Apna Chaen Khota Hai...

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Subha Aur Shaam, Din Aur Raat, Apna Chaen Khota Hai
Tumhari Yaad May Aksar Ye Dil Ghut Ghut Ke Roota Hai

Main Khabon May Tumhen Paane Ki Khwahesh Bhi Karon Kaese
Nigahen Ghoorti Hain Chat, Zamana Jab Ye Soota Hai

Deewane Jaesa Main Khud Se Tumhari Baaten Karta Hoon
Mohabbat May Juda Hone Pe Shayed Yon Hi Hota Hai

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«Reply #1 on: October 09, 2013, 10:29:51 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: October 09, 2013, 10:34:31 PM »
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Subha Aur Shaam, Din Aur Raat, Apna Chaen Khota Hai
Tumhari Yaad May Aksar Ye Dil Ghut Ghut Ke Roota Hai

Main Khabon May Tumhen Paane Ki Khwahesh Bhi Karon Kaese
Nigahen Ghoorti Hain Chat, Zamana Jab Ye Soota Hai

Deewane Jaesa Main Khud Se Tumhari Baaten Karta Hoon
Mohabbat May Juda Hone Pe Shayed Yon Hi Hota Hai

Written by Syed Iqtedar Hussain.

bahot khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: October 09, 2013, 10:53:25 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: October 09, 2013, 11:23:26 PM »
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Quote from: Iqtedar on October 09, 2013, 09:52:13 PM
Subha Aur Shaam, Din Aur Raat, Apna Chaen Khota Hai
Tumhari Yaad May Aksar Ye Dil Ghut Ghut Ke Roota Hai

Main Khabon May Tumhen Paane Ki Khwahesh Bhi Karon Kaese
Nigahen Ghoorti Hain Chat, Zamana Jab Ye Soota Hai

Deewane Jaesa Main Khud Se Tumhari Baaten Karta Hoon
Mohabbat May Juda Hone Pe Shayed Yon Hi Hota Hai

Written by Syed Iqtedar Hussain.
Applause Applause Applause Applause
Kya baat hai Bhaijaan.... MASHA ALLAH...
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Bahut khoob Iqtedar jee
Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: October 10, 2013, 12:43:23 AM »
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Subha Aur Shaam, Din Aur Raat, Apna Chaen Khota Hai
Tumhari Yaad May Aksar Ye Dil Ghut Ghut Ke Roota Hai

Main Khabon May Tumhen Paane Ki Khwahesh Bhi Karon Kaese
Nigahen Ghoorti Hain Chat, Zamana Jab Ye Soota Hai

Deewane Jaesa Main Khud Se Tumhari Baaten Karta Hoon
Mohabbat May Juda Hone Pe Shayed Yon Hi Hota Hai

Written by Syed Iqtedar Hussain.

वाह-वाह क्या बात है बहुत ही उम्दा.!!
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«Reply #7 on: October 10, 2013, 02:34:22 AM »
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bahut khoob iqtedar jee..happy9
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«Reply #8 on: October 10, 2013, 02:37:15 AM »
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bohat khoob ,...phir adhooree ghzal Usual Smile
anyway daad,..........
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«Reply #9 on: October 10, 2013, 02:44:54 AM »
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Subha Aur Shaam, Din Aur Raat, Apna Chaen Khota Hai
Tumhari Yaad May Aksar Ye Dil Ghut Ghut Ke Roota Hai
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Main Khabon May Tumhen Paane Ki Khwahesh Bhi Karon Kaese
Nigahen Ghoorti Hain Chat, Zamana Jab Ye Soota Hai
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Deewane Jaesa Main Khud Se Tumhari Baaten Karta Hoon
Mohabbat May Juda Hone Pe Shayed Yon Hi Hota Hai
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Written by Syed Iqtedar Hussain.
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«Reply #10 on: October 10, 2013, 03:12:46 AM »
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Iqtedar Sahaab Aadaab...!

WaaH bahut khoob janab... bade khoob ashaar kaheN hai aapne...
waise toH sabhi ashar khoob haiN par yeH quoted sher bus laa jawaab raha... Behad khoob khayaal bayaaN kiya hai janab... daad


Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez..



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Main Khabon May Tumhen Paane Ki Khwahesh Bhi Karon Kaese
Nigahen Ghoorti Hain Chat, Zamana Jab Ye Soota Hai


Written by Syed Iqtedar Hussain.
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«Reply #11 on: October 10, 2013, 02:50:48 PM »
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Bahut khoooooooob likhe ho par ek khalipan sa hai... Poori ghazal likhne ki koshish karo iqtedar... waise sab ashaar bahut khoob hai... likhte rahiye dheron daad..
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naam ba naam aap sabka bahot bahot shukriya Usual SmileUsual SmileUsual Smile
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Quote from: aqsh on October 10, 2013, 02:50:48 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut khoooooooob likhe ho par ek khalipan sa hai... Poori ghazal likhne ki koshish karo iqtedar... waise sab ashaar bahut khoob hai... likhte rahiye dheron daad..
har baar aap log tokte aur samjhate ho ke adhori ghazlen na likhon, aur main har baar wada kar leta hoon ke koshish karonga aur phir apni koshish may nakaam hi raheta hoon sad5 bolte rahiye ke shayed ek din asar ho jaye Usual Smile
bahot bahot shukriya Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: October 10, 2013, 06:23:34 PM »
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beautifully expressed...... lovely

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