Ankhon me raate hongi~ Abhi

by AbhiTamrakar on October 27, 2010, 06:44:45 AM
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ankhon me raate hongi
palko par bhaari hogi subah
to hathon me hath lekar; fir shabnami shaame hongi

tum rakhna eitbaar mere aane ka
main auga jab jab dil ki baate hongi
ankhon me raate hongi....

tum rukh ko chhupakar mat sona
main nihaaruga jab ye palke bhaari hongi
ankhon me raate hongi....

tum dekho meri yad me mat rona
main milunga jab sapno ki saugaate hogi
ankhon me raate hongi....

main tumhe yad bahut karta hun
tumhe hichki to pal pal aati hongi
ankhon me raate hongi....

tumhe shikayat hai main milta nahin
main milunga to; garm tumhari saanse hongi
ankhon me raate hongi....

tum mujhe dekh lena main tumhe nihaar lunga
haseen sanam kabhi to apni mulakaate hongi
ankhon me raate hongi....
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«Reply #1 on: October 27, 2010, 06:57:59 AM »
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beautiful composition abhi mastam mast...maza aagay re padhke........wowwwwwww.....tune bhi mast hai
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«Reply #2 on: October 27, 2010, 07:10:25 AM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on October 27, 2010, 06:44:45 AM
ankhon me raate hongi
palko par bhaari hogi subah
to hathon me hath lekar; fir shabnami shaame hongi

tum rakhna eitbaar mere aane ka
main auga jab jab dil ki baate hongi
ankhon me raate hongi....

tum rukh ko chhupakar mat sona
main nihaaruga jab ye palke bhaari hongi
ankhon me raate hongi....

tum dekho meri yad me mat rona
main milunga jab sapno ki saugaate hogi
ankhon me raate hongi....

main tumhe yad bahut karta hun
tumhe hichki to pal pal aati hongi
ankhon me raate hongi....

tumhe shikayat hai main milta nahin
main milunga to; garm tumhari saanse hongi
ankhon me raate hongi....

tum mujhe dekh lena main tumhe nihaar lunga
haseen sanam kabhi to apni mulakaate hongi
ankhon me raate hongi....

Bahut bahut Khoob Abhi Ji..

Bahut Hi Pyaara Likha Hai Aapne Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: October 27, 2010, 07:43:58 AM »
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shukriya anu jiii ....or khwaish bhai apka bhi shukriya...
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«Reply #4 on: October 27, 2010, 07:48:32 AM »
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Nice work Abhi Jee..
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«Reply #5 on: October 27, 2010, 08:09:40 AM »
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shukriya sajid bhai!
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«Reply #6 on: October 27, 2010, 08:30:38 AM »
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Abhi Bhai Bahut umda Aur Mohabbat se Bhari Peshkash Hai Aapki.. Lafzon Ko Behad Khubsoorati se Sajaaya hai aapne.. Is Pyaari si Rachna Ke liye Dil Se Daad Kubool Karen.. !!! Applause Applause

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«Reply #7 on: October 27, 2010, 08:58:32 AM »
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dil se shukriya hazir hai mann sahab...apki hosla afjai hame or achha likhne ko prerit karegii...
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«Reply #8 on: October 27, 2010, 10:44:38 AM »
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WAH WAH KYA BAAT HAI     ABHITAMRAKAR JI.....


TUM JAB BHI SONA MERA NAAM LEKAR SONA
DEKHNA TERE SAATH HI MERI ZINDAGANI HONGI
         AANKHON ME RAATE HONGI
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«Reply #9 on: October 27, 2010, 11:06:29 AM »
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thnx CARA ji ...eise hi sath rahiyega....

apne bhi achha reply diya he~
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«Reply #10 on: October 27, 2010, 01:51:36 PM »
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Abhi bhai,
oye hoye kya baat..kayi baar dard parra hai apse,
aj pehli baar mohobat parr raha hoon..
bahaut bahaut khubsoorat..
yunhi likte rahiye..
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«Reply #11 on: October 28, 2010, 02:23:16 AM »
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apke lekhe shabad ,dil,
 vakai choo jate hai,
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«Reply #12 on: October 28, 2010, 05:48:22 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on October 27, 2010, 01:51:36 PM
Abhi bhai,
oye hoye kya baat..kayi baar dard parra hai apse,
aj pehli baar mohobat parr raha hoon..
bahaut bahaut khubsoorat..
yunhi likte rahiye..
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aji rahim bhai sab dil ka khel hai..dard ho ya mohabbat dono dil me hi rehete hain~
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«Reply #13 on: October 28, 2010, 05:49:55 AM »
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Quote from: kam15 on October 28, 2010, 02:23:16 AM
apke lekhe shabad ,dil,
 vakai choo jate hai,

shukriya kam ji ...apke reply ka~
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