Aik paghal nazm paghal samaajoN kay naam

by Brijinder on November 22, 2009, 10:01:30 PM
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Aik Paaghal Nazm Paaghal SmaajoN Ke Naam

Raakh barseygi aasmaanoN se
Fiza meiN bhar jaigi qabaroN ki haddiaN
Apna hi lahu bahyga dariya dariya
NiklyaNgay naNgay-jism murdoN ke juloos

Kuttay roiNgay muNh aflaaq pe dhar kar
Aur raqs karaNygee siyaaroN ki hookeiN
AaNkh barsa karEygi naalioN ke keeRay
Shab peetee phiraygi sooraj ki kai

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Aflaaq- skies, Kai- Vomit
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«Reply #1 on: November 22, 2009, 10:59:16 PM »
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Bahoot Khoob Likha Brijinderji
 Applause Applause Applause
but Shayad Aapne ise galat Section me post Kar diya ye Khumar ki post nahi hai 
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«Reply #2 on: November 23, 2009, 04:52:06 AM »
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Bahut Hi Sundar Likha Hai Brijendra Ji Aapne Applause
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«Reply #3 on: November 23, 2009, 06:57:21 PM »
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Thanks a lot for the kind words.Yes!I also think that i posted it khumar-e-ishq by mistake!!!
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