Abhi na jaao chorh ke.....!

by Talat on March 03, 2008, 11:56:05 AM
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Mausam ka ishaara hai abhi na jaaiye
Tod ke yoon dil humara, na jaaiye !

Bahaar ke rang ghule hain fizaaon main
Bahaar ke aanchal se uth kar na jaaiye !

Zamane ki gardishen ruk to nahin jayengi
Dunya ki khatir humko chorh ke na jaaiye !

Jaane se aapke rooth ke baithe hain hum
Ab humko manane ki khatir hi na jaaiye !

Aankhon ki chamak humse chupate hain aap kyun
Aarzuon ne li hain angdaaiyan, abhi na jaaiye !
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honeyrose
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«Reply #1 on: March 03, 2008, 01:08:36 PM »
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Very nice Talat good one .. Usual Smile
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Shikha12
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«Reply #2 on: March 03, 2008, 02:34:35 PM »
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Mausam ka ishaara hai abhi na jaaiye
Tod ke yoon dil humara, na jaaiye !

Bahaar ke rang ghule hain fizaaon main
Bahaar ke aanchal se uth kar na jaaiye !

Zamane ki gardishen ruk to nahin jayengi
Dunya ki khatir humko chorh ke na jaaiye !

Jaane se aapke rooth ke baithe hain hum
Ab humko manane ki khatir hi na jaaiye !

Aankhon ki chamak humse chupate hain aap kyun
Aarzuon ne li hain angdaaiyan, abhi na jaaiye !


Lovely!!!! As Ever...
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Shikha12
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«Reply #3 on: March 03, 2008, 02:36:06 PM »
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Hayyat.e.Safar Main Tumbin Kahan Jaaun.
Banke Ziyah Teri Aankhon Main Bas Jaaun.
Har Saba Ho Aapki Khushiyon Bhari.e.Sanam
Kaas Gar Thoda Sukun Banke Dil Main Bas Paaun

Very Very Nice.. Majid..
Lage Raho Usual Smile
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Roja
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«Reply #4 on: March 03, 2008, 03:05:59 PM »
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Wah wah Talat siso.. bahut khoob bahut khoob...
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Roja
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«Reply #5 on: March 03, 2008, 03:06:55 PM »
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Hayyat.e.Safar Main Tumbin Kahan Jaaun.
Banke Ziyah Teri Aankhon Main Bas Jaaun.
Har Saba Ho Aapki Khushiyon Bhari.e.Sanam
Kaas Gar Thoda Sukun Banke Dil Main Bas Paaun

Lovely Majid ji.
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Roja
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«Reply #6 on: March 03, 2008, 03:24:03 PM »
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Ok.I will try Majid ji.

Apni palkon pe mujhko sajaye rakho
Karam mujh per yu hi tum banaye rakho

Pyar gairon main hi yu na baanta karo
Kuch to mere liye bhi bachaya rakho

Naam kagaz pe mera likho na likho
Dil main mujh ko magar tum basaya karo

Baat dil ki na laao juban per kabhi
Raj dil main sada ye chupaye rakho

Dhuriyan hai magar illthija hai yahi   (illthija = Request)
Yaad seene se meri lagaye rakho

Ye shehar chodkar mai chali jaun to
Raah main meri aankhein bichaye rakho

Hai kayal-e-hassi main "Roja" to fir
Nazar her ek nazar se churaye rakho



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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: March 03, 2008, 03:57:31 PM »
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bahoot khoob Talat, Majid and Roja!!!
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Talat
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«Reply #8 on: March 03, 2008, 03:59:35 PM »
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Thanks a lot Majid, Honey, Shikha, Roja and Pooja ! Usual Smile

Very very good reply Majid and beautiful creation Roja ! Keep them coming......


Continued.....


