-----/// Aisaa asar kar diyaa ///----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on September 08, 2014, 08:39:12 PM
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kyaa batayein hum kisise ki unhone  kyaa asar kar diyaa
deewaaron  se  bane makaan ko unhone  ghar kar diyaa

jalaake   sau   chiraag  kabhi   humein   roshani  naa  mili
ek  baar  muskuraake  roshan   saaraa  shahar  kar diyaa

bas  aankh  hi  lagi  thi  abhi  ki   hogayaa  unkaa aanaa
dekhiye  naa  aakar  kaise   raat  ko  dopahar  kar  diyaa

koshish  to  bahut  ki  humne  ki yeh  dil  naa  lage unse
jaadu  yun   chalaa  unkaa  har asar ko  beasar kar diyaa

hui  hi  nahi  baarish  yahaan  jaane  kitne   hi  saalon se
chhookar  unhone  bahaar  saa  saaraa  manzar kar diyaa

kahin ho  naa  jaaye  mohabbat  is dar se duur  the hum
aake kareeb hamaare unhone dewaanaa magar kar diyaa

naam 'Hriday' thaa  jiskaa, kaanch  kaa  hi   thaa tukdaa
use deke thodi mohabbat, usko sangemarmar kar  diyaa





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 वास्तव में आपने बहुत खूब..कलम चलायी है - बहुत-2बधाई !
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«Reply #2 on: September 09, 2014, 12:50:51 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: September 09, 2014, 04:10:50 AM »
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bahut bahut aur bahut khoob hriday bhai.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

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«Reply #4 on: September 09, 2014, 04:55:53 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob hridayji.......

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«Reply #5 on: September 09, 2014, 05:36:53 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: September 09, 2014, 07:05:30 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on September 08, 2014, 08:39:12 PM


kyaa batayein hum kisise ki unhone  kyaa asar kar diyaa
deewaaron  se  bane makaan ko unhone  ghar kar diyaa

jalaake   sau   chiraag  kabhi   humein   roshani  naa  mili
ek  baar  muskuraake  roshan   saaraa  shahar  kar diyaa

bas  aankh  hi  lagi  thi  abhi  ki   hogayaa  unkaa aanaa
dekhiye  naa  aakar  kaise   raat  ko  dopahar  kar  diyaa

koshish  to  bahut  ki  humne  ki yeh  dil  naa  lage unse
jaadu  yun   chalaa  unkaa  har asar ko  beasar kar diyaa

hui  hi  nahi  baarish  yahaan  jaane  kitne   hi  saalon se
chhookar  unhone  bahaar  saa  saaraa  banjar kar diyaa

kahin ho  naa  jaaye  mohabbat  is dar se duur  the hum
aake kareeb hamaare unhone dewaanaa magar kar diyaa

naam 'Hriday' thaa  jiskaa, kaanch  kaa  hi  tukdaa  thaa
use deke thodi mohabbat, usko sangemarmar kar  diyaa





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«Reply #8 on: September 10, 2014, 06:29:11 PM »
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main aap sabhi kaa tahe dil se shukriyaa adaa kartaa hoon jo aapne meri is koshish ko waqt diyaa, padhaa aur pasand kiyaa, bahut bahut shukriyaa aap sabhi kaa....!!!

Quote from: sushilbansal on September 09, 2014, 12:15:53 AM
वास्तव में आपने बहुत खूब..कलम चलायी है - बहुत-2बधाई !

Quote from: sksaini4 on September 09, 2014, 12:50:51 AM
waah waah bahut khoob

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bahut bahut aur bahut khoob hriday bhai.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

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bahut bahut khoob hridayji.......

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bahut abhut shukriyaaaa Shireen ji.....!!!



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Bhaut khooob Usual Smile
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Vikas ji aur Jnyana ji....!!!

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