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«Reply #30 on: September 13, 2005, 07:03:23 AM » |
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Bahut aacha likha sristi je , aaur tushar ji aapne bhi aacha likha .
Pyar hotha nahi jhuta ye hum kahenge tumse
par bewafaa wo hai ki nahi ye bhi kaise kahu tumse
waqt bewafai ka hai ya judai ka ye aap zara puchien unse.
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«Reply #31 on: September 13, 2005, 09:00:54 AM » |
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Abhi Is Taraf Na Nigah Kar Main Ghazal Ki Palkeen Sanwar Loon..........
Mera Lafz Lafz Ho Aieena Tujhe Aieeney Main Utar Loon.
Kaiee Ajnabi Teri Rah MAin Merey Paas Se Yun Guzar Gaye.........
Jinheen Dhaikh Ka Yeh Tarap Hoi Tera Naam Le K PuKar loon.
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nirbhay
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«Reply #32 on: September 13, 2005, 12:34:14 PM » |
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too gud fawad ji , bhaut aacha likha
Ke teri galiyon ka na thikhana ke tujhe kaise pukar lun
tu hai mera kayash tujhe zahen tak utaar lun
hum hai ajnabi ek duje ke liye is tasvir ko zara savar lun
meri raag raag me baase ho tum aab tere bin mai...........
mahfil mein hbi tanha yaar hun.
JAI SHREE KRISHNA.
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«Reply #33 on: September 13, 2005, 01:29:27 PM » |
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nirbhay .. bohat khoob
main tamam din ka thaka howa tu ajnabi sham ka jaga howa........
zara tahar ja isi moor paar taray sath sham guzar loon...........
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«Reply #34 on: September 13, 2005, 03:24:27 PM » |
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Is sham ke bhi hai nazare kia khub
par late hai rang surkh mere mahboob
aab jaye ye sari sham mai khane me doob
jo na khile chera-e-mahboob.
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«Reply #35 on: September 14, 2005, 01:05:28 PM » |
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Ajanbi jo aaj tak ki , amanat hai wo hamare dil ki
raaz ki baat bataein ghayal tab bhi tha , jab suni gunj payal ki
ha raaz ki baat bataein hai wo ek punji jivan ki
Shobha aaj se hai wo mere dil-o-jaan se mere aagan ki.
JAI SHREE KRISHNA.
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«Reply #36 on: September 14, 2005, 07:44:00 PM » |
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very nice all!!
sanson mein woh basa hai humari
dil ki dhadkanon mein chupa hai humari
uske liye jiti hoon, marongi bhi
akhir woh jaan hain humari
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«Reply #37 on: September 15, 2005, 07:39:24 AM » |
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bahut bahut bohooooooooot khub likha sristi ji , keep it up
Jo meri sanson me basa hai wo sanam ka hi ek naam
ke yadein uski satayein tadpayein suboh shyam
humsafar wo zindgani me ke safar sare unke naam
yaadein hi to baasi hai rag rag mein yaad raha na uska naam.
JAI SHREE KRISHNA.
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«Reply #38 on: September 15, 2005, 08:20:04 AM » |
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Woh to meri sansoon mein basa hai
janay kiyon log usay ajnabi kehtay hain
Unki sannsooon ko saba kehtay hain
Unki khushboo ko hina kehtay hain
Ho judai ka sabab kuch bhi
Hum issay apni khata kehtay hain...
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«Reply #39 on: September 15, 2005, 07:50:12 PM » |
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thx...very well writen nirbhay ji and fawad!....beautiful!
jab se dekha unko humne
tabse unpe marte hai
najane humare dil ne kya soncha
par hum unse mohabbat karte hain
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«Reply #40 on: September 16, 2005, 08:00:08 AM » |
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Ur well come sristi ji and well wrote
Hai ye yakeen ki haad se door door
Hai ye khwabon ke gulistan ke pass pass
dil ko bharam ye ho chala ajnabi ki lagi aas
ajnabi se dilbar bane aur dil milne ka hai ehsaas.
JAI SHREE KRISHNA.
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«Reply #41 on: September 16, 2005, 09:26:47 AM » |
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Jai shri Krishna Nirbhay ji........... Bahut achha likha hai aap sabhi ne..........Very Nice........
Tasveer jiski meri aankhon mein basi hai.......
Koi mere dil se poochhey wo kitni hasi hai..........
Jaanta hoon ki milna abhi mushkil hai ussey..........
per fir bhi lagta hai jaisey.....wo yahin kahin hai............. :wink:
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«Reply #42 on: September 16, 2005, 10:20:02 AM » |
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Ur well come sristi ji and well wrote
Hai ye yakeen ki haad se door door
Hai ye khwabon ke gulistan ke pass pass
dil ko bharam ye ho chala ajnabi ki lagi aas
ajnabi se dilbar bane aur dil milne ka hai ehsaas.
JAI SHREE KRISHNA. khool...budddy !  |
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«Reply #43 on: September 16, 2005, 01:28:32 PM » |
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jai shree krishna nautral ji aaur aapne bhi aacha likha , and thnx jawed ji
In haqiquat ki masgul se ek zanat door door
Khwabon ke baghban mai hai tera intezar
aankhein hai yaha taras rahi kie tera intezar
Ajnabi tu aab ham se nahi aa - e sitamgar.......
baas dil chahta hai tuhjse ye raza baas yehi karar.
JAI SHREE KRISHNA.
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«Reply #44 on: September 16, 2005, 07:11:58 PM » |
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thx and please no "ji" nirbhay ji (its been a long time!)
dhadkanon mein meri basa hai woh
par kehta khud ko ajnabi kyun hai...
mana ke use ishq nahi humse
par aisi berukhi kyun hai
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