<>*Achchii lagi*<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 17, 2010, 10:18:20 AM
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<>*Achchii lagi*<>

aapki tareef karne ki ada mujhe achchi lagi
aapki saadgi mujhe bht hi achhci lagi

main to dubi rahi rang aur roshni me
teri andhere me intezar karne ki aadat achchi lagi

mujhe sambhalke har pal sanwara hai tune
teri mujhe iss tarah nikharne ki kala achchi lagi

bahot dekhe hain sachchi mahobbat ka daawa karne wale
lekin teri mere liye ye mahobbat aaj mujhe sachchi lagi.......
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«Reply #1 on: August 17, 2010, 10:29:24 AM »
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too good kasak.....  Clapping Smiley  Applause  Applause


tere ehssao ko ghazal banana achha laga,
 tera yu khushi or gam batna hame achha laga.....
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«Reply #2 on: August 17, 2010, 10:35:09 AM »
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too good kasak.....  Clapping Smiley  Applause  Applause


tere ehssao ko ghazal banana achha laga,
 tera yu khushi or gam batna hame achha laga.....

thnx devangi ji......

ab na ehsaas bache hain na
unko bayan hi kar paate hain
yun lag raha hai jaise
apne shabd hi kahin kho aaye hain....
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«Reply #3 on: August 17, 2010, 10:57:47 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Kazaane hain jinke paas wo
kehte hain chabi kho gayee

Kya kehai hum log jinke paas
hai nahi bharne ko purse bhi



thnx devangi ji......

ab na ehsaas bache hain na
unko bayan hi kar paate hain
yun lag raha hai jaise
apne shabd hi kahin kho aaye hain....


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«Reply #4 on: August 17, 2010, 01:50:05 PM »
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bahut khoob Kasak ji...!!! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

mohabbat ko dil se samjho to wo sachcha hi hota hai,
tumhe koi khud se jyaada chaahe wo achcha hi hota hai,

kisi ke hothon pe taarif pooja ki tarha hoti hai,
jo taarif dil se kare wo sachcha hi hota hai,

koi apne ghar ke chirag bujhaake rakhta hai ki tum aao to roshni hogi,
koi intezaar me paani tak nahi peeta ye soch ki tum aao to baarish hogi,

koi agar khud ko bhulaake tumse pyaar kare to kya kehne,
aise chaahne wale ka pyaar sachcha hi hota hai,

mohabbat ko dil se samjho to wo sachcha hi hota hai,
tumhe koi khud se jyaada chaahe wo achcha hi hota hai...
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«Reply #5 on: August 17, 2010, 01:57:28 PM »
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bahut khoob Kasak ji...!!! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

mohabbat ko dil se samjho to wo sachcha hi hota hai,
tumhe koi khud se jyaada chaahe wo achcha hi hota hai,

kisi ke hothon pe taarif pooja ki tarha hoti hai,
jo taarif dil se kare wo sachcha hi hota hai,

koi apne ghar ke chirag bujhaake rakhta hai ki tum aao to roshni hogi,
koi intezaar me paani tak nahi peeta ye soch ki tum aao to baarish hogi,

koi agar khud ko bhulaake tumse pyaar kare to kya kehne,
aise chaahne wale ka pyaar sachcha hi hota hai,

mohabbat ko dil se samjho to wo sachcha hi hota hai,
tumhe koi khud se jyaada chaahe wo achcha hi hota hai...
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
mastam reply kapil ji..keep writing..and smiling
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«Reply #6 on: August 17, 2010, 01:58:37 PM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Kazaane hain jinke paas wo
kehte hain chabi kho gayee

Kya kehai hum log jinke paas
hai nahi bharne ko purse bhi





Applause Applause
thnx gudiya rani...for lovely lines
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«Reply #7 on: August 17, 2010, 01:59:31 PM »
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shukriya Kasak ji...!!!

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
mastam reply kapil ji..keep writing..and smiling
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«Reply #8 on: August 17, 2010, 07:47:17 PM »
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Anamika di, Koyal di aur Kapil Dost..!

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Sada khush rahiye!
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«Reply #9 on: August 17, 2010, 08:37:38 PM »
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shukriya Rahim bhai...!!!

Anamika di, Koyal di aur Kapil Dost..!

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Sada khush rahiye!
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«Reply #10 on: August 18, 2010, 05:53:34 AM »
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<>*Achchii lagi*<>

aapki tareef karne ki ada mujhe achchi lagi
aapki saadgi mujhe bht hi achhci lagi

main to dubi rahi rang aur roshni me
teri andhere me intezar karne ki aadat achchi lagi

mujhe sambhalke har pal sanwara hai tune
teri mujhe iss tarah nikharne ki kala achchi lagi

bahot dekhe hain sachchi mahobbat ka daawa karne wale
lekin teri mere liye ye mahobbat aaj mujhe sachchi lagi.......

ye waqt ye nur ye aadat nahi achchi
doulat nahi achi shohrat nahi achchi
mana ke ham tere pyaar me mit jayengy
magar jala kar khaak karde aisi mohhabbat nahi achchi
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«Reply #11 on: August 18, 2010, 06:02:41 AM »
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Anamika di, Koyal di aur Kapil Dost..!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Sada khush rahiye!

thnx rahim ji....
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«Reply #12 on: August 18, 2010, 07:02:34 AM »
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Aapka bhahut bahut shukriya Rahim-bhai......

Anamika di, Koyal di aur Kapil Dost..!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Sada khush rahiye!
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«Reply #13 on: August 18, 2010, 09:11:21 AM »
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<>*Achchii lagi*<>

aapki tareef karne ki ada mujhe achchi lagi
aapki saadgi mujhe bht hi achhci lagi

main to dubi rahi rang aur roshni me
teri andhere me intezar karne ki aadat achchi lagi

mujhe sambhalke har pal sanwara hai tune
teri mujhe iss tarah nikharne ki kala achchi lagi

bahot dekhe hain sachchi mahobbat ka daawa karne wale
lekin teri mere liye ye mahobbat aaj mujhe sachchi lagi.......

bahut khoob kasak ji......mujhe ye lafzon ki saadgi achchi lagi
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«Reply #14 on: August 18, 2010, 12:15:15 PM »
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<>*Achchii lagi*<>

aapki tareef karne ki ada mujhe achchi lagi
aapki saadgi mujhe bht hi achhci lagi

main to dubi rahi rang aur roshni me
teri andhere me intezar karne ki aadat achchi lagi

mujhe sambhalke har pal sanwara hai tune
teri mujhe iss tarah nikharne ki kala achchi lagi

bahot dekhe hain sachchi mahobbat ka daawa karne wale
lekin teri mere liye ye mahobbat aaj mujhe sachchi lagi.......

Nice one Anu Ji
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