APNA MUQADAR

by shakeel shan on January 22, 2012, 01:36:04 PM
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apna muqader dard ka mara jaisa hai
jungle mein ek toota tara jaisa hai

sar se haath aur haath se ungli chhoot gayi
apna saya apna sahara jaisa hai

main ne dekha aaj woh kal ka shehzada
meri gali ka ek banjara jaisa hai

kya maloom ki lout ke kab woh aye ga
mera qasid bhi awara jaisa hai

ek ruswaie se woh sangdil toot gaya
mere liye tou din ka guzara jaisa hai

kis kis basti meri turbat dhoondo ge
mera jism tou para para jaisa hai

gumnami ke unwanon mein shaan parha
aisa lage hai naam hamara jaisa hai
(SHAKEEL SHAN)
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«Reply #1 on: January 22, 2012, 01:59:40 PM »
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boht khoob shakeel ji welcome in yo family
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«Reply #2 on: January 22, 2012, 03:46:02 PM »
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thanx sahil ji..will try to keep up to the mark
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«Reply #3 on: January 22, 2012, 04:01:20 PM »
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Shakeel sahab aapki ye takhleeq bahot pasand aai. Aala meyar ka tasavvur hai aapka. Mubarakbad aur daad pesh karta hun.
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«Reply #4 on: January 22, 2012, 04:14:07 PM »
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bohat shukriya Reyaz Shab apka..apki zarranawazi hai..apki dua se inshaallah aayanda bhi meyar  ka khaas khayal rahega..
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«Reply #5 on: January 22, 2012, 04:47:06 PM »
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Bahut achchi peshkash Shakeel ji. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: January 22, 2012, 06:35:09 PM »
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Shan sahab--
aapki ghazal parhkr ek sukoon sa ehsaas hua--
alg hi lutf aya
likhte raha kijie
khus rahie
muskurate rhie
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«Reply #7 on: January 22, 2012, 08:01:40 PM »
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jabardast peshkash vaaaah
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«Reply #8 on: January 23, 2012, 12:00:00 AM »
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Usha ji,Sarfira ji aur mkv apka tah e dil se shukriya..apki yunhi hausla afzaie shamil e haal rahi tou inshaallah umda takhleeqat manzar e aam par ayengi..
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«Reply #9 on: January 23, 2012, 04:27:30 AM »
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Ye bhee khoob raha aapkaa kalaam mubarak ho
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«Reply #10 on: January 23, 2012, 05:11:17 AM »
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apka bohat shukriya..salamat rahen
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