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Ek Pyar hai mera jo mera suroor hai......
Nashe me uske yeh Shayar aaj choor hai......
Kahani na kehna ise dastaan me likhna chahata hoon......
Lage hai mele khushion ke toh gum aaj door hai......
Ek Pyar hai mera jo mera Suroor hai.......
Aankhein jiski Shabnami Dil thoda masoom jaroor hai.....
Nahi Samajhti iss bedard dunia ko uske liye toh yahan harr koi Huzoor hai......
Na Samajh sahi par Pyar hai mera jo mera Suroor hai.......
Chahata hoon use main kitna yeh khud pata lagana Numumkin hai......
Chand sa Chamakta uska Chehra toh Khawabon se bhara uska Jabeen hai.......
Timtimati Chandani me thandi hawa se uska lehrata aanchal......
Saath hoti hai jab woh mere toh hota mujhe bhi guroor hai......
Haan Chahana kisi ko koi Gunha nahi.....Ek Pyar hai mera jo mera Suroor hai.........
Maut bhi na kar payegi kabhi Judaa hume......
Dekhna Dhoondke milayegi harr Raah hume......
Koi toh hamari Chahat ki bhi Kabr ko sajayega.....
Kehlayegi yeh Dastaan Amar.....yeh Prem bhi ~~*Amar Prem*~~ kehlayega........!!!!!!!!!![/color]
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«Reply #1 on: June 21, 2006, 01:17:28 PM » |
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bahut khub gaurav bhai ..........aapka surur dil per hamare bhi chad raha hai......
woh chale gaye jab hame chodke kisi aur ke saath
dil mai reh gaya amar prem ka sapna ,prem ke saath
................@fahi@...............
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #2 on: June 21, 2006, 01:24:45 PM » |
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Shukriya Fahi bhai.....Do lines me bhi bahut kuch keh gaye
Amar Prem marne baad bhi Zinda hua karte hai.....
Jaise Shahjahan or Mumtaaz ka log aaj bhi naam liya karte hai......
Likhi jaati hai Dastaan inki deewano ke Dilon me.....
Karte ho woh basar harr Masjid or Majaar me....!!!!!!!!!
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purani_jeans_aur_guitar
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«Reply #3 on: June 21, 2006, 01:33:19 PM » |
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gaurav bhai pata hai aaj aapne kalam se kahi na kahi meri zindagi ko chu liya hai ..............very nice
mehfilo mai apne pyar ko banakar nazm
dard-e-dil se bhi sabko hasate rahe
woh chod gaye raah-e-zindagi mai hame tanha
per hum tanhayi mai bhi unhe hi chahte rahe.
.............@fahi@...............
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ranjana
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«Reply #4 on: June 21, 2006, 06:10:08 PM » |
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ek dassatan pyaar ki fir se shru hui
yeh kahaani thee ek fir haqaikat kaise hui
dil se dil jab mile toh ek pyaar ka deep jalne laga
dil se ek jhankaar hui aur AMER PREM dil mein palne laga
yougo yougo ki dastaan fir se dohayri jaane lagi
MUMTAAZ ban ke koi kali fir se SHAHJAHAN ke dil mein samane lagi
fir se pyaar ka ek TAJMEHAL kahin per jasie banane laga
chandani raato mein koi fir se chup chup ke milne laga
phool pyaar ke fir se dil main kahi khilne lage
mosam fir se pyaar ke rango mein dhalne laga
chhaa gya ek khumar sa sabke dilo mein kahi geharayi tak
lo aaj se koi AMAR PERM ki kahaani apne shabado mein likhne laga
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«Reply #5 on: June 21, 2006, 06:47:14 PM » |
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ek dassatan pyaar ki fir se shru hui
yeh kahaani thee ek fir haqaikat kaise hui
dil se dil jab mile toh ek pyaar ka deep jalne laga
dil se ek jhankaar hui aur AMER PREM dil mein palne laga
yougo yougo ki dastaan fir se dohayri jaane lagi
MUMTAAZ ban ke koi kali fir se SHAHJAHAN ke dil mein samane lagi
fir se pyaar ka ek TAJMEHAL kahin per jasie banane laga
chandani raato mein koi fir se chup chup ke milne laga
phool pyaar ke fir se dil main kahi khilne lage
mosam fir se pyaar ke rango mein dhalne laga
chhaa gya ek khumar sa sabke dilo mein kahi geharayi tak
lo aaj se koi AMAR PERM ki kahaani apne shabado mein likhne laga Lajawaab.....Ranju kamal kar ditaa oye kudiye......Burrrrrrrrraaaaaa |
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ranjana
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«Reply #7 on: June 21, 2006, 07:02:46 PM » |
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shukriya ji ........bahut khub hain aap bhi...........
jab ek prem ka dhaga judta hai,
dil ka kamal tab hi khilta hai
dekhata hai khuda bhi aasman se jameen per
jab koi ek dil dusre se bepanha mohabbat karta hai
sulagane lagta hai tb dharti ka seena bhi
jab koi aasmaan ban ke baahoo mein pighalta hai
likhi jaati hai tab ek dastaan-e -mohabbat
tab kahi ja kar AMER PREM logo ke doli mein utarata hai
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«Reply #9 on: June 22, 2006, 02:07:56 AM » |
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hai ek naam hi unka is dil mein likha hua
lagta hai jaise koi deeya mandir mein jalta hua
karte rahe hum ek khamosh mohabbat unse
unke liye bas hai yahi dil mera ek tadpata hua
likhi jaayengi na jaane kitni kahaaniya is mohabbat per
jab tak rehega dilo mein yeh AMER PREM khilta hua........
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«Reply #10 on: June 22, 2006, 02:23:15 AM » |
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nice posting... good creation... BS...
well replied... PJAG, Ranjana...
yeh prem jo hain woh ek madhurakshar hain
aur yeh yugon yugon talak ajaraamar hain...
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«Reply #11 on: June 22, 2006, 04:23:42 AM » |
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Gaurav kamal kerdiya likhkay.... aur Ranjan... hai kya jawab aap ka bhi.... bahut khub mehfil bahut seji hui hai :D
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«Reply #12 on: June 22, 2006, 06:41:26 AM » |
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very nice gaurav bhai & gud reply ranjana ji.........
armaan aaj AMAR PREM ke sajne lage hai phir se
aankhon ke dariya se ashk nikalne lage hai phir se
behte ashko mai bhi aaj hai khusiyo ka manzar
ek duje se milne ko jism tadapne lage hai phir se
ban rahe hai tajmahal phir mumtaaz ki khatir
ishq ki aag se MAKBARE chamkne lage hai phir se
kahi bujh na jayee AMAR PREM ki roshni kabhi
shama ko apne lahoo se parwaane jalane lage hai phirse.
................@fahi@................
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ranjana
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«Reply #13 on: June 22, 2006, 06:58:03 AM » |
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shukriya ANU jaan, MKji. ........Fahi its really very beautiful...........
mili jab nazaro se nazare ek ishara sa hone laga
dil se dil mil gaye jeene ka sahara hone laga
chhaa gaya ek khumar sa mehfil mein
jab zikar hamre pyaar ka wahan hone laga
beqarari jab had se badne lagi do dilo ke beech
toh fasala do dilo ka fir kam sa hone laga
aake sama gaye jab woh hamare pehlu mein
toh mosam saara rangeen sa hone laga
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«Reply #14 on: June 22, 2006, 10:37:30 AM » |
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=D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D>
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on eTI community..
