-----/// Achcha lagaa /// ----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on April 30, 2012, 04:57:30 PM
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har baar ki tarha tumhaara yahaan aana achcha lagaa,
aake hamaare seene se lag jaana humein achcha lagaa,
aajaati ho to kuch pal baatein kar lete hain tumse,
tumhaaraa aake mere paas baith jaanaa achcha lagaa,

thaamke tumhaare haath kho jaate hain tumhaari aankhon me,
tumhaare aankhon ke samundar me doob jaanaa achcha lagaa,
sharmaake, aankhen jhukaa ke tumne humse apna haath chhuraaya,
tumhaaraa is tarha se apna haath chhuraanaa humein achcha lagaa,

chhuraake apne haath humse jab dekha usko tumne bahut gaur se,
apne haathon ko dekhte huye tumhaara muskuraana achcha lagaa,
ye kaisi kashish hai, ye kaisa ehsaas hai jaan nahi paate hain,
par har baar tumse is tarha se milna humein bahut achcha lagaa,

laal ek gulaab diya humne tumhe pyaar ki nishaani bataake,
us gulaab to tumhaaraa apne seene se lagaanaa achcha lagaa,
badi pyaar bhari nazron se dekha tumne us gulaab ko us pal,
fir us gulaab ko dekhte huye tumhe dekhna achcha lagaa,

kuch pal hamaare saath reh ke tumhe laut jaana tha har baar,
jaate huye tumhaaraa mud mud ke humein dekhna achcha lagaa,
saalon ke baad mila tumse aaj magar bas kuch lamho ke liye,
us intezaar ke baad tumse milna humein bahut achcha lagaa....


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«Reply #1 on: April 30, 2012, 05:12:35 PM »
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achha  laga . congrats.
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«Reply #2 on: April 30, 2012, 05:16:12 PM »
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thank you sooooooooooooo much Hasan ji....!!!

Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on April 30, 2012, 05:12:35 PM
achha  laga . congrats.
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«Reply #3 on: April 30, 2012, 05:18:52 PM »
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Bahut Khoob, hamein bhi achha laga.
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«Reply #4 on: April 30, 2012, 05:20:33 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Iftakhar ji...!!!

Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on April 30, 2012, 05:18:52 PM
Bahut Khoob, hamein bhi achha laga.
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«Reply #5 on: April 30, 2012, 06:10:10 PM »
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Bhai aap ne gaur ki jagah gaud likh rakhkha H.
Churake apne hath ko jo dekha usne.....
Es waali line..
Jra ak baar or read kare or es mistake ko theek kare...
....
Ye to baat ki mene aapki mistake ki ab aap ki es poetry pe aate h.
Lagta h aaj aaj apne seene ke saare jajbat nikaal ke hmare samne pesh kar diye h.
Es kalam pe jitni bhi daad di jaye kam h...
Chalo aap meri daad kabool kare or m aapka ak RaU brata hu
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«Reply #6 on: April 30, 2012, 07:13:45 PM »
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Kapil Jee Aadaab!

Kia baat hai janab, badi khush mijazi meiN nazar aa rahe hai... Usual Smile
bahut khoob janab bade achche ahsaas o khayaal kahe
hai... bahut khoob... Usual Smile

Humari daad o mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...Usual Smile

Likhte rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad o aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: April 30, 2012, 07:18:05 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on April 30, 2012, 04:57:30 PM
har baar ki tarha tumhaara yahaan aana achcha lagaa,
aake hamaare seene se lag jaana humein achcha lagaa,
aajaati ho to kuch pal baatein kar lete hain tumse,
tumhaaraa aake mere paas baith jaanaa achcha lagaa,

thaamke tumhaare haath kho jaate hain tumhaari aankhon me,
tumhaare aankhon ke samundar me doob jaanaa achcha lagaa,
sharmaake, aankhen jhukaa ke tumne humse apna haath chhuraaya,
tumhaaraa is tarha se apna haath chhuraanaa humein achcha lagaa,

chhuraake apne haath humse jab dekha usko tumne bahut gaur se,
apne haathon ko dekhte huye tumhaara muskuraana achcha lagaa,
ye kaisi kashish hai, ye kaisa ehsaas hai jaan nahi paate hain,
par har baar tumse is tarha se milna humein bahut achcha lagaa,

laal ek gulaab diya humne tumhe pyaar ki nishaani bataake,
us gulaab to tumhaaraa apne seene se lagaanaa achcha lagaa,
badi pyaar bhari nazron se dekha tumne us gulaab ko us pal,
fir us gulaab ko dekhte huye tumhe dekhna achcha lagaa,

kuch pal hamaare saath reh ke tumhe laut jaana tha har baar,
jaate huye tumhaaraa mud mud ke humein dekhna achcha lagaa,
saalon ke baad mila tumse aaj magar bas kuch lamho ke liye,
us intezaar ke baad tumse milna bahut achcha lagaa....


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hriday mujhebhi acha laga.............!
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«Reply #8 on: May 01, 2012, 04:32:10 AM »
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bahut achhaaa laga
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«Reply #9 on: May 01, 2012, 04:56:22 AM »
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Hriday ji, aap bht khubsurat likhte hain, hmesha ese hi likhte rahiyega, pdna acha lgta hai.
pyar dil me hai, ise dekh kr bht acha lga,
chhup chhup k use dekhna acha lga,
kisi din ka aapko jo intzaar hai,
wo dekh kr acha lga...



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«Reply #10 on: May 01, 2012, 07:54:21 AM »
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bahut bahut badiyaaa...hridayjiii....Usual SmileUsual SmileApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #11 on: May 01, 2012, 11:25:08 AM »
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thanks a lot bhaai...!!!

Quote from: masoom shahjada on April 30, 2012, 06:10:10 PM
Bhai aap ne gaur ki jagah gaud likh rakhkha H.
Churake apne hath ko jo dekha usne.....
Es waali line..
Jra ak baar or read kare or es mistake ko theek kare...
....
Ye to baat ki mene aapki mistake ki ab aap ki es poetry pe aate h.
Lagta h aaj aaj apne seene ke saare jajbat nikaal ke hmare samne pesh kar diye h.
Es kalam pe jitni bhi daad di jaye kam h...
Chalo aap meri daad kabool kare or m aapka ak RaU brata hu
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«Reply #12 on: May 01, 2012, 05:46:16 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Parwaaz ji....!!!

Quote from: ParwaaZ on April 30, 2012, 07:13:45 PM
Kapil Jee Aadaab!

Kia baat hai janab, badi khush mijazi meiN nazar aa rahe hai... Usual Smile
bahut khoob janab bade achche ahsaas o khayaal kahe
hai... bahut khoob... Usual Smile

Humari daad o mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...Usual Smile

Likhte rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad o aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

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«Reply #13 on: May 03, 2012, 11:29:06 AM »
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achaa laga
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«Reply #14 on: May 04, 2012, 04:16:50 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Sheba ji... maine aapke suggestion accept karke correction kar liya... thanks for that...!!!

Quote from: Sheba on April 30, 2012, 07:18:05 PM
hriday mujhebhi acha laga.............!
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