~~~~***Achha Laga***~~~~

by tanha dil tanha safar on June 07, 2005, 11:01:43 AM
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uss din tera yun milna achha laga
suna suna rasta bhi achha laga
ruk ruk ke tera bolna achha laga
kitne shikve the apni kismat se
uss din takdeer ka likha achha laga
band kar chuka tha dil ke dhadkan apni
uss din dil ka dhadakna achha laga
bhatak raha tha andhere ke saaye mein kab se
andhere mein tera woh saya achha laga
behta chala jaa raha tha tha tufaan ke saath main
uss din kinaare pe rukna achha laga.
kabhi socha nahi magar yun he
uss din apna jina mujhe achha laga.
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«Reply #1 on: June 07, 2005, 11:18:36 AM »
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uss din tera yun milna achha laga
suna suna rasta bhi achha laga
ruk ruk ke tera bolna achha laga
kitne shikve the apni kismat se
uss din takdeer ka likha achha laga
band kar chuka tha dil ke dhadkan apni
uss din dil ka dhadakna achha laga
bhatak raha tha andhere ke saaye mein kab se
andhere mein tera woh saya achha laga
behta chala jaa raha tha tha tufaan ke saath main
uss din kinaare pe rukna achha laga.
kabhi socha nahi magar yun he
uss din apna jina mujhe achha laga.




sath mere tera sath achha laga
der raat tak batein karna achha laga
tanhaiyome tera khayal muje achha laga
bhid bhad me tere sath tanha rehna muje achha laga
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tanha dil tanha safar
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«Reply #2 on: June 07, 2005, 12:50:15 PM »
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gud!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!................................................. ................
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«Reply #3 on: June 07, 2005, 03:44:57 PM »
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uss din tera yun milna achha laga
suna suna rasta bhi achha laga
ruk ruk ke tera bolna achha laga
kitne shikve the apni kismat se
uss din takdeer ka likha achha laga
band kar chuka tha dil ke dhadkan apni
uss din dil ka dhadakna achha laga
bhatak raha tha andhere ke saaye mein kab se
andhere mein tera woh saya achha laga
behta chala jaa raha tha tha tufaan ke saath main
uss din kinaare pe rukna achha laga.
kabhi socha nahi magar yun he
uss din apna jina mujhe achha laga.


wowwwww notTanhaaaaa (lol) ....bahut achha likha  Usual Smile Usual Smile  

n nice one......jochahohojaaye.... Usual Smile

mere dil mein uska aana achha laga.....
meri shikayaton paruska muskaurana achha laga...
mujh nasamajh ko uska samjhana achha laga....
mera uski chahat mein banana deewana achha laga......
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tanha dil tanha safar
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«Reply #4 on: June 08, 2005, 06:03:45 AM »
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thanks not dolly (lol)

and nice one toooooooo........................................ ...
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«Reply #5 on: June 09, 2005, 02:27:56 PM »
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thanks not dolly (lol)

and nice one toooooooo........................................ ...


thank uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu...... :D  Usual Smile  :oops:  tongue3 ......

meri aankhon ka khwaab ho tum....
mere dil ka karaar ho tum....

meri saanson ki awaaz ho tum...
meri manzil ki talaash ho tum.....

mere hoton ki pyaas ho tum......
tanha raaton ka intezaar ho tum....

khuda ne di woh keemti saugaat ho tum...
haan meri mohabbat mera pyaar ho tum.......
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«Reply #6 on: June 09, 2005, 02:31:55 PM »
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wah wah tanha ( or not tanha...pata nahi!) dolly (surely very dolly) and jochaho!!
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«Reply #7 on: June 09, 2005, 02:39:44 PM »
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wah wah tanha ( or not tanha...pata nahi!) dolly (surely very dolly) and jochaho!!


lolzz.....thanx saani....... :D

tanha very sure not Tanha......lol :lol:
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«Reply #8 on: June 11, 2005, 06:14:42 AM »
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uss din tera yun milna achha laga
suna suna rasta bhi achha laga
ruk ruk ke tera bolna achha laga
kitne shikve the apni kismat se
uss din takdeer ka likha achha laga
band kar chuka tha dil ke dhadkan apni
uss din dil ka dhadakna achha laga
bhatak raha tha andhere ke saaye mein kab se
andhere mein tera woh saya achha laga
behta chala jaa raha tha tha tufaan ke saath main
uss din kinaare pe rukna achha laga.
kabhi socha nahi magar yun he
uss din apna jina mujhe achha laga.


dekh ke teri kushi he main kuch ho leti hum
de ke tujhe hasi he main haas leti hun

http://www.yoindia.com/forums/viewtopic.php?p=203249#203249 ... naje kya hun main??? kya tum bata sakte ho???

...
kush raho...!!! sukhi raho..!!!
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«Reply #9 on: June 13, 2005, 08:35:15 AM »
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thanks Dolly, Tosha & sanya............................................ ..........
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«Reply #10 on: June 14, 2005, 09:41:54 AM »
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ke pal aaye thi hasi to main muska di
baat phir kuch aise hui ke mujhe rula gaye
hasna rona khel hai zindgi ka
main to is kahel main haar gaye
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«Reply #11 on: June 14, 2005, 11:00:00 AM »
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uski baaton ka nasha acha laga
uski mehak se mehka kamra acha laga
bikhra musam barsa badal acha laga
mujhe tujhse milna acha laga
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«Reply #12 on: June 14, 2005, 11:48:44 AM »
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bohot khoob sandhya & tosha............................................
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«Reply #13 on: June 15, 2005, 11:42:15 AM »
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tera pyaar mila khushnaseebi hai meri...
tera deedar naa mila badnaseebi hai meri...
tujhko chaahoongi umr bhar dewaangi hai meri
maaane yaa na maane tu hi to zindagi hai meri.....
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«Reply #14 on: June 15, 2005, 05:55:11 PM »
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tera pyaar mila khushnaseebi hai meri...
tera deedar naa mila badnaseebi hai meri...
tujhko chaahoongi umr bhar dewaangi hai meri
maaane yaa na maane tu hi to zindagi hai meri.....
superb tanha,tosha and dolly,bohat khoob.
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