aise bahoon ka haar karu

by VIPAL on June 10, 2007, 11:55:03 AM
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VIPAL
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Mere pass aao mere mehboob
tujhe duniya se main kahin chupa lu
mil jayein tujhe har khushian
apne seene mein tera har ghum chupa lu
mehak jaye tera jeevan sara,
apne hathon se tera shringar karu
bhool jaye yeh zamana tu sara
aise bahoon ka haar karu....!!!
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Shikha12
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«Reply #1 on: June 10, 2007, 12:33:51 PM »
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That's really Lovely... Vipal Usual Smile

We don't knew about ur this writing talent...
Keep Writing...
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punam
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«Reply #2 on: June 10, 2007, 12:40:30 PM »
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vipal ji bahat hi acha likha aap ne...
really nice ... keep writing ...
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Rajbir
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«Reply #3 on: June 10, 2007, 04:47:01 PM »
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Lo ji sada bhanja wi mast ho gaya khumar wich :D

Lage raho Sector 13 :evil: ke waasi :D
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #4 on: June 11, 2007, 05:35:12 AM »
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Its really sweet on by u Vipal.. keep writing

Best wishes
Divya
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VIPAL
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«Reply #5 on: June 11, 2007, 06:58:14 AM »
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Thanks Shikha .. kabhi kabhi deemag kharab ho jata hai to ulta seedha likh deta hu tongue3 tongue3

Thanks Punam :D

Mama ji kade aao sade Sector 13 tongue3 tongue3 daru sharu peende han :D

Thanks Divya for ur appreciation. i will definately try to bore all of u with words regularly !!!

par yaar koi reply toh do ....
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punam
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«Reply #6 on: June 11, 2007, 07:18:52 AM »
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vipal ji...bas yeh aap ka reply toh nahi par ab jo dil me aaya likh di...

kaun aaya mere sapno me jisse maine kabhi dekha hi nahi
ek anjaana sa ehsaas jo pehele kabhi mehsus kia hi nahi

aisa haal hai uske liye jisse pehele kabhi dekha nahi
yeh lamhe ye aisa waqt pata nahi kabhi phir aayega ya nahi

khuda kare yeh khwaab jo dekha woh kabhi toote hi nahi
yeh ehsaas yeh khushi mil jaaye jisse pehele kabhi manga hi nahi...
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VIPAL
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«Reply #7 on: June 11, 2007, 07:25:47 AM »
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wow..nice punam... :D

jhooth bolna koi tumse sikhe.. itna achha likh kar kehti ho.. likhti nahi.. shayad koi aor punam hogi tongue3 tongue3
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Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: June 11, 2007, 02:50:22 PM »
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bahoot khoob Vipul and Punam!!
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VIPAL
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«Reply #9 on: June 11, 2007, 03:21:15 PM »
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kasam kha lo aap mere naam ki dhajiyan udhane ki... sad5

reply bhi likho app.. logo ne bohat tareef ki hai aapki :D
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Pooja
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«Reply #10 on: June 11, 2007, 04:20:46 PM »
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Chalte ho jab sung sung
Ek sirhan si dorr jaati hai
Dekha karu tumhe kaise
Ek haya ki kamkapi cha jaati hai

Tham lo ajj hath mera
Yahi baat man mai atti hai
De do apni bahon ka haar mujhe
Bas yahi dua dil se nikali jaati hai
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vitasta
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«Reply #11 on: June 11, 2007, 11:41:39 PM »
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kya khoob likha hai vipal, punam aur pooja!! Usual Smile
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VIPAL
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«Reply #12 on: June 12, 2007, 04:40:38 AM »
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Thanks Vitasta n too Good pooja :D

Just one more madness tongue3 tongue3

mehboob mere tujhe bahoon ka main har karu
appni har thakan utar,aram karu
khoya rahu teri zulfon tale din bhar
aapne machalte mann mein karar bharu

dheke yeh anhein tere hi andaz
aaisi apni mohbaat ka izhar karu
bhar lu bahoon mein kas kar kabhi
kabhi lubon se tere jannat-e-jam bharu...!!!
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