Aia Bade Saba Tu Aahista Chal -Panna 2:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

Deepati

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«Reply #15 on: July 08, 2009, 01:27:49 AM »

Wah Wah Wah Javedarshad Ji... Bahut he pyaari hai aapki yeh pyaar bhari nazam! Har ek alfaaz mein pyaar he pyaar chhalk raha hai! Bahut Bahut Bahut khoob! Daad qabool karein! Applause


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javedarshad

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Re: Aia Bade Saba Tu Aahista Chal

«Reply #16 on: July 08, 2009, 01:36:23 AM »

Quote from: Celmira on July 07, 2009, 01:09:44 PM

Mashallah....Bohot hi khoobsurat nazm likhi hai Javed sb. Mohabbat main doobi hui, chaashni si lagti hai padh ke....Bohot bohot Khoob !!!

Shukria aap ka Talat
In jazbaat ko kia naam don
yeh tobas Qalam ke aansu hain

javed


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javedarshad

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Re: Aia Bade Saba Tu Aahista Chal

«Reply #17 on: July 08, 2009, 01:45:18 AM »

Quote from: Deepati on July 08, 2009, 01:27:49 AM

Wah Wah Wah Javedarshad Ji... Bahut he pyaari hai aapki yeh pyaar bhari nazam! Har ek alfaaz mein pyaar he pyaar chhalk raha hai! Bahut Bahut Bahut khoob! Daad qabool karein! Applause

Bahu bahut Shukria Deepati Ji

Labe khamoosh se kuinker izhare muhabbat keejiye
Kuin na shermati aankhoN se muddua bayan keejiye

Aap ki is nawazish ka shukria ,

javed


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javedarshad

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Re: Aia Bade Saba Tu Aahista Chal

«Reply #18 on: July 08, 2009, 02:14:37 AM »

Quote from: Roja on July 07, 2009, 01:47:02 PM

Wah wah bahut khoob javed ji

shukria Roja sahiba

aapka

javed


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shayara

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Re: Aia Bade Saba Tu Aahista Chal

«Reply #19 on: July 08, 2009, 08:05:03 AM »

Javed Sahab,

Taareef ke qaabil hai aapki ye nazm. Bohot khoob.


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aaina

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Re: Aia Bade Saba Tu Aahista Chal

«Reply #20 on: July 08, 2009, 09:36:59 AM »

Quote from: javedarshad on July 07, 2009, 01:55:44 PM

Hi Aaina

Bahut bahut shukria aap ke is dilkash andaze bayaan ka

Loog kahte hain tujh per shabaab aata hai
Kaise dekhoon aaina mujhko hijab aata hai

aap ke naam

javed

my pleasure javed sahab, bhut hi khoosurat sher bhut shukriya


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javedarshad

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Re: Aia Bade Saba Tu Aahista Chal

«Reply #21 on: July 08, 2009, 01:16:20 PM »

Quote from: qadeertoopchii on July 07, 2009, 02:00:47 PM

Bahoth qoob javed sahab !! kya kahene !! wah bhai wah maaza aagaya !! allah apko khush rakhe !! bahoth khuch sikha jaate ho yaar app !!

Qadeertoopchi

Bahut bahut shukria
Toopchi saheb aapka

kia baat hai subh se is ghareeb ke aalawa aur koi aap se nahin takraya tha

aap ki tareef aur muhabbat ka behad mashkoor hun

Duan ka talib

javed


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MHussain

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Re: Aia Bade Saba Tu Aahista Chal

«Reply #22 on: July 08, 2009, 01:29:54 PM »

Mr. Javed, interesting poetry, reminds me of Maulana Hali's namz.
Bravo!


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deepika_divya

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Re: Aia Bade Saba Tu Aahista Chal

«Reply #23 on: July 08, 2009, 01:38:18 PM »

Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Javed Ji.. bahoot hi khubsurat likha hai... bahoot Khoob!


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javedarshad

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Re: Aia Bade Saba Tu Aahista Chal

«Reply #24 on: July 08, 2009, 01:45:07 PM »

Shukria Shayara

nawazish hai aap ki

javed


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javedarshad

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Re: Aia Bade Saba Tu Aahista Chal

«Reply #25 on: July 08, 2009, 01:48:27 PM »

Quote from: MHussain on July 08, 2009, 01:29:54 PM

Mr. Javed, interesting poetry, reminds me of Maulana Hali's namz.
Bravo!

Husaain Sb.
Adaab
bahut bahut shukria
aapne padha aur isko saraha
aur izzat afzai ka shukria

mukhlis

javed


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javedarshad

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Re: Aia Bade Saba Tu Aahista Chal

«Reply #26 on: July 08, 2009, 03:56:21 PM »

Quote from: Sophi on July 08, 2009, 01:38:18 PM

Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Javed Ji.. bahoot hi khubsurat likha hai... bahoot Khoob!

ap ka bahut bahut shukria

sophi ji

javed


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mistufer

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Re: Aia Bade Saba Tu Aahista Chal

«Reply #27 on: July 08, 2009, 04:19:13 PM »

Quote from: javedarshad on July 07, 2009, 03:16:13 AM

Aia bade saba tu aahista chal
Soyaa hai abhi Mahboob mera
Aia bade saba tu aahista chal

Woh naaz-o-ada woh paich-o-kham
Sharm-o-haya rooke thee qadam
Woh girna uske aanchal ka
Woh khanakna uski payal ka
Ankhon mein chamakta khuwab hai uske
LabooN per mera bas naam hai uske
Aia bade saba tu aahista chal
Soyaa hai abhi mahboob mera

HoontoN per tabbassum chaya hai
KhuwaboN mein aik khuwab jagaya hai
Kahti hai yeh seene ki dhadkan
Meri aaghoosh mein khud ko paya hai
Aia bade saba tu aahista chal
Sooya hai abhi mahboob mera

Maine jo khuwab sajaye they
Tanhayee mein jo jazbe jagaye they
Aaj sherminda woh khuwaab huye
Sare jazbe bhi aabaad huye

Tujh mein hai baala ki serseraahat
Badan mein uske na chubhti hoo
Thapki zara halke se daina
Mushkil se hai aankh lagee
Aia bade saba tu aahista chal
Soyaa hai abhi mahboob mera

Javed

javed ji
wahhhhhhhhhhh kitni rumani nazm likhi hai
har pankti mein pyaar ji jhalak hai.
yunhi likhte rahiye.
nira


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javedarshad

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Re: Aia Bade Saba Tu Aahista Chal

«Reply #28 on: July 08, 2009, 04:58:42 PM »

Adaab Nira Ji

kaisi hain aap

aapne padha pasand kiya

bahut bahut shukria

javed


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MHussain

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Re: Aia Bade Saba Tu Aahista Chal

«Reply #29 on: July 10, 2009, 12:20:18 AM »

I like your Ikhlas. Thanks


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