Aisa kyun hota hai...

by punam on July 13, 2008, 07:01:34 AM
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Aisa kyun hota hai
kisi ki yaad aate hi
mann kahi udne lagta hai
dil bechain ho jata hai...

hota nahin kaam koi dhang se
sab ulat pulat ho jata hai
karna kuchh hota hai
par kuch aur ho jata hai...

uski awaaz kaanon men
yun goonjne lagti hai
kitaab ke panne pe
jaise tasveer dikhne lagti hai...

lagta nahi dil kahin
khoya khoya rahta hai
neend ud jaati hai
usko milne dil machalta rahta hai...

Sochti hun ki woh aajaye abhi
Jab bhi milne ki aas hoti hai
Isi khayaal men khoi rahti hun
Hamesha unka sahr mujh pe rahta hai...

aisa kyun hota hai...
aisa kyun hota hai..

 
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«Reply #1 on: July 13, 2008, 07:20:22 AM »
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Nice one poonam,
really heart touching.
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punam
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«Reply #2 on: July 13, 2008, 07:35:10 AM »
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Thanx angel...
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syednaami
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«Reply #3 on: July 13, 2008, 08:52:59 AM »
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Aisa kyun hota hai aap jano,,
Dil ka rog kahte hain log isse,,
In savaalon ke javaab aap jano..

Kuchh hua aisa asar kya khabar,,
Uska haal bhi to aap jaan lo,,
Hoga us pe bhi aap jaisa hi sahar..

Aisa hoga aur hota rahega,,
Jab talak na ho dilon ka milan,,
Aapke dil-o-dimaagh par woh chhaya rahega..

|Syed Naami|

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Punam Saahiba,,, ek bar phir aap ne apni kavita se mahfil ko aabad kar diya... wah,,, kya umda andaaz hai...
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«Reply #4 on: July 13, 2008, 08:57:45 AM »
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 Applause Applause
nice lines poonam......bahoot achche,

sami
khoob reply hai tumhaara bhi...
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«Reply #5 on: July 13, 2008, 09:09:24 AM »
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Quote from: syednaami on July 13, 2008, 08:52:59 AM
Aisa kyun hota hai aap jano,,
Dil ka rog kahte hain log isse,,
In savaalon ke javaab aap jano..

Kuchh hua aisa asar kya khabar,,
Uska haal bhi to aap jaan lo,,
Hoga us pe bhi aap jaisa hi sahar..

Aisa hoga aur hota rahega,,
Jab talak na ho dilon ka milan,,
Aapke dil-o-dimaagh par woh chhaya rahega..

|Syed Naami|

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Punam Saahiba,,, ek bar phir aap ne apni kavita se mahfil ko aabad kar diya... wah,,, kya umda andaaz hai...
wah ji wah kya khoob likha...
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«Reply #6 on: July 13, 2008, 09:11:17 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on July 13, 2008, 08:57:45 AM
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nice lines poonam......bahoot achche,

sami
khoob reply hai tumhaara bhi...

tanku tanku bhaiya...
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«Reply #7 on: July 13, 2008, 10:03:45 AM »
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Buhat khoob Punam super lines. Thumbs UP

khoob syed acha likha hai aapne.. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #8 on: July 13, 2008, 10:46:01 AM »
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hota nahin kaam koi dhang se
sab ulat pulat ho jata hai
karna kuchh hota hai
par kuch aur ho jata hai...

uski awaaz kaanon men
yun goonjne lagti hai
kitaab ke panne pe
jaise tasveer dikhne lagti hai

Very good work Punam  Applause  Applause

(But aisa kyu lagta?  Winking)
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«Reply #9 on: July 13, 2008, 04:15:35 PM »
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Quote from: punam on July 13, 2008, 07:01:34 AM


aisa kyun hota hai...
aisa kyun hota hai..

 

Subhanallah! Kya baat he.

ye aysa waysa jesaa bhi hotaa he magar is ke natije meN ek achhi kaveeta naseeb hoti he.  tongue3
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«Reply #10 on: July 13, 2008, 06:58:21 PM »
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Wah,,, Shihab baba kya khatarnaak likha hai.. class ka hai... maza aagaya...

Quote from: honeyrose on July 13, 2008, 10:03:45 AM
Buhat khoob Punam super lines. Thumbs UP

khoob syed acha likha hai aapne.. Thumbs UP

Shukriya HoneyRose Saahiba aapne haosla badhaaya...
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«Reply #11 on: July 14, 2008, 04:01:03 AM »
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Thanks Honey di and sonu...
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«Reply #12 on: July 14, 2008, 04:05:39 AM »
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Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on July 13, 2008, 04:15:35 PM
Subhanallah! Kya baat he.

ye aysa waysa jesaa bhi hotaa he magar is ke natije meN ek achhi kaveeta naseeb hoti he.  tongue3

nateeja ka toh mujhe pata nahi par aap jaise bas encourage jaroor karte hain...
thanx a lot Atiq bhaiya...
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«Reply #13 on: July 14, 2008, 05:33:41 AM »
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bohut khoob punam ji
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«Reply #14 on: July 14, 2008, 11:39:38 AM »
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achaa likha hai poonam ji Applause aap likhte rahe aise hee lagaataar.

netra...
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