Adat purani ho gyi hai...

by brokenbyluv on August 19, 2010, 07:58:29 PM
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Kehte hai aksar purani adate badli nhi jati,
tujhe chahne ki ab merri adat purani ho gyi hai,

mehez ek naam se shuru hui thi jo baat,
badhte badhte ab hamari mhbt ki kahani ho gyi hai,

dilkash wadiya ho ya jism ko chhuti thandi hawaye,
terri geybat mein har hasrat beimaani ho gyi hai,

waise tou lafz bhi nhi bante terre khayalo se pare,
per terri yad se merri har likhawat ruhani ho gyi hai,

jis sukoon ki aas thi aajtak merre is dil ko..
terre ajane se ab zindgi jannat si suhani ho gyi hai.........
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«Reply #1 on: August 20, 2010, 06:21:28 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI       BROKENBYLUV JI....

SHARAB JITNI PURANI HOGAYI HAI
UTNA HI KHOOB NASHA DE GAYI HAI
TUJHKO CHAHNE KI MERI ITNI ADAT PURANI HO GAYI HAI
KI ZINDAGI KA HAR LAMHA JEENE KA MAZA DE GAYI HAI..
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«Reply #2 on: August 20, 2010, 10:02:58 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji...!!!
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«Reply #3 on: August 20, 2010, 11:52:59 AM »
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Kehte hai aksar purani adate badli nhi jati,
tujhe chahne ki ab merri adat purani ho gyi hai,

mehez ek naam se shuru hui thi jo baat,
badhte badhte ab hamari mhbt ki kahani ho gyi hai,

dilkash wadiya ho ya jism ko chhuti thandi hawaye,
terri geybat mein har hasrat beimaani ho gyi hai,

waise tou lafz bhi nhi bante terre khayalo se pare,
per terri yad se merri har likhawat ruhani ho gyi hai,

jis sukoon ki aas thi aajtak merre is dil ko..
terre ajane se ab zindgi jannat si suhani ho gyi hai.........
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«Reply #4 on: August 20, 2010, 05:54:43 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley excellent dear  icon_salut
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«Reply #5 on: August 20, 2010, 06:37:39 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya kapil ji cara ji n priya..
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«Reply #6 on: August 20, 2010, 06:47:52 PM »
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 Very nice thoughts and beatifuly poetryed Applause Applause

   
Mile the punam ki raat, pure chaand ke saath
Humare pyaar ki ParwaaZ kya nishani ho gayi hai  
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«Reply #7 on: August 20, 2010, 06:56:37 PM »
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shukriya parwaz ji n nice lines...
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«Reply #8 on: August 21, 2010, 06:30:25 AM »
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bht pyari peshkash geet ji....
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«Reply #9 on: August 22, 2010, 01:04:49 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Geetji..

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Khayalaat Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: August 22, 2010, 01:06:37 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya kasak ji,kaash ji , khwaish ji...
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«Reply #11 on: September 25, 2010, 04:06:40 PM »
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Wah Kya Baat hai Geet Ji.. aapki Yeh Rachna Dil Pe Asar kar gai.. Bahut Khooooooob.... Applause Applause



Teri Aankhon Me Utar, Apna Bana To Jaata Hoon,
Na Jane Phir Bhi Kyun Tu Mujhe Apna Nahi Paata....

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Ke Tu Yaad Nahi Karti, Aur Main Bhool Nahi Paata...!!




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«Reply #12 on: September 27, 2010, 05:06:55 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya mann ji aur bahut acha likha hai apne..shukriya ji.
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