*****Apke Hum Ho Gaye*****

by Pooja on June 24, 2006, 07:40:34 PM
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«Reply #15 on: July 24, 2006, 10:29:36 AM »
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Quote from: "vicky AKELA"
Wo phir aaj wada milne ka karke gaye hain,
yani kuch din aur humen ab jeena hi padega.....
AAPKE HO GAYE HUM, kuch aisa kaha gaye wo,
unke liye ab to maut ko daga dena hi padega.....


Wonderful Pooja and as usual bahut hi khoob Vickyji...

Vaada jo kiya humne, nibhaane dekho chale aaye hain hum
Aapke Ho Gaye HUM, ab tho maan bhi jaa O-mere sanam

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«Reply #16 on: August 06, 2006, 03:27:30 PM »
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wah sangy do line mai kamal.... bahoot achy..

tadpa kar hume, wo hanste hai
phir kahty hai payar humi se karty hai
ada unki her dil chu jaati hai
seene se lag kar unke, juban chup ho jaati hai
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«Reply #17 on: August 07, 2006, 07:53:41 AM »
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bahut khoob SANGY aur POOJA JI....

Log kahate hain aashiqi jisko, wo unki mohabbat hai,
tadapte do dilo ki e-doston, bahakti yeh chahat hai.....
adayen hain unki katil, har aandaaz hai unka dilkash,
aankhon se phir karke ghayal, karti wo shararat hai........
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«Reply #18 on: August 07, 2006, 08:21:31 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai sabne.......
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«Reply #19 on: August 25, 2006, 07:21:10 AM »
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shrarat meri per, wo jo muskura diye
unke is andaaz per, hum shrma diye
bad kar bahon mai jo laker sab kah gaye wo
simat kar kah diya, ho jaane do ab ho jaaye jo....
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«Reply #20 on: August 26, 2006, 01:19:27 AM »
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Kya hub likha hai doston!

Kya khub Mehfil saji hai unki,
Her zuban per hai dastan unki,
Humey bhulaye baithe hai woh,
Zamane se dhadkan hai jo is dil ki!

BENAM
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Kabhi Gum ne ek alfaz chura liya,
Kabhi asuone ek daman bhigo diya,
Jise wada kiya tha na bhulane ka,
Usey aaj bhari mehfil main yaad kar liya!
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«Reply #21 on: August 26, 2006, 02:04:57 AM »
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BeNAm

Aaj to likhne ke mood mein lag rahe ho :D

Keep going !

Rajbir
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«Reply #22 on: August 26, 2006, 02:12:21 AM »
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Thanks Praji!

bus yunhi thodi si dil lagi kar li maine,
Khushiyan na mili toh gumon se dosti kar li maine!
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«Reply #23 on: August 26, 2006, 05:31:46 AM »
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Kya hub likha hai doston!

Kya khub Mehfil saji hai unki,
Her zuban per hai dastan unki,
Humey bhulaye baithe hai woh,
Zamane se dhadkan hai jo is dil ki!

BENAM
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Kabhi Gum ne ek alfaz chura liya,
Kabhi asuone ek daman bhigo diya,
Jise wada kiya tha na bhulane ka,
Usey aaj bhari mehfil main yaad kar liya!


wah benam ji.. .apki shayari ko miss kar rahe thhey hum.........bahut khoob aate hi kya likh hai jawaab nahi aapka......
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«Reply #24 on: August 27, 2006, 08:31:58 AM »
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bahoot khoob BeNam ji...

Ajj mehfil mai wo phir se aa gaye
kalam apni se chaa gaye
ek jalak baad gayab ho jaate hai
kayun kisi ko bhi najar nahi atte hai

is kadar chahne walo ko satana nahi acha
batao koi aor baat, ki ab yah kaamka bahan nahi lagta sucha....
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«Reply #25 on: September 06, 2006, 10:13:35 AM »
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bahut khoob POOJA JI............


Dekh tere husn-e-jalwe, meri tabiyat machal jati hai,
kasam khuda ki jawaani teri, mujh pe zulm dhati hai........

ek baar jo palat ke dekh le tu, lag jaye aag pani me,
kayamat pe kayamat hai ada teri, jo ghayal kar jati hai......

nazar kya mili tumse, aur main sochta yeh raha gaya,
choonar teri sarakti hai, aur dil mera kyun dharka jati hai........

dekha pahali baar jab, aur tum par fida main ho gaya,
aankhon hi aankhon me, kya jadoo tu kya kar jati hai.......!!!!!!
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«Reply #26 on: September 07, 2006, 04:21:25 AM »
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bahoot khoob likha Vicky ji...
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«Reply #27 on: September 07, 2006, 05:26:09 AM »
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nice one vicky ji!
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«Reply #28 on: September 07, 2006, 11:08:50 AM »
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shukriya POOJA JI  aur SHREYA JI.......
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«Reply #29 on: September 09, 2006, 05:25:04 AM »
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Gud job Vicky bhai

Yeh Pyar ka Dilkash Nazara......
Tum mujhse Cheen na lena.....

Door na jana Sanam humse kabhi......
Hume koi gair Samajh na lena......

Dil ki baat jo Zehem se judi hai.....
Jeena door ki baat Maut se WaQt aane par lad lena......

Yeh Pyar ka Dilkash Nazara.....
Tum mujhse Cheen na lena....!!!!!!!!!!
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