Apne Ehsas Se Cho.............

by lovebites on November 23, 2004, 01:42:35 AM
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Nedura!
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«Reply #15 on: November 24, 2004, 05:12:33 PM »
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wowwwwwww excellent .........lovebites that was so amazing yaar Usual Smile

ur all compositions are very well written!!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #16 on: November 24, 2004, 08:30:24 PM »
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wowoowoowoowow bahoot khoob Lovebite ji and too good sandeep!!!!
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«Reply #17 on: November 25, 2004, 07:12:01 AM »
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wo shakhs aaj buhat hi udaas lugta hai
k jis ne luut k bhi hunsnay ki kasam khai thi
jo main ne aaj yeh poocha k kia hua tum ko
baray adub se wo bola wo aaj aai thi


Ye mohabbat ka darya giray ga jahan
Mujhe maloom nahi hai woh samundar kahan
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«Reply #18 on: November 25, 2004, 02:51:10 PM »
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oh my god.. m bowled over lovebites..!!! amazing ones..!!
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«Reply #19 on: November 25, 2004, 03:37:09 PM »
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wowowowow lovebites.........  bahot shundar words.........bahot khoob dear.........
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Nedura!
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«Reply #20 on: November 25, 2004, 05:07:52 PM »
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that was another good one lovebites Usual Smile wowwww
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«Reply #21 on: November 26, 2004, 04:16:56 AM »
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na janey wo log kaisey hein
jinkey haathoun dil majboor hai

unhi ko kyun yaad karta hai itna
kya unsey milna zaroor hai

iss shehr mein to bohat say miley hamein
kisi ko aajiz paya to koi maghroor hai

log ye jaantey nahin hein shaid
jitna tu pass aya tha ab utna hi door hai

kya khuda ki yaad mein ghafil hoga ab
zamana jaan gaya teri neeyat mein fatoor hai

ab to maan lay ke tu ussi ka ghulam hai
warna kya tu aur kya tera shaoor hai
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«Reply #22 on: November 26, 2004, 04:56:02 AM »
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nice!!!!
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lovebites
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«Reply #23 on: November 27, 2004, 07:40:43 AM »
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kis sey shikwa ho kis sey shakayat;
mujh ko kahan ley aye yeh chahat;

woh khushi sari woh rang sare;
sub mit gaye hein sub loot gaye hein;

na woh mein raha na woh tum rahey;
sub cuut gaye hein sub buut gaye hein;

mere khuda yeh kya ho gaya hai;
sub khatam hua sub kho gaya hai;

ab mien jeeta hoon na marta hoon;
khud sey rooz rooz larta hoon;

mera andar har baar kehta hai;
keh mein pyar sirf aik ussi sey karta hoon;

mere khuda yeh kya ho gaya hai;
mere kis gunaah ka aisa silaa hai;

woh lafz sare woh bol sare;
tu upne tarazoo mein tol sare;

na woh lafz jhote na woh bol jhote;
hein lamhein tere saath key anmol sare;

tu phir mere khuda yeh kya ho gaya hai;
mere dard ki kya dawa hai;

mujh ko bula le tu yahi dua hai;
na woh mein rahoon ga na woh chahat rahe gi;

na shikwah rahe gaa na shikayat rahe gi;
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«Reply #24 on: November 27, 2004, 01:16:03 PM »
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Mine fav hope u all like it
-----Dukh Dard K Maro Se Mera Ziker Na Kerna-----
Dukh dard k maro se mera ziker na kerna,
Ghar jaoon tu yaroon se mera ziker na kerna,

Woh zabt na ker paey gi anhkon k samender,
Tum rah gusaroon se mera ziker na kerna,

Phoolon k nasheman mein raha hoon mein sada,
Dehko kabhi kharoon se mera ziker na kerna,

Shahid andehrey he mujhe rah dehkain,
Ab chand sitaroon se mera ziker na kerna,

Woh meri khani ko ghalat rung na de dein,
Afsana nigaroon se mera ziker na kerna,

Shahid woh mere hal be be-sakhta ro dein,
Is bar baharoon se mera ziker na kerna,

Ley jain ge gahrae mein tum ko beh baha ker,
Daria k kinaroon se mera ziker na kerna,

Woh shaks miley tu usey her baat batana,
Tum sirf asharoon se mera ziker na kerna.
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«Reply #25 on: November 27, 2004, 03:35:25 PM »
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Thank u everyone for ur kind words
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«Reply #26 on: November 27, 2004, 03:36:26 PM »
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Thanks everyone 4 ur kind words...........!
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bazish
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«Reply #27 on: November 28, 2004, 08:17:42 PM »
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Woh shaks miley tu usey her baat batana,
Tum sirf asharoon se mera ziker na kerna.

Kia Baat Hai Lovebites...U got great collection of poetry
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lovebites
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«Reply #28 on: November 28, 2004, 10:03:45 PM »
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Quote from: "bazish"
Woh shaks miley tu usey her baat batana,
Tum sirf asharoon se mera ziker na kerna.

Kia Baat Hai Lovebites...you got great collection of poetry


HuMm~! nice.........
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«Reply #29 on: November 28, 2004, 10:11:58 PM »
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Dil ki chokhat pe ik deep jala rakha hai,
Tere lote aney ka amkab saja rakha hai,

Saans tak beh nahi leytey hain tujhe sochtey waqat,
Hum ne is kaam ko beh kal pe utha rakha hai,

Roth jatey ho tu kuch or haseen lagtey ho,
Hum ne yeh soch ke he tum ko khafa rakha hai,

Tum jis se rota huwa chor gaye they ik din,
Hum ne us shaam ko seeney se laga rakha hai,

Chain leyne nahi deyta yeh kis c tor mujhe,
Teri yadoon ne jo tofan utha rakha hai,

Jane waley ne kaha tha k woh lotey ka zaroor,
Ik is he aass pey darwasa khula rakha hai,

Tere jane se jo ik dhool uthi thi ghum ki,
Hum ne us dhool ko anhkon mein basa rakha hai,

Muhe ko kal shaam se woh bohat yaad aney laga,
Dil ne mudat se jo ik shaks bohla rakha hai,

Akhri bar jo aya tha mere naam Wasi,
Mein ne us khat ko kaleyje se laga rakha hai.
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