andhayron main mashaal ka mol bhari chukana parta hai

by Brijinder on August 25, 2010, 09:09:08 PM
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 1024 times)
Brijinder
Guest
Reply with quote
अंधेरों में मशाल का मोल भारी चुकाना पड़ता है
ज़हर के प्यालों को मुहं से लगाना पड़ता है

चुनाव में लिखी जाती हैं रामायणें नई
हर बार अब वहां रावण को जिताना पड़ता है

सो न जाऊं मैं भी सभी को देख सोये हुए
नमक खुद ही अपने ज़ख्मों पे लगाना पड़ता है

होती हैं अक्सर साजिशें शीशे के घरों में
मसीहा को भी इसलिये पत्थर उठाना पड़ता है

समझ लो कि हिल गयी तहज़ीब की बुनियाद
जब दोस्ती से पहले मज़हब बताना पड़ता है
Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
Iss dard bhari zindagi main by Delicate_Doll in Shayri-E-Dard « 1 2  All »
dil laga kar rona parta hai by sandip4u in Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq
*Samajhna parta hai* by Rajesh Harish in Miscellaneous Shayri
Nai naveli dulhan ko sharmana parta hai...... by Syed Mohd Mahzar in Ghazals
Mohabbat deeya nahin Mashaal hai yaaro......226.... by SURESH SANGWAN in Miscellaneous Shayri
~Hriday~
Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 115
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16243
Member Since: Feb 2010


View Profile WWW
«Reply #1 on: August 26, 2010, 05:43:26 AM »
Reply with quote
wah Brijinder ji...jawaab nahi aapki lekhni ka... bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai ye aapki... vartamaan haalaat ko aapki ye kavita bahut khoobsurti se darshaati hai.... bahut bahut khoob...!!!


 Applause Applause Applause
Logged
Brijinder
Guest
«Reply #2 on: August 27, 2010, 08:41:59 PM »
Reply with quote
shukriya,meharbaani.
Logged
~Hriday~
Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 115
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16243
Member Since: Feb 2010


View Profile WWW
«Reply #3 on: August 27, 2010, 08:49:15 PM »
Reply with quote
u r welcome...!!!
Logged
Rajesh Harish
Guest
«Reply #4 on: August 31, 2010, 02:19:26 AM »
Reply with quote
Bahut khoob Brijendar Ji
Logged
Brijinder
Guest
«Reply #5 on: September 04, 2010, 07:37:00 PM »
Reply with quote
thanks a lot for the kind words.
Logged
ParwaaZ
Guest
«Reply #6 on: September 04, 2010, 08:21:10 PM »
Reply with quote
Brijinder sahab Aadaab....

behad masarrat huyi aapki yeh kalaam dekhkar hume..... Usual Smile
kafi achchi kalaam lagi hume yeh... Usual Smile

Daad janab.... Usual Smile         



अंधेरों में मशाल का मोल भारी चुकाना पड़ता है
ज़हर के प्यालों को मुहं से लगाना पड़ता है

Kia baat hai janab.... Waqt zarurat per kimateN badh jati hai bahut sahiN.         


चुनाव में लिखी जाती हैं रामायणें नई
हर बार अब वहां रावण को जिताना पड़ता है

Bahut umda tanz kiya hai sahab...           


सो न जाऊं मैं भी सभी को देख सोये हुए
नमक खुद ही अपने ज़ख्मों पे लगाना पड़ता है

Waah behad sahiN kaha janab.... Daad           


होती हैं अक्सर साजिशें शीशे के घरों में
मसीहा को भी इसलिये पत्थर उठाना पड़ता है

Hmmm kafi achcha sher hai daad..         


समझ लो कि हिल गयी तहज़ीब की बुनियाद
जब दोस्ती से पहले मज़हब बताना पड़ता है

Waah Yeh sab se jyaad umdaa raha bahut khoob lajawaab kar diye aapne... Usual Smile         


Is khubsurat kalaam per dil se daad janab....

likhate rhaiye,
khush rahiye....
Khuda Hafez.....         

Logged
Brijinder
Guest
«Reply #7 on: September 20, 2010, 08:05:56 PM »
Reply with quote
thanks a lot for the kind words.
Logged
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 14, 2024, 03:29:57 AM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
by Michaelraw
[November 13, 2024, 12:59:11 PM]

[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]

[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:55:06 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 06:58:58 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.094 seconds with 25 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8508 Real Poets and poetry admirer