"agar tum kaho to apni jaan de du.n mein"

by aaina on August 31, 2009, 01:32:29 AM
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mohabbat ka har ek emtehaan de dun mein
agr tum kaho to apni jaan de dun mein

ye aalam jaanta to hoga waise tumko bhi
 chahta hun tumhe apni pehchaan de dun mein

bahar, gul, maahjabee.n, ye saare hi achay hain
magr dil ye chahta hai alag sa farmaan de dun mein

na ho phr koi tere mere beech mai dewaar
khuli fizaao.n wala tujhay aasmaan de dun mein

ye saare aashaar, nazme.n aur ye ghazle.n
teri nazro.n ko apna saara dewaan de dun mein

mere dil ke nagar pe jab tera hi zor chata hai
to kyun na tujhko is dil ka sultaan de dun mein

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«Reply #1 on: August 31, 2009, 01:35:36 AM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Aaina ji very beautiful creation.really touching. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: August 31, 2009, 02:35:34 AM »
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Quote from: aaina on August 31, 2009, 01:32:29 AM
mohabbat ka har ek emtehaan de dun mein
agr tum kaho to apni jaan de dun mein

ye aalam jaanta to hoga waise tumko bhi
 chahta hun tumhe apni pehchaan de dun mein

bahar, gul, maahjabee.n, ye saare hi achay hain
magr dil ye chahta hai alag sa farmaan de dun mein

na ho phr koi tere mere beech mai dewaar
khuli fizaao.n wala tujhay aasmaan de dun mein

ye saare aashaar, nazme.n aur ye ghazle.n
teri nazro.n ko apna saara dewaan de dun mein

mere dil ke nagar pe jab tera hi zor chata hai
to kyun na tujhko is dil ka sultaan de dun mein

wooow... kya baat hai... "Teri nazro.n ko apna saara dewaan de dun mein..."

Atil sunder ... Bahut accha laga padkar aslam ji
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«Reply #3 on: August 31, 2009, 02:37:04 AM »
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WAH WAH KAYA BAAT HAI BAHOOT KHOOB AAINA JI
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«Reply #4 on: August 31, 2009, 07:12:14 AM »
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bahut achche aslam bhai
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«Reply #5 on: August 31, 2009, 08:27:05 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on August 31, 2009, 01:35:36 AM
Wah wah bahut khoob Aaina ji very beautiful creation.really touching. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

thnxxxx so much madhu ji thnxxx for ur appriciation
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«Reply #6 on: August 31, 2009, 08:28:01 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on August 31, 2009, 02:35:34 AM
wooow... kya baat hai... "Teri nazro.n ko apna saara dewaan de dun mein..."

Atil sunder ... Bahut accha laga padkar aslam ji


bhut shukriya dear aise hi hosla afzaai karti rahiye
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«Reply #7 on: August 31, 2009, 08:29:04 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on August 31, 2009, 02:37:04 AM
WAH WAH KAYA BAAT HAI BAHOOT KHOOB AAINA JI

thnxx so much pooja ji
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«Reply #8 on: August 31, 2009, 08:29:45 PM »
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Quote from: -Saahil- on August 31, 2009, 07:12:14 AM
bahut achche aslam bhai



bhut shukriya dost
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«Reply #9 on: September 01, 2009, 11:35:52 AM »
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Bahut khoob.
Ghazal padhkar tumhari apni bhi pahchaan de dun main
Tumhara chahne wala hun tum par jaan de dun main
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«Reply #10 on: September 02, 2009, 09:37:56 AM »
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Quote from: waquif ansari on September 01, 2009, 11:35:52 AM
Bahut khoob.
Ghazal padhkar tumhari apni bhi pahchaan de dun main
Tumhara chahne wala hun tum par jaan de dun main



thnxxxxxxx so much janaab bhut bhut shukriya aapke is khoobusurat aur jazbe se labrez sher ka, hosla afzaaii ka bhut bhut skhukriya


tumhari jaan nhai bas dua chahaiye
aisi jazbo.n bhari bas ada chahiye
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«Reply #11 on: September 03, 2009, 07:42:23 AM »
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Wah Wah Wah!!!! Bahut Bahut Khoob Mere Bhai..

Bahut Acha Likhte Ho Aslam Ji Aap.

Har Ek Ashaar Lajawaab!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: September 03, 2009, 09:11:51 AM »
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Quote from: aaina on September 02, 2009, 09:37:56 AM

thnxxxxxxx so much janaab bhut bhut shukriya aapke is khoobusurat aur jazbe se labrez sher ka, hosla afzaaii ka bhut bhut skhukr


tumhari jaan nhai bas dua chahaiye
aisi jazbo.n bhari bas ada chahiye

Aapke bhi jazbe ki main qadr karta hoon.Aapke sher ki misra saani par aur isi bahr mein ye khayal aa gaya ki:
Aap jaisa hamein nakhuda chahiye
Aap hain saamne aur kya chahiye
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«Reply #13 on: September 03, 2009, 05:07:15 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on August 31, 2009, 01:32:29 AM
mohabbat ka har ek emtehaan de dun mein
agr tum kaho to apni jaan de dun mein

ye aalam jaanta to hoga waise tumko bhi
 chahta hun tumhe apni pehchaan de dun mein

bahar, gul, maahjabee.n, ye saare hi achay hain
magr dil ye chahta hai alag sa farmaan de dun mein

na ho phr koi tere mere beech mai dewaar
khuli fizaao.n wala tujhay aasmaan de dun mein

ye saare aashaar, nazme.n aur ye ghazle.n
teri nazro.n ko apna saara dewaan de dun mein

mere dil ke nagar pe jab tera hi zor chata hai
to kyun na tujhko is dil ka sultaan de dun mein



Roomani Shayari main to aapka koi jawab hi nahin....Mashallah bohot achcha likha hai aapne...itne khoosurat alfaaz aur jazbaat hain ki ghazal kisi shahkaar se kam nahin !! Bohot Khoob Aslam Ji  Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: September 03, 2009, 05:18:18 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on August 31, 2009, 01:32:29 AM
mohabbat ka har ek emtehaan de dun mein
agr tum kaho to apni jaan de dun mein

ye aalam jaanta to hoga waise tumko bhi
 chahta hun tumhe apni pehchaan de dun mein

bahar, gul, maahjabee.n, ye saare hi achay hain
magr dil ye chahta hai alag sa farmaan de dun mein

na ho phr koi tere mere beech mai dewaar
khuli fizaao.n wala tujhay aasmaan de dun mein

ye saare aashaar, nazme.n aur ye ghazle.n
teri nazro.n ko apna saara dewaan de dun mein

mere dil ke nagar pe jab tera hi zor chata hai
to kyun na tujhko is dil ka sultaan de dun mein



wah wah wah aaina ji.. bahut hi khoob

jasbir singh
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