Andaz

by Pooja on September 08, 2004, 02:58:02 PM
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #30 on: September 15, 2005, 01:54:48 AM »
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WAH!!! BAHOOT KHOOB DEEPAK JI.

Dil jo deta sath to awaz bhi atti
awaz bhi hai kahi goom, mere dil ki tarah


Waah Pooja ji!!

Dil ki awaz bhi sun, tu is phasane pe na ja!
Meri Nazron ki taraf dekh, Zamane pe na ja!!



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«Reply #31 on: September 15, 2005, 08:46:20 AM »
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yahi hay firqa-e-arbabe wafa ka maqsoom
ye pershani-e-hallat naii baat nahey
sirf andaz-e-bayan rang badal deta hay
warna dunya mein koii baat naii baat nahey
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«Reply #32 on: September 18, 2005, 08:45:01 AM »
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lafaz inkaar ka, lahza ikraar ka
mera yah andaaz, kab hai apse raj
wo chamak teri ankho ki
wo muskaan tere hontho ki
tera yah andaaz kab hai mujse raj


hummmmm  again nice one !!!!

Dil se yeh sada aa rahi ki woh tum aur sirf tum ho
Jisne mere dil ka chain aur sukun chhupa rakha hai

Tum jankar bhi anjan ho iskadar jaise kitne anjan ho
Har ghari tumhara aks ankho mein ubharta rehta hai !!
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«Reply #33 on: September 19, 2005, 06:38:34 PM »
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Shukariyan dosto!!!!!
Nice one AKS ji!!!
Good one fawad ji!!!

Nice wordings HumTum ji!!

Dil ki awazo mai ek jo chuppi chai hai
Mere ikraar ki jhankaar usme deti sunai hai!!!
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«Reply #34 on: September 19, 2005, 08:41:38 PM »
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---- Aapka toh andaz hi nirala hai Pooja! ------

Teri adaa main hai shoki bahar ki,
Teri ankhon main masti hizab ki,
Lafzon ki kya zarurat hai tujhe,
kaid toh kar kiya hai dil main mujhe,


--- BENAM -------
Banda majboor hai mahobaat main teri,
Warna jhukana nahi fidarat main meri!
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Pooja
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«Reply #35 on: September 19, 2005, 09:35:07 PM »
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is kaid mai bhi ek rihaai hai
tha jis baat ka inzaar, ab wo garri aai hai
Sunane ko thi bachain jiske liye tum din raat
Lo wo haan kahane ki rut ab aai hai!!!
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BeNam
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«Reply #36 on: September 20, 2005, 02:52:17 AM »
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------ bahot khoob Poojaji -------

tere dil main hi rahena hai mukadar mera,
na dur kar mujhe sanam ke main hun dil tera,
Sun le wafa ki intihaa aaj,
Tujh per mer mitane ki ghadi ayi hai


-- BENAM -------
Banda majboor hai mahobaat main teri,
Warna jhukana nahi fidarat main meri!
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Pooja
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«Reply #37 on: September 20, 2005, 04:53:35 PM »
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Dheere dheere ankho ke rasty, jo dil mai sama gaya
mer khud ke aks per, ek naya nasha cha gaya!!

khud mai sharmaati hu aor bin baat muskaati hu
akele mai khush, bhir mai sahami najar atti hu!!!

pass aaye to uthati nahi nigahe
door ho to raho mai najare bichati hu!!

Dheere dheere mai uski taraf khinchi chali jaati hu
dheere dheere mai khud mai kahi gum hui jaati hu!!!!!
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BeNam
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«Reply #38 on: September 20, 2005, 05:59:58 PM »
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--- Excellent ---- Poojaji ------------

Ankhon ke rastey dil main toh basa liya,
Fir parda kar liya, palkon ko jhuka liya,
Ankhon se dil tak pahunch toh jata main,
Tumane magar sanam dil ka darwaza hi bandh kar diya!

-- BENAM -------
Banda majboor hai mahobaat main teri,
Warna jhukana nahi fidarat main meri!
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Pooja
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«Reply #39 on: September 22, 2005, 08:31:28 PM »
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bahoot hi khoobsoorat lines likhi hai apne

"Ankhon ke rastey dil main toh basa liya,
Fir parda kar liya, palkon ko jhuka liya,""

palko ko jhuka kar, tumhe dil mai bitha liya
kar ke band ankhy, duniya ko bhula diya!!!
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shayar_dildaar
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«Reply #40 on: September 22, 2005, 08:39:01 PM »
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I really appreciate the work of both Pooja and Benam. Good stuff mates. Keep going.
Mohabbat karne mein jo khushi aur kashish hain woh jhalkta hain aap dono ke sher/poems se. Keep posting.
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«Reply #41 on: September 22, 2005, 08:46:41 PM »
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Mohaabat ka andaz bada nirala hain;
agar ishq karne wala dilwala hain.

Dil ka sunta hain jo wahi ishq kar sakta hain,
Dimag bhi dil k baat ko khub samjhta hain.
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Pooja
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«Reply #42 on: September 22, 2005, 09:10:30 PM »
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Shukariyan shayar_dildaar!!!! apne bhi bahoot acha likha hai !!!

Muhobaat mai, dil ko kiska khayal hota hai
raat nahi raat, din kahan uska din hota hai
ajeeb si madhoshi har waqat chai rahati hai
sirf mehboob se milan ki payaas rahti hai!!!
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shayar_dildaar
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«Reply #43 on: September 22, 2005, 09:15:24 PM »
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Suban allah maan gaye aapko pooja ji. Good retort. Awesome.
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Pooja
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«Reply #44 on: September 22, 2005, 09:24:56 PM »
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Shukariyan shayar_dildaar ji!!!
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