Apne Ehsas Se Cho.............

by lovebites on November 23, 2004, 01:42:35 AM
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«Reply #45 on: December 11, 2004, 01:11:51 PM »
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gr8 effort Lovebites!

So,how do you find time 2 write such a lenghty shayri? Shocked


thanks a lot

actually mine lots of work is on internet as i m n cable network operater so i only have to connect my pc for my user's than i m free bus i chohti se dairy hai us mein likhta rehta hoon jab collection zaida ho jaye tu post ker deyta hoon simple.................!
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«Reply #46 on: December 11, 2004, 01:15:44 PM »
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itni lambi posting luvbites ji???


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heart hope u 2 got the answer any hows its nice