DIL THA APNA WO BHI HAAR AAE   !!

YE KAH RAHE CHAMAN KE SUKHE HUE PHOOL !
DEKHE JO EK NAZAR TU UN PAR BAHAAR AAE!!

KAB MILA JAWAB KISI SIMT SE MUJHE    !
DASHT O SAHRA ME TUJH KO PUKAAR AAE !!

KABHI ITTEFAQ SE YE BHI ITTEFAQ HO   !
YAK BA YAK SAAMNE WO BE IKHTIYAAR AAE !

JO GUZREN KABHI WO RAHGUZAR SE APNI   !
RAASTE  ME  UNKE  MERA  MAZAAR  AAE   !!

KISKE INTEZAAR ME HAIN DARIYA PE NIGAHEN !
KOI TO KASHTI GUZRE KOI TO PAAR AAE    !!

KABHI DEKHUN USE JO  EK NAZAR "TANHAA"
DIL E BEQARAAR KO KUCHH TO QARAAR  AAE !!

REHAN MUBARAK "TANHAA" TILHAR .UP. INDIA



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«Reply #8 on: October 21, 2010, 08:37:25 AM »
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ABB KE TERE SHAHER SE BARE SOOGBAAR AAE !
FAQAT DIL THA APNA WO BHI HAAR AAE   !!

YE KAH RAHE CHAMAN KE SUKHE HUE PHOOL !
DEKHE JO EK NAZAR TU UN PAR BAHAAR AAE!!

KAB MILA JAWAB KISI SIMT SE MUJHE    !
DASHT O SAHRA ME TUJH KO PUKAAR AAE !!

KABHI ITTEFAQ SE YE BHI ITTEFAQ HO   !
YAK BA YAK SAAMNE WO BE IKHTIYAAR AAE !

JO GUZREN KABHI WO RAHGUZAR SE APNI   !
RAASTE  ME  UNKE  MERA  MAZAAR  AAE   !!

KISKE INTEZAAR ME HAIN DARIYA PE NIGAHEN !
KOI TO KASHTI GUZRE KOI TO PAAR AAE    !!

KABHI DEKHUN USE JO  EK NAZAR "TANHAA"
DIL E BEQARAAR KO KUCHH TO QARAAR  AAE !!

REHAN MUBARAK "TANHAA" TILHAR .UP. INDIA



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