Ae Mere Shareek-e-Safar.....!!

by Talat on April 23, 2009, 12:55:24 PM
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«Reply #30 on: April 25, 2009, 05:33:22 AM »
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Quote from: Raj. on April 24, 2009, 05:30:41 AM
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Shukriya Raj Ji
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«Reply #31 on: April 25, 2009, 05:41:15 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on April 24, 2009, 06:38:55 AM
Beautiful Piece Of Poetry and A Beautiful Dedication Too..

Har Ek Lafz,Dil Se Utra Ho Jaise, Sach Mein Dost,Bahut Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Nazm Likhi Hai Aapne..Hat's Off To You..
                          Hats off to you!

Bahut Bahut Khoob  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thank You so much Khwaish ...Bohot bohot shukriya Dost ise pasand karne ka aur aapki taareef ka..... Usual Smile
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«Reply #32 on: April 25, 2009, 05:59:44 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on April 23, 2009, 12:55:24 PM
This creation is dedicated to the love of my life, my husband !!


bahut hi achchi peshkash hai sis....sorry bahut der se pada...........
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«Reply #33 on: April 25, 2009, 08:11:49 AM »
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Quote from: anjaan dharkan on April 24, 2009, 12:49:34 PM
Ameen! Ya-Rabul-Alameen!!! Thanks sis... yunhee duwa kartay rahayega... humko zarurat hai

Zaroor...You are welcome
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«Reply #34 on: April 25, 2009, 12:35:58 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on April 24, 2009, 04:31:48 PM
Bahut Khoobsurat Dua Di hai aapne Azeem.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Shukriya Khwaish bhaiya,.
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«Reply #35 on: April 25, 2009, 05:34:57 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on April 24, 2009, 03:36:24 PM
Sahi Kaha Didi Aapne, May Allah Bless Us,.

Thank U,.

Bohot shukriya Azeem
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«Reply #36 on: April 25, 2009, 06:01:41 PM »
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Aaye Haye.. Kya Baat hai.. CELMIRA Ji.. Har Lafz se Behad Pyaar Chalak Raha Hai.. Behad Pyaar Bhara Qalaam Likha hai aapne..!!
Bahut Bahut Khooooooooooooooooob.. Applause Applause

Uparwala Aap Dono ko Duniya Bhar ki Khushiyon se Nawaaze..!!Aur aapka Pyaar Din-b-Din Yunhi Badhta Jaye..!! Yahi Dua Hai..! Usual Smile Usual Smile


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #37 on: April 25, 2009, 07:36:06 PM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 24, 2009, 11:55:06 PM
Bahut hi sundar rachna hai Celmira Ji

Bohot bohot shukriya aapka Rajesh
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«Reply #38 on: April 26, 2009, 05:36:09 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on April 23, 2009, 12:55:24 PM
This creation is dedicated to the love of my life, my husband !!





wah celmira ji kya baat hai bhut hai mashallah bhut hi khoobsurat andaaz istemaal kiya hai aapne, bhut khoob....ek mehbooba apne mehboob ke liyn isse bad kar aur kya apne khyalaat ka izhaar karegi...aur uspar iski lazzat aur bhi bad jaati hai jake wo mehboob shareek e hayaat bhi ho to, Allah paak aap dono ko zindagi tamaam khushiyo.n se nawaaze aur you.n hi ek dosre ke liyn ye jazbaat parwaan chadte rahain, aameen
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«Reply #39 on: April 26, 2009, 10:07:04 AM »
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Quote from: salil2002 on April 25, 2009, 05:59:44 AM
bahut hi achchi peshkash hai sis....sorry bahut der se pada...........


Der aaye durst aaye tongue3

Bohot bohot shukriya , Salil
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«Reply #40 on: April 26, 2009, 03:07:37 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on April 25, 2009, 06:01:41 PM
Aaye Haye.. Kya Baat hai.. CELMIRA Ji.. Har Lafz se Behad Pyaar Chalak Raha Hai.. Behad Pyaar Bhara Qalaam Likha hai aapne..!!
Bahut Bahut Khooooooooooooooooob.. Applause Applause

Uparwala Aap Dono ko Duniya Bhar ki Khushiyon se Nawaaze..!!Aur aapka Pyaar Din-b-Din Yunhi Badhta Jaye..!! Yahi Dua Hai..! Usual Smile Usual Smile


**~** Mann **~**

Thanks so much Mann Ji... aapka reply dekh ke badi khushi hui....Duaaon ke liye bohot bohot shukriya.....Thank You Usual Smile
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«Reply #41 on: April 26, 2009, 05:10:06 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on April 26, 2009, 05:36:09 AM
wah celmira ji kya baat hai bhut hai mashallah bhut hi khoobsurat andaaz istemaal kiya hai aapne, bhut khoob....ek mehbooba apne mehboob ke liyn isse bad kar aur kya apne khyalaat ka izhaar karegi...aur uspar iski lazzat aur bhi bad jaati hai jake wo mehboob shareek e hayaat bhi ho to, Allah paak aap dono ko zindagi tamaam khushiyo.n se nawaaze aur you.n hi ek dosre ke liyn ye jazbaat parwaan chadte rahain, aameen

Aslam Ji, behad shukrguzaar hoon aapki jo aapne itne khoobsurat alfaz se saraha.....Bohot bohot shukriya aapki duaaon ka....Tah-e-dil se shukriya aapka Usual Smile
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«Reply #42 on: April 26, 2009, 07:27:16 PM »
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Ye Poem bohot khaas hai mere liye.....bohot maayene rakhti hai......Aakhir main ek baar un sab readers / non-registered members ka shukriya jinhone ise padha....!!

Thank You !
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«Reply #43 on: April 27, 2009, 03:41:46 AM »
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Hi Talat,
Once I wrote a Ghazal, you complimented me by saying that
this work belongs to an elit class of YoIndia. When I read this poem, I felt the same way.
This poem definitely belongs to an elit class.
Congratulations for coming up with a beautiful poem.

Also since you wrote for your hubby, I wish you from the bottom my
heart that you have a long and very very happy married life.
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«Reply #44 on: April 27, 2009, 11:27:51 PM »
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Quote from: Bharat on April 27, 2009, 03:41:46 AM
Hi Talat,
Once I wrote a Ghazal, you complimented me by saying that
this work belongs to an elit class of YoIndia. When I read this poem, I felt the same way.
This poem definitely belongs to an elit class.
Congratulations for coming up with a beautiful poem.

Also since you wrote for your hubby, I wish you from the bottom my
heart that you have a long and very very happy married life.


Thanks so much Bharat,

You still remembered that comment...So Sweet....!! Thanks so much for reading and giving such a lovely comment....and for your wishes....Bohot bohot shukriya Usual Smile

Talat
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