anjaan thay (nam)

by poonamA on February 26, 2013, 02:58:03 PM
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anjaan thay vo pahle, ab jaan ban gaye hai
kismat ne milaya ki hamari pahchan ban gaye hai
khush rakhna aye raba hamesha unhe
jo is chere ki muskaan ban gaye hai
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«Reply #1 on: February 26, 2013, 03:43:46 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: February 26, 2013, 04:17:16 PM »
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poonam ji very nice,
bura mat maanana aap ki third line mein "khush" hona chahiye tha...

Mujhe meri galatiya logo ne batai toh me kuch seekh paaya hu....issi soch se bataya aap ko....bura laga ho toh sorry...
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thx ritesh aur aapne meri galti note kari aur mujhe bataya..isme bura mannane ki baat nahi..thx for correction 
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poonam ji very nice,
bura mat maanana aap ki third line mein "khush" hona chahiye tha...

Mujhe meri galatiya logo ne batai toh me kuch seekh paaya hu....issi soch se bataya aap ko....bura laga ho toh sorry...
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«Reply #6 on: February 26, 2013, 06:53:19 PM »
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Quote from: poonamA on February 26, 2013, 02:58:03 PM
anjaan thay vo pahle, ab jaan ban gaye hai
kismat ne milaya ki hamari pahchan ban gaye hai
khush rakhna aye raba hamesha unhe
jo is chere ki muskaan ban gaye hai

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Quote from: poonamA on February 26, 2013, 02:58:03 PM
anjaan thay vo pahle, ab jaan ban gaye hai
kismat ne milaya ki hamari pahchan ban gaye hai
khush rakhna aye raba hamesha unhe
jo is chere ki muskaan ban gaye hai

wah wah....AMIN meri doa hai aap ke saath..........!
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