Ak din maine ak sapna dekha

by deepika_divya on December 19, 2007, 05:26:25 AM
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(Art by DIVYA)

Ak din maine ak sapna dekha
Socha na kabhi fir aisa hoga
Khwab sirf kwab hi reh jaayenge
Ya fir poora sapna mera hoga

Ak safed se chader hode ak jahna
Lal phool khila  pedo par tha
Nile asmaan ki chavi jheel pe pade
Jahn ak madam sa dun baj raha tha

Beti thi  ped ki chav mea tanha
Najane ankho mea kiska intzaar tha
Saj daj k beti thi kisi k intzaar mea
Samne ak andekha chera kada tha

Kya pata who sirf ak sapna tha
Woh Sanam nahi uska ehsaas tha
Pal bar ki muskarat de gaya tha
Umeed ko meri ak sukun de gaya tha

Par karti rahungi yuhin itzaar uska
Woh saath nahi uska saya tho hoga
Aaj nahi usko meri fikar na kadar
Par,Ak Din meri kami ka ehsaash hoga
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«Reply #1 on: December 19, 2007, 07:30:11 AM »
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Wow..... Great DIVYA... Bahut Bahut Khooooob.. padh kar Maza aa gaya.. !! Usual Smile Usual Smile

Behad Sunder Ehasaas Likhe Hain aapne.. Great Work Dear.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Vicky
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«Reply #2 on: December 19, 2007, 11:08:07 AM »
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divya ji gr8 lines
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«Reply #3 on: December 19, 2007, 11:57:15 AM »
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kya baat hai di..bahot acha laga ..
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«Reply #4 on: December 19, 2007, 02:25:18 PM »
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Very beautiful Divs ....!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: December 19, 2007, 02:57:36 PM »
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Nice One Deepika JI,.
Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.
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«Reply #6 on: December 19, 2007, 04:36:33 PM »
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Ek se badkar ek Post...lagta ai Khumar chaya hua hai...Divya pe...another one Superb Dear..!!!
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«Reply #7 on: December 20, 2007, 02:14:02 AM »
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Wah wah... kya baat hai Divya... bahut khoob likha hai aapne. Accha laga padkar
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«Reply #8 on: December 20, 2007, 03:42:13 AM »
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very nice keep it up
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«Reply #9 on: December 20, 2007, 04:38:11 AM »
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Thank u Thank u thank u So much Vicky, Punam, Talat di, Gaurav Roja N Prem.
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«Reply #10 on: December 20, 2007, 09:22:53 AM »
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     apne haathoN kee lakiroN meiN basa le muJhko
     main hooN tera to naseeb apna bana le muJhko

     muJhse too poochne aaya hai wafa ke maani
     ye teri sadaa-dili maar na Daale muJhko
   
     khud ko maiN baaNt na daalooN kahin daaman-daaman
     kar diya tune agar mere hawaale muJhko

     bada fir bada hai maiN zehar bhi pee jaaooN 'qatil'
     shart ye hai koi baahoN meiN sambhale muJhko

     _________________________________-Qateel Shifaai-
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«Reply #11 on: December 20, 2007, 10:41:40 AM »
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bahoot khoob Jaanasheen Ji.. kya khoob likha hi.. Very Good lines...
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«Reply #12 on: December 20, 2007, 12:29:31 PM »
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Shukriya Deepika Ji,.
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«Reply #13 on: December 20, 2007, 05:19:58 PM »
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yeh khawab kabhi sachi hoa kia ?
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«Reply #14 on: December 22, 2007, 02:09:57 PM »
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Khwaab Hote Hain Dekh Kar Mann Behlaane Ko,.
Ye Kabhi Sach Nahi Hote,
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