Ajnabi

by srishti2511 on August 30, 2005, 03:12:12 PM
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«Reply #105 on: November 11, 2005, 06:25:54 AM »
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he he .... :lol:  :lol:
sorry sorry sorry...couldn't be here!

i have decided that i will not write anything in this forum as i am waiting for you to start a thread....thta's cos i am running out of words to write on the same topic and it is high time that you begin !!!


Well cum back sristi!!

Aaur Itni lambi english mein kahani ki jageh 4 lafzon ki shayri hi likh di hoti, aaur rahi baat is forum ki to wo maine aapko pahle bhi kaha hai ki ye forum maine 1000 pages ka banana hai, so i wont stop writing in this forum and wish so will u sristi!!

Quote from: "gesu_kapoor"
bahut khoob nirbhay ji

Yeh dil ki bechaini mujhse sahi nahi jaati ,
Tumse door rehkar mein ab reh nahi paati,
Dil to kehta hai marr jaaoon isi pal,
Per kya karoon mein marr bhi nahi paati,
Kya bataoon tumhe kaise tadapta hai yeh dil,
Pass aao kabhi to sunaaon kaise dhadktaa hai yeh dil


Aap ney bhi aacha likha Gesu, I hope aap ki meri jamegi, lets Begin.

Tere dhadkanoki gunj
mere har ehsaas mein hai samati,
vaar dun ye jaan tujhper
jo marney sey meri muhaabat sach ho jaati,
kia sunaou tujhe haal-e-dil............
maine pahle bhi kaha hai, fir bata dun tuhje
Meri muhabaat tere lafzon mein nahi samati.

I hope aap logon ko aachi lagegi.
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«Reply #106 on: November 15, 2005, 02:29:20 PM »
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wah wah!!

manti hum ke lafzon mein nahi samati teri mohabbat
main is vishwas ko tutne nahi doongi
ke laut aao tum ab dil nahi lagta mera
ke in lafzon ka bhi rukh mod doongi
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nirbhay
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«Reply #107 on: November 15, 2005, 03:08:36 PM »
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Bahoot bahoot khoob sristi, kya likha hai aapne wah !!

Hawaon se fizon ka rukh mor dunga
Jahan se saaare judaai ka dukh tod dunga
Ye dil-o-jaan aab tumhare hai.........
Jo tum mil jao mujhe
Mai Har khushiyon ko tumhari oor mor dunga!!!
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«Reply #108 on: November 15, 2005, 03:57:21 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai nirbhay, srishti and kapoor ji!!!

her khushi tuj per muskaryegi
rooh teri jab mujme simat jayegi!
sirf yah jameen hogi aor asmaan
payaar ki lahro per, jab yah zindagi laharyegi!!
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«Reply #109 on: November 16, 2005, 05:26:03 AM »
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Thnx sis, and this is nice 1 !!
 
 Bikti agar khusiyan to koun usey bechta
     BIktey agar aansu to koun usey kharidta
     GUm agar bikta to hum aapse kharid letey
     Par aap ki khusiyon ke liye... khud ko bech dete
{NM}
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«Reply #110 on: November 16, 2005, 05:36:50 AM »
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sorry hum kaafi dino baad aaye hain and thanks jo aaplogon ko hamari koshish pasand aayi..

Mohabbatt mein na jaane kaisi tadap yeh hoti hai,
har pal unke saath rahoon yahi ik kasak si hoti hai
Pass unke raho to ajab asar dikhati  hai,
 Tanhaiyon ko pakadkar hum jinki baatein karte hai,
Pass unhi ke aatey fir kyon  ghabra se jaate hai.....
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«Reply #111 on: November 16, 2005, 07:52:46 AM »
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Well cum Back Gesu!!! Aaatey hi dhamakey shuru, nice 1.

 Na Ghabrao is tarah ke ghabraney se,
 kaha manzil milti hai..
 Dubtey rah jaatey hai Lehron mein,
 Chah kar bhi saahil kahan milti hai (NM)
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«Reply #112 on: November 16, 2005, 10:02:21 AM »
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2 aajnabi mile to milte rahe ...

jab milte rahe to dosti hui......

jab dost ban gaye to phir ek dusro ko samajhne lage...

jo samajhne lage to pyar ho gaya......

jab pyar hua to raste mil gaye .....manzile mil gai....

jab manzile mili to phir ek ho gaye jo ek ho gaye to dastan ban gai .....

2 aajnabi mile 2 aajnabi mile..............
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«Reply #113 on: November 16, 2005, 10:39:17 AM »
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Wah Wah Tushar bhai!! jawab nahi aapke shabdon ka.

Ye forum Aaab Ajnabiyon ke milan ka Forum Ho chala.

"2 aajnabi mile 2 aajnabi mile..............'

Dua kartey hai aagey bhi miltey rahein, pyar ki manzil buntey rahein..
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«Reply #114 on: November 16, 2005, 03:47:09 PM »
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Good one gesu and nirbhay!!!

Tushar ji tusi gr88 ho!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #115 on: December 19, 2005, 02:03:26 PM »
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wow all gr8 stuff...

ek ajnabee se mujhe itna pyar kyoun hai......
inkar karne par chahat ka ikrar kyoun hai.....
use pana nahi meri taqdeer main nahi shayad.....
phir har gadi usika intezaar kyoun hai......
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«Reply #116 on: December 20, 2005, 08:35:35 AM »
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Hathon ki kalam aaur Labon.n pe tere iktiyaar kiu hai
Chhahat ki ek roshni aaur Muhabaat se iqraar kiu hai
Koi chah.ta to nahi hamein, fhir nigah ko intezar kiu hai  
Ajnabi.yon ka mela ye duniya.....................!!!
Hoti baar baar Ajnabi se Aankhein char kiu hai?
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«Reply #117 on: December 20, 2005, 10:57:55 AM »
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thanks nirbhay ji, pooja ji and all
aaj hi dekhein aap logon ke is thread ke replies sorry for replying late.....aur nirbhay ji dhamake to aap karte hain ham to bus aise hi jo dil  mein aaya likh diya... ek aur arz hai...

unhoney hamein chahne ka ek naya dastoor banaya hai,
dekha nahi unhe fir bhi yeh kaisa jaadoo chalaya hai,
sapno mein aakar apne hone ka ehsaas jagaya hai,
kehtey hain mein pass hoon tere fir kyon dil ghabraya hai,
dhoondhli si tasveer se unki jo udas ho jaate hai,
dheemey si ek awaaz in kaano mein aa jaati hai
tumko paane ko ae humdum hum bhi to tadpe jaate hain,
aisi chahat ki boli se dil dhadka sa jaate hai
na jaane hamein chahne ka yeh kaisa chalan chalaya hai.....
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«Reply #118 on: December 20, 2005, 10:58:48 AM »
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jai shree krishna!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #119 on: December 20, 2005, 11:24:12 AM »
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nirbhay ji yeh aapki shayari per...
koi chahey na bhi agar intezaar to fir bhi rehta hai,
kaun hai woh pata nahi per ehsaas to fir bhi rehta hai,
khwaabon mein hi sahi farishtion sa deedar to fir bhi rehta hai,
mera dil uske rang mein rangne ko betaab to fir bhi rehta hai,
koi chahey na bhi agar intezaar to fir bhi rehta hai........
jai shree krishna!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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