Apna sa wo lage

by Riyaz Ashna on November 23, 2012, 12:18:01 PM
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Samjhe na dil ki baat, wo nadaan sa lage
Uska har ik sitam mujhe ahsaan sa lage

Uske salook dekh ke main kashmakash mein hun
Apna sa wo lage kabhi anjaan sa lage

Dushwariyan bhi hain yahan, majbooriyan bhi hain
Wo saath ho to raasta aasaan sa lage

Wo saamne rahe to khilen phool har taraf
Uske bina jaahan ye veeran sa lage.

Riyaz Ashna
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«Reply #1 on: November 23, 2012, 12:38:45 PM »
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Bahut Khoob ......Lovely creation Riyaz ji ...
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«Reply #2 on: November 23, 2012, 01:00:41 PM »
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Quote from: Riyaz Ashna on November 23, 2012, 12:18:01 PM
Samjhe na dil ki baat, wo nadaan sa lage
Uska har ik sitam mujhe ahsaan sa lage

Uske salook dekh ke main kashmakash mein hun
Apna sa wo lage kabhi anjaan sa lage

Dushwariyan bhi hain yahan, majbooriyan bhi hain
Wo saath ho to raasta aasaan sa lage

Wo saamne rahe to khilen phool har taraf
Uske bina jaahan ye veeran sa lage.

Riyaz Ashna

gr8 composition,sir
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«Reply #3 on: November 23, 2012, 01:05:39 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut bahut bahut hi khoob riyaz ashna jee
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«Reply #4 on: November 23, 2012, 01:48:03 PM »
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waah waah riyaz saheb bahut khoob ek rau aapkaa
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«Reply #5 on: November 23, 2012, 02:25:47 PM »
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Quote from: Riyaz Ashna on November 23, 2012, 12:18:01 PM
Samjhe na dil ki baat, wo nadaan sa lage
Uska har ik sitam mujhe ahsaan sa lage

Uske salook dekh ke main kashmakash mein hun
Apna sa wo lage kabhi anjaan sa lage

Dushwariyan bhi hain yahan, majbooriyan bhi hain
Wo saath ho to raasta aasaan sa lage

Wo saamne rahe to khilen phool har taraf
Uske bina jaahan ye veeran sa lage.

Riyaz Ashna


Bahut Khooooob Riyaz ji..

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: November 23, 2012, 03:34:13 PM »
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dushwariyan bhi hain yahan majbooriyaan bhi hain
woh  sath  ho  to  raasta  aasaan  sa  lage

bahut khoob,Riaz saheb.bahut pyari ghazal kahi hai.
tah e dil se mubarakbad.
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Sharma ji bahot bahot shukria.
Quote from: Kaushal Sharma on November 23, 2012, 12:38:45 PM
Bahut Khoob ......Lovely creation Riyaz ji ...
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Samjhe na dil ki baat, wo nadaan sa lage
Uska har ik sitam mujhe ahsaan sa lage

Uske salook dekh ke main kashmakash mein hun
Apna sa wo lage kabhi anjaan sa lage

Dushwariyan bhi hain yahan, majbooriyan bhi hain
Wo saath ho to raasta aasaan sa lage

Wah wah wah wah riyaz sb
bahut hi khoobsurat ghazal pesh kee hai.
dhero daad is shaandaar kalaam par
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«Reply #9 on: November 23, 2012, 05:54:48 PM »
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Quote from: Riyaz Ashna on November 23, 2012, 12:18:01 PM
Samjhe na dil ki baat, wo nadaan sa lage
Uska har ik sitam mujhe ahsaan sa lage

Uske salook dekh ke main kashmakash mein hun
Apna sa wo lage kabhi anjaan sa lage

Dushwariyan bhi hain yahan, majbooriyan bhi hain
Wo saath ho to raasta aasaan sa lage

Wo saamne rahe to khilen phool har taraf
Uske bina jaahan ye veeran sa lage.

Riyaz Ashna


Bahut khoob
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Bahot bahot shukria MB ji.
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gr8 composition,sir
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #12 on: November 24, 2012, 01:52:32 AM »
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wah wah
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Quote from: Riyaz Ashna on November 23, 2012, 12:18:01 PM
Samjhe na dil ki baat, wo nadaan sa lage
Uska har ik sitam mujhe ahsaan sa lage

Uske salook dekh ke main kashmakash mein hun
Apna sa wo lage kabhi anjaan sa lage

Dushwariyan bhi hain yahan, majbooriyan bhi hain
Wo saath ho to raasta aasaan sa lage

Wo saamne rahe to khilen phool har taraf
Uske bina jaahan ye veeran sa lage.

Riyaz Ashna

lovely
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«Reply #14 on: November 24, 2012, 03:07:12 AM »
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very nice ryaaz ji
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