***Aik Lafz***

by waheed_rose2004 on September 05, 2005, 05:02:42 PM
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BeNam
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«Reply #60 on: March 02, 2006, 02:41:52 AM »
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bahot achhe sonu ji!

Dil ka ek geet herdum raheta hai adhura,
Intezaar main hun, koi sath de toh ho pura!
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«Reply #61 on: March 02, 2006, 03:25:27 AM »
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shukriyaaa benam ji... wonderfull reply

Mahboob ka naam liya lo woh aa gayi
liye smile sohni sohni aji woh aa gayi
flowers ki jaroorat nahi dene ke liye unko
khwaab main aana toh aadat hai unki


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bahot achhe sonu ji!

Dil ka ek geet herdum raheta hai adhura,
Intezaar main hun, koi sath de toh ho pura!
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«Reply #62 on: March 02, 2006, 04:28:45 PM »
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shukriyaaa benam ji... wonderfull reply

Mahboob ka naam liya lo woh aa gayi
liye smile sohni sohni aji woh aa gayi
flowers ki jaroorat nahi dene ke liye unko
khwaab main aana toh aadat hai unki


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bahot achhe sonu ji!

Dil ka ek geet herdum raheta hai adhura,
Intezaar main hun, koi sath de toh ho pura!


Thnaxxxxx  Benam...... Sonu  mom........   excellent  work  both  of u ...  :lol:

log  is  jamane mein  aksar saath  chord jaate hain
aankhon  mein  sapne  sajakar  tod jaate hain
na karo  ummeed  ab kisi  bhi shaks per
jisko  karoge  pyar wahi  door chale  jaate hain........
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«Reply #63 on: March 05, 2006, 06:50:57 AM »
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thanks babo.... wonderful babo...

basera bhi hoga jab sawera na hoga
tu nahi hai aaj andhera kyon hoga
raat bhi darti hai aane se kareeb
chaandni na hogi bas chand hi hoga

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shukriyaaa benam ji... wonderfull reply

Mahboob ka naam liya lo woh aa gayi
liye smile sohni sohni aji woh aa gayi
flowers ki jaroorat nahi dene ke liye unko
khwaab main aana toh aadat hai unki


Quote from: "BeNam"
bahot achhe sonu ji!

Dil ka ek geet herdum raheta hai adhura,
Intezaar main hun, koi sath de toh ho pura!


Thnaxxxxx  Benam...... Sonu  mom........   excellent  work  both  of you ...  :lol:

log  is  jamane mein  aksar saath  chord jaate hain
aankhon  mein  sapne  sajakar  tod jaate hain
na karo  ummeed  ab kisi  bhi shaks per
jisko  karoge  pyar wahi  door chale  jaate hain........
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«Reply #64 on: March 05, 2006, 01:16:57 PM »
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Kya baat hai Sonu ji, kiss baat per narazgi dikhai jaa rahi hai! Chand ko chandani se dur kyun kiya jaa raha hai! Waheed ji bahot achhe!

Dekh kar ter andaze bayan, Kuchh yaad ata hai,
Tute huey is dil ko koi zakhm naye de jata hai!
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«Reply #65 on: March 06, 2006, 04:20:30 AM »
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kuch nahi benam ji... bus yeo hi deykhrahey they key ager chand or chandi ko ahlag ker diya jaye to keya huga... wonderful benam ji...

naseeb ki mahfil main
bewafaai ka darwaaza khul gaya
jo socha nahi tha kabhi woh
dosti ka tohfa mil gaya



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Kya baat hai Sonu ji, kiss baat per narazgi dikhai jaa rahi hai! Chand ko chandani se dur kyun kiya jaa raha hai! Waheed ji bahot achhe!

Dekh kar ter andaze bayan, Kuchh yaad ata hai,
Tute huey is dil ko koi zakhm naye de jata hai!
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«Reply #66 on: March 06, 2006, 06:19:55 AM »
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kya baat hia kya likha hai sonu ji , waheed ji and benaam ji!!!!!!!
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«Reply #67 on: March 06, 2006, 06:22:37 AM »
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shukriya gesu ji....

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kya baat hia kya likha hai sonu ji , waheed ji and benaam ji!!!!!!!
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«Reply #68 on: March 06, 2006, 06:26:24 AM »
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Aik lafz jo tumhara sunayi diya tha,
Dhadkano ko ek naya tarana diya tha,
Tumne kya keh diya humse ae sanam,
Yeh dil-o-jaan humne tum per lutta diya tha....

gesu's koshish!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #69 on: March 06, 2006, 06:28:30 AM »
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Bahut khoob sabne bahut badhiya likha hai.... Usual Smile
Ek Koshish kar raha hu.......


kahane ko to aik lafz "Pyar" hai...
iss aik lafz mein jiwan ka saar hai...
milega hume ye; ye yakin karte hai...
is yakin pe hum tumse izhar karte hai...
der na karo ab tum iqrar karne mein...
hum teri ek haan ka intezar karte hai....
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«Reply #70 on: March 06, 2006, 06:30:04 AM »
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wonderful gesu ji...

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Aik lafz jo tumhara sunayi diya tha,
Dhadkano ko ek naya tarana diya tha,
Tumne kya keh diya humse ae sanam,
Yeh dil-o-jaan humne tum per lutta diya tha....

gesu's koshish!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #71 on: March 06, 2006, 06:30:53 AM »
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thanks sonu ji!!!!!!!!
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Sonu
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«Reply #72 on: March 06, 2006, 07:32:25 AM »
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jai ji very nice...

u r welcome gesu...
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«Reply #73 on: March 06, 2006, 09:16:14 AM »
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Aik lafz jo tumhara sunayi diya tha,
Dhadkano ko ek naya tarana diya tha,
Tumne kya keh diya humse ae sanam,
Yeh dil-o-jaan humne tum per lutta diya tha....

gesu's koshish!!!!!!!!!


bahot  khoob  Gesu..........  Jai........... sabhi logon ne  bahot accha likha..

ek  Lafz  ki  khatir maine  apni  duniya luta  diya
is jamane ne uske  badle mein  kuch bhi  nahi diya
ai mere  faramosh  mehboob  aaker  dekh  zara
teri  mohbbat ka maine aaj sakda ada  kiya ..............
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«Reply #74 on: March 07, 2006, 04:29:20 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya sonuji,wahedji....good stuff


kehta hu mein unse apne dil ki baatein...
karta hu roz khawabo mein unsein mulakatein..
hasrat-e-dil ab bas yahi hai baki...
tham jaye lete hue naam unka meri ye saasein...
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