Abhi na jaao chorh ke.....!

by Talat on March 03, 2008, 11:56:05 AM
Pages: 1 [2]  All
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 2057 times)
badnaam_shayar
Guest
«Reply #15 on: March 05, 2008, 05:22:23 AM »
Reply with quote
Waah kyaa baat hai...as always all are nice....keep it up
Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
Abhi abhi to pyaar ka pc kiya hai chaaloo by Dewana_Badal in Mazahiya Shayri(Funny Shayari)
Tum Chal Diye Sab Chorh Kar... by Aryaan in Shayri-E-Dard « 1 2 3  All »
jab chorh gaye tum by saahill in Share: Poetry of Pain
Talat
Guest
«Reply #16 on: March 05, 2008, 03:14:35 PM »
Reply with quote
Thanks a lot Roja and Gaurav !

Wo aaye bhi aur chal diye aise,
Do ghadi bahaar aayi ho jaise

Tanhayion ke phir hum ho gaye
Khuda jaane raat kategi kaise

Khwabon main hi mulaqat hogi,
Neend magar ab aaye to kaise !!


Logged
Pooja
Guest
«Reply #17 on: March 05, 2008, 06:34:36 PM »
Reply with quote
nice work zakhmola good one Talat
Logged
waheed_rose2004
Guest
«Reply #18 on: March 06, 2008, 02:14:05 PM »
Reply with quote
Mausam ka ishaara hai abhi na jaaiye
Tod ke yoon dil humara, na jaaiye !

Bahaar ke rang ghule hain fizaaon main
Bahaar ke aanchal se uth kar na jaaiye !

Zamane ki gardishen ruk to nahin jayengi
Dunya ki khatir humko chorh ke na jaaiye !

Jaane se aapke rooth ke baithe hain hum
Ab humko manane ki khatir hi na jaaiye !

Aankhon ki chamak humse chupate hain aap kyun
Aarzuon ne li hain angdaaiyan, abhi na jaaiye !



superbssssssss  Talat........  humesha ki  tarah........  great  job All...........
Logged
Talat
Guest
«Reply #19 on: March 06, 2008, 02:17:58 PM »
Reply with quote
Thanks Pooja

Thanks a lot Waheed ki tumhe pasand aaya...
Logged
waheed_rose2004
Guest
«Reply #20 on: March 06, 2008, 02:48:38 PM »
Reply with quote
ur  welcome  jee..........  mujhe  to  tumhari  har ek poem  acchi lagti hai.......   love10
Logged
Sayyid Randeri
Guest
«Reply #21 on: March 08, 2008, 05:35:23 PM »
Reply with quote
Bohot khoob Talat ji
or sabhi ne bhi khoob likha
Logged
Talat
Guest
«Reply #22 on: March 08, 2008, 05:49:42 PM »
Reply with quote
Shukriya sayyid Usual Smile

Yo ke siwa kahan jaayenge,
Yunhi yahan likhte jaayenge,
Ek zarra kya badhayega shaan Yo ki,
Jugnu ki tarah yahan jhilmilayenge !!
Logged
Sayyid Randeri
Guest
«Reply #23 on: March 08, 2008, 05:54:45 PM »
Reply with quote
+++++++++++
Logged
Talat
Guest
«Reply #24 on: March 08, 2008, 06:03:59 PM »
Reply with quote
Jugnu ki roshni kho jaayegi iss aasman main
Ek taare ki chamak mit jaayegi kehkashan main
Logged
Talat
Guest
«Reply #25 on: August 31, 2008, 01:03:59 AM »
Reply with quote
Thehar jaaiye kuch aur pal, abhi na jaaiye
Machalti hai dil-e-aarzoo, abhi na jaaiye

Saanson main abhi bhi hai lams ki khushbu
Dhadkanen sambhal jaayen, abhi na jaaiye
Logged
bekarar
Poetic Patrol
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 4
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
53 days, 9 hours and 51 minutes.

Posts: 3738
Member Since: Oct 2005


View Profile
«Reply #26 on: August 31, 2008, 02:07:35 AM »
Reply with quote
wah wah wah kya baat hai..talat....bahoot khoob
Logged
Roja
Guest
«Reply #27 on: August 31, 2008, 03:45:20 AM »
Reply with quote
Thehar jaaiye kuch aur pal, abhi na jaaiye
Machalti hai dil-e-aarzoo, abhi na jaaiye

Saanson main abhi bhi hai lams ki khushbu
Dhadkanen sambhal jaayen, abhi na jaaiye

aha, very romantic...  love4( nahi jayega !!  tongue3 )
Logged
Talat
Guest
«Reply #28 on: August 31, 2008, 11:06:28 AM »
Reply with quote
Thanks so much Sanjeev Roja  tongue3
Logged
Talat
Guest
«Reply #29 on: September 22, 2008, 06:45:18 PM »
Reply with quote
Thankyou ! Yoindia
Logged
Pages: 1 [2]  All
ReplyPrint
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 14, 2024, 03:07:05 AM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
by Michaelraw
[November 13, 2024, 12:59:11 PM]

[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]

[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:55:06 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 06:58:58 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.108 seconds with 25 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8508 Real Poets and poetry admirer