Aankhon ke doron ki laali sunati hai ek kahani,
Qissa mohabbat ka sunte jaaiye, abhi na jaaiye

Chalak rahi hai mai, labon ke in paimano se
Sharab-e-ishq na thukraiye, abhi na jaaiye

Bekhud mere qadam, mehv-e-khwab hoon
Mujhe hosh main na laaiye, abhi na jaaiye !
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Jiya
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«Reply #9 on: March 04, 2008, 08:59:33 AM »
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Mausam ka ishaara hai abhi na jaaiye
Tod ke yoon dil humara, na jaaiye !

Bahaar ke rang ghule hain fizaaon main
Bahaar ke aanchal se uth kar na jaaiye !

Zamane ki gardishen ruk to nahin jayengi
Dunya ki khatir humko chorh ke na jaaiye !

Jaane se aapke rooth ke baithe hain hum
Ab humko manane ki khatir hi na jaaiye !

Aankhon ki chamak humse chupate hain aap kyun
Aarzuon ne li hain angdaaiyan, abhi na jaaiye !


koi chahne waala ho is kadar hume,
to kaise use chhor ke jaa sakte hain hum,
aur jab koi roke itne pyaar se hume,
to ja ke bhi vapis laut ke aa sakte hain hum...

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> jiya ....

wow! vrey nice talat ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: March 04, 2008, 09:31:15 AM »
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Wohh kahin  Aate he nahin,jaaney ke bahaney sey
hum pahunchte har jagah Bahaney ke bahanon sey
ab toh aao, kahin na jao tum bhi kisi bahaney sey
jee lengey hum bhi kuchh din, Shyad issi bahaney sey...
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«Reply #11 on: March 04, 2008, 09:35:26 AM »
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Wohh kahin  Aate he nahin,jaaney ke bahaney sey
hum pahunchte har jagah Bahaney ke bahanon sey
ab toh aao, kahin na jao tum bhi kisi bahaney sey
jee lengey hum bhi kuchh din, Shyad issi bahaney sey...

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Zakhmola bohat khoob!!  Usual Smile
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Talat
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«Reply #12 on: March 04, 2008, 04:19:01 PM »
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Mausam ka ishaara hai abhi na jaaiye
Tod ke yoon dil humara, na jaaiye !

Bahaar ke rang ghule hain fizaaon main
Bahaar ke aanchal se uth kar na jaaiye !

Zamane ki gardishen ruk to nahin jayengi
Dunya ki khatir humko chorh ke na jaaiye !

Jaane se aapke rooth ke baithe hain hum
Ab humko manane ki khatir hi na jaaiye !

Aankhon ki chamak humse chupate hain aap kyun
Aarzuon ne li hain angdaaiyan, abhi na jaaiye !


koi chahne waala ho is kadar hume,
to kaise use chhor ke jaa sakte hain hum,
aur jab koi roke itne pyaar se hume,
to ja ke bhi vapis laut ke aa sakte hain hum...

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> jiya ....

wow! vrey nice talat ji Usual Smile

Thanks Jiya..and very nice reply Usual Smile
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Talat
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«Reply #13 on: March 04, 2008, 04:19:36 PM »
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Wohh kahin  Aate he nahin,jaaney ke bahaney sey
hum pahunchte har jagah Bahaney ke bahanon sey
ab toh aao, kahin na jao tum bhi kisi bahaney sey
jee lengey hum bhi kuchh din, Shyad issi bahaney sey...


Bohot khoob Zakhmola !
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Roja
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«Reply #14 on: March 05, 2008, 02:28:39 AM »
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Thanks a lot Majid, Honey, Shikha, Roja and Pooja ! Usual Smile

Very very good reply Majid and beautiful creation Roja ! Keep them coming......


Continued.....


Aankhon ke doron ki laali sunati hai ek kahani,
Qissa mohabbat ka sunte jaaiye, abhi na jaaiye

Chalak rahi hai mai, labon ke in paimano se
Sharab-e-ishq na thukraiye, abhi na jaaiye

Bekhud mere qadam, mehv-e-khwab hoon
Mujhe hosh main na laaiye, abhi na jaaiye !


Lovely again sis
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