apna(CSET)

by MANOJ6568 on February 24, 2016, 01:07:07 PM
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apna rang insaniyat ne kho diya hai,
girgit sa her insaan ab ho gaya hai
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«Reply #1 on: February 24, 2016, 02:39:03 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: February 24, 2016, 07:00:06 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: February 24, 2016, 08:41:38 PM »
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apna rang insaniyat ne kho diya hai,
girgit sa her insaan ab ho gaya hai
Bahut khoob. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

How about changing it to this Janaab?

Insan ne insaniyat kaa rang hee badal diyaa hai
Aur khud ko girgat ke rang mein rang diyaa hai
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«Reply #4 on: February 25, 2016, 01:07:26 AM »
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Quote from: surindarn on February 24, 2016, 08:41:38 PM
apna rang insaniyat ne kho diya hai,
girgit sa her insaan ab ho gaya hai
Bahut khoob. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

How about changing it to this Janaab?

Insan ne insaniyat kaa rang hee badal diyaa hai
Aur khud ko girgat ke rang mein rang diyaa hai
thx
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«Reply #5 on: February 25, 2016, 08:46:33 AM »
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apna rang insaniyat ne kho diya hai,
girgit sa her insaan ab ho gaya hai


 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: February 25, 2016, 08:19:56 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: February 25, 2016, 08:27:21 PM »
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