"agar tum kaho to apni jaan de du.n mein" -Panna 2:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

aaina

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«Reply #15 on: September 04, 2009, 01:16:41 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on September 03, 2009, 07:42:23 AM

Wah Wah Wah!!!! Bahut Bahut Khoob Mere Bhai..

Bahut Acha Likhte Ho Aslam Ji Aap.

Har Ek Ashaar Lajawaab!!!

bhut bhut shukriya khwaish bhut shukriya


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aaina

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Re: "agar tum kaho to apni jaan de du.n mein"

«Reply #16 on: September 04, 2009, 01:18:55 AM »

Quote from: waquif ansari on September 03, 2009, 09:11:51 AM

Aapke bhi jazbe ki main qadr karta hoon.Aapke sher ki misra saani par aur isi bahr mein ye khayal aa gaya ki:
Aap jaisa hamein nakhuda chahiye
Aap hain saamne aur kya chahiye

lajawaab waquif sahab bhut khoob....................


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aaina

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Re: "agar tum kaho to apni jaan de du.n mein"

«Reply #17 on: September 04, 2009, 01:19:48 AM »

Quote from: jasbirsingh on September 03, 2009, 05:18:18 PM

wah wah wah aaina ji.. bahut hi khoob

jasbir singh

jasbir sahab in mohabbato.n ka bhut bhut shukriya


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aaina

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Re: "agar tum kaho to apni jaan de du.n mein"

«Reply #18 on: September 04, 2009, 01:24:13 AM »

Quote from: Celmira on September 03, 2009, 05:07:15 PM

Roomani Shayari main to aapka koi jawab hi nahin....Mashallah bohot achcha likha hai aapne...itne khoosurat alfaaz aur jazbaat hain ki ghazal kisi shahkaar se kam nahin !! Bohot Khoob Aslam Ji Usual Smile

talat aap is tahan hosla afzaaii karti hain ki jaise zamee.n ke bande ko aasaam par baitha de.n, aapki nazro.n ka dhoka hai ye, hum tahe dil se aapke shukurguzaar hain ke aap hame itni tawajjo ke sath padti hain na sirf padti hain balke hosla bhi is qadr badhati hain ki dil phir kuch naya kehne ko karne lagta hai buri aadae.n kehte hain jaldi pad jaati hain, Allah aapko hamesha khush rakhen aameen


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deepika_divya

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Re: "agar tum kaho to apni jaan de du.n mein"

«Reply #19 on: September 05, 2009, 05:03:20 AM »

Waah Waah Aslam ji.. Wakai bahoot Bahoot khubsoorat peshkash hai .. Dil khush ho gaya pad kar... Aap tho hamesha hi acha likhte ha.. bas yuhin likhte rahiye ..


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Talat

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Re: "agar tum kaho to apni jaan de du.n mein"

«Reply #20 on: September 06, 2009, 11:37:30 AM »

Quote from: aaina on September 04, 2009, 01:24:13 AM

Aslam Ji, aapki ghazlain hoti hi aisi hain ki insaan ki saari tavajjo apni taraf kheench leti hain.....aur aisi koi baat nahin, aap ek behtareen shayar hain, aur khud aapke kalam is baat ki gawahi dete hain.....Keep writing. Allah aap ko bhi humesha khush rakhe, ameen.


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aaina

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Re: "agar tum kaho to apni jaan de du.n mein"

«Reply #21 on: September 07, 2009, 01:36:59 PM »

Quote from: Sophi on September 05, 2009, 05:03:20 AM

Waah Waah Aslam ji.. Wakai bahoot Bahoot khubsoorat peshkash hai .. Dil khush ho gaya pad kar... Aap tho hamesha hi acha likhte ha.. bas yuhin likhte rahiye ..

bhut shukriya sohie ji aapki is hosla afzaaii ka you.n hi hosla badhati rehiye


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aaina

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Re: "agar tum kaho to apni jaan de du.n mein"

«Reply #22 on: September 07, 2009, 01:39:44 PM »

Quote from: Celmira on September 06, 2009, 11:37:30 AM

thnxxxx alot talat, aameen, ab in alfaazo.n ke aage koi kya keh sakta hai, Allah aapko hamesha khush rakhe aur aapki jaaiz khwaahishaat ko poora kare aameen


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