Akeli Raat Ki Baat...dolly

by dolly on April 20, 2012, 05:55:37 PM
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Tanha Si Lagti Shabnami Ye Raat
Chooti Hothon Ko Teri Har Baat

Hanskar Ulhaano ko Sunna Tera
Raat Bhar Tujhko Jagaane Ki Baat

Jab Tab Mera Roothna Vo Tumse
Baahon Mein Simat kar Aane Ki Baat

Surkh Labon Par Chuppi Saji Thi
Hui Thi Saanson Ki Saanson Se Baat

Saath Na Tu Par Ehsaas Tumhaara
Beeti Raaton Se Guzarne Ki Baat

Baaton Mein Tumse Izhaar-e-Mohabbat
Saugaat Ban Gayee Raat Kee Mulaqaat

Tum Agar Hote Yahin Aas Paas
Nahi Chubhti Yun Akeli Si Raat.....Usual Smile
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«Reply #1 on: April 20, 2012, 06:34:17 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Dolly ji... bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai ye aapki...!!1
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«Reply #2 on: April 20, 2012, 06:37:43 PM »
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Bahut badhiya Didi
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: April 20, 2012, 07:28:39 PM »
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Dolly Jee Aadaab!


Bahut khoob Mohtarmaa behad achchi peshkash hai...
sabhi ahsaas O khayaal kafi khoob rahe.. Usual Smile

humari dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye...
Aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile   

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«Reply #4 on: April 20, 2012, 07:34:50 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khub...Applause Applause Applause

Shad o Aabaad Rahiye...

Shihab

Bahut bahut shukriya shihaab jii...Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: April 20, 2012, 07:45:48 PM »
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Tanha Si Lagti Shabnami Ye Raat
Chooti Hothon Ko Teri Har Baat

Hanskar Ulhaano ko Sunna Tera
Raat Bhar Tujhko Jagaane Ki Baat

Jab Tab Mera Roothna Vo Tumse
Baahon Mein Simat kar Aane Ki Baat

Surkh Labon Par Chuppi Saji Thi
Hui Thi Saanson Ki Saanson Se Baat

Saath Na Tu Par Ehsaas Tumhaara
Beeti Raaton Se Guzarne Ki Baat

Baaton Mein Tumse Izhaar-e-Mohabbat
Saugaat Ban Gayee Raat Kee Mulaqaat

Tum Agar Hote Yahin Aas Paas
Nahi Chubhti Yun Akeli Si Raat.....Usual Smile
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bahut pyaar sangeet bharaa mohabbat ka kalaam
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«Reply #6 on: April 20, 2012, 07:50:53 PM »
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Dolly ji, aap neh toh purey mere dil ki baat apney pyare alfaaz meh likh di ... reading it, i was feeling, as if its written just for me coz am going thru the same being all alone here in mumbai ....

you have written toooo goood, tooo good really .... wah wah

jasbir singh
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«Reply #7 on: April 20, 2012, 08:11:21 PM »
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bahut ehsaas aur zazbaat bahra kalaam hai .... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: April 20, 2012, 10:05:20 PM »
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bahut khoob dolly ji.. Behad khoobsurat khayaalon ki  maala pahnaayee hai aapne. Idhq ke khumaar mq doobi is kalaam par dhero badhaai.. Kya imahination hai, aise hi likhtity rahiye.. Shandaar peshkash.
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«Reply #9 on: April 21, 2012, 04:42:17 AM »
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waaaaahhhh waaaah--
kya baat kya baat
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maata ki jai ho:
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«Reply #10 on: April 21, 2012, 05:02:40 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Dolly ji... bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai ye aapki...!!1

Shukriya bahut bahut hridayjii...Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: April 21, 2012, 05:52:26 AM »
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bahut badiya hai dolly ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: April 21, 2012, 07:13:16 AM »
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 Applause
bahut khoob .
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«Reply #13 on: April 21, 2012, 04:01:18 PM »
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bahut sunder
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«Reply #14 on: April 22, 2012, 01:40:41 PM »
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Bahut badhiya Didi
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thank you anahita...Usual Smile
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