"apne chehre pe pada hai jabse"

by aaina on July 03, 2009, 09:03:40 PM
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Uski baqa ke bandhano mai bandhne lage
To Hum hawaao.n se baat karne lage

Apne chehre pe pada hai jabse naam mera
Wo aaine se ghabrane lage jhijhakne lage

Jo lafz tehzeebo.n ki giraft mai thay
Wo aap janaab ki hado.n se guzarne lage

Ye aansu jo ter rukhsaar pe dhale aate hain
Wo mere dil ki zameen.n ko tur karne lage

Jo tune laashoor mai sochen ho.nge
Wo mere labo.n pe khud ba khud machlne lage
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«Reply #1 on: July 03, 2009, 09:07:48 PM »
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Bohot umda ash'ar kehte hain aap aaina ji, is tarah likhte rahiye.
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«Reply #2 on: July 04, 2009, 02:43:05 AM »
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Nice one Aslam Ji
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«Reply #3 on: July 04, 2009, 09:45:23 AM »
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Aaina Ji,

Bohot umdah ghazlen kehte hain aap. Bohot Khoob.
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«Reply #4 on: July 04, 2009, 10:59:29 AM »
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Bohot khoob Aaina ji.. Applause
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«Reply #5 on: July 04, 2009, 05:19:44 PM »
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Aslam Bhai.. lajawab aur Behad Khubsoorat Alfaaz Yahan Bikhere hain aapne.. Lafzon ko Behad Sunderta ke sath sajaaya hai.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooob dost.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #6 on: July 04, 2009, 06:21:24 PM »
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Wah ASlam ji very beautiful creation. Applause Applause Applause
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punam
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«Reply #7 on: July 04, 2009, 06:33:26 PM »
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Bahut khoob Aaina ji...
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aaina
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«Reply #8 on: July 05, 2009, 04:41:19 AM »
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Bohot umda ash'ar kehte hain aap aaina ji, is tarah likhte rahiye.

bhut bhut shukriya sayyid sahab is hosla afzaai ka
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«Reply #9 on: July 05, 2009, 04:44:19 AM »
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Nice one Aslam Ji

thnxx rajesh sahab
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«Reply #10 on: July 05, 2009, 04:45:28 AM »
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Aaina Ji,

Bohot umdah ghazlen kehte hain aap. Bohot Khoob.


thnxxxx so much shayara ji
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aaina
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«Reply #11 on: July 05, 2009, 04:46:26 AM »
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Bohot khoob Aaina ji.. Applause

bhut shukriya superspawn
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aaina
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«Reply #12 on: July 05, 2009, 04:49:43 AM »
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Aslam Bhai.. lajawab aur Behad Khubsoorat Alfaaz Yahan Bikhere hain aapne.. Lafzon ko Behad Sunderta ke sath sajaaya hai.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooob dost.. Applause Applause




**~** Mann **~**

bhut bhut shukriya dear is hosla afzaaii se labraiz esasaat ke liyn
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«Reply #13 on: July 05, 2009, 04:50:33 AM »
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Wah ASlam ji very beautiful creation. Applause Applause Applause

thxxxxxx so much madhu
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aaina
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«Reply #14 on: July 05, 2009, 04:51:21 AM »
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Bahut khoob Aaina ji...

thnxxxxx punam ji
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