Adhoora H Jahan, Sanse hain Adhoori

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Adhoora h jahan
Sanse hain adhoori,
N jaane hamare beech
Kyo hain doori,
Tum rahte ho toh jindgi
Lagti h poori,
Tumhare jaane k baad
Phir adhoori,

Ab tak toh hoti thi
Baate ankho se hi sari,
Lekin Ab pyar me
Kahna bhi h jaroori,
Karna h hasil
tumhe is jindgi mein,
Tabhi to hogi
meri manzil poori,

Ab toh har pal
Aane ki h aash tumhari,
Phir bhi n jaane
Pal pal kyo badhti h doori,
Lekin jb tum aa jaoge
Toh ho jayegi
Meri duniya phir se poori.
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«Reply #1 on: June 25, 2016, 07:19:54 AM »
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waah waah waah waah bahut achchaa likhaa hai aapne Om ji....!!!
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bahut khoob waah waah.
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