AJNABHEE

by madhuwesh on April 29, 2009, 07:17:29 AM
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KAASH HUM AJNABHEE HI RAHETE TOH ACHA RAHETA
KAASH UNSE NA MILTE ,NA AANKHO SE AANKHEIN MILTI AUR NA PYAR HOTA.
KAASH YE DIL UNKE LIYE NA DHADAKTA TOH AAJ MERE SEENE MEIN ITNA DARD NA HOTA,
KAASH UNKE LIYE MAI ITNA AANSU NA BAHATI TOH MERE AANKHO MEIN CHAMAK RAHETA.
KAASH UNKE KHAYALO MEIN ISS TARAH NA KOYE RAHETI TOH MERE DIL MEIN KITNA SUKOON RAHETA,
KAASH WOH AJNABHEE HI RAHETA TOH ACHA HOTA.

YE BHI KOSHISH KI HAI.4GIVE ME 4 MY MISTAKES.

MADHU.
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«Reply #1 on: April 29, 2009, 07:43:18 AM »
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Beautiful work dear.......lekin abhi to pyaar ho gaya ab kya karogi  Winking
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«Reply #2 on: April 29, 2009, 07:57:39 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 29, 2009, 07:43:18 AM
Beautiful work dear.......lekin abhi to pyaar ho gaya ab kya karogi  ;)LAGTA HAI INDIA AA JAHUNGI APNE GHAYEL KE PAAS.
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«Reply #3 on: April 29, 2009, 08:04:17 AM »
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aapki koshish kabil-e-tareef hai madhu ji.....
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«Reply #4 on: April 29, 2009, 08:15:08 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on April 29, 2009, 08:04:17 AM
aapki koshish kabil-e-tareef hai madhu ji.....

thanx a lot bekaraar ji.
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«Reply #5 on: April 29, 2009, 09:08:08 AM »
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Sunder rachna, Madhuwesh Ji
Keep up.
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #6 on: April 29, 2009, 09:28:41 AM »
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very nice madhuwesh ji..........
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«Reply #7 on: April 29, 2009, 02:49:36 PM »
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MADHUVESH Ji Behad Khubsoorat Rachna Hai aapki.. Bahut dil se Likhi Lagti hai.. isliye Iski Khubsoorati aur Badh gai hai..!! Applause Applause

Waise maine aaj aapko Pahali Baar Padha hai.. aur padh kar itna acha laga ki ab aapki har Post ka intzaar rahega.. yunhi likhte rahiye..!! Usual Smile Usual Smile


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«Reply #8 on: April 29, 2009, 03:28:41 PM »
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bohot acha likha hai madhuwesh ji..keep writing!
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«Reply #9 on: April 29, 2009, 04:38:26 PM »
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Nicely written madhuwesh...
God Bless keep writing.. Applause
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«Reply #10 on: April 29, 2009, 09:20:58 PM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on April 29, 2009, 09:08:08 AM
Sunder rachna, Madhuwesh Ji
Keep up.
SARVESH RASTOGI
bahut bahut shukriya,sarvesh ji.
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«Reply #11 on: April 29, 2009, 09:24:52 PM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on April 29, 2009, 04:38:26 PM
Nicely written madhuwesh...

God Bless keep writing.. Applause]

thanx Angel ji.aap bhi achi likhti ho.
god bless u too dear.tke care.
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Quote from: aaina on April 29, 2009, 09:28:41 AM
very nice madhuwesh ji..........]
thanx aaina 4 your comments.waise aap bahut khoob likhti ho.
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«Reply #13 on: April 29, 2009, 09:30:38 PM »
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Bohat Achche Madhuwesh Ji,.
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«Reply #14 on: April 29, 2009, 09:31:24 PM »
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Quote from: sanya310 on April 29, 2009, 03:28:41 PM
bohot acha likha hai madhuwesh ji..keep writing!
bahut bahut shukriya,saniya ji.aap bhi kya khoob likhti ho.
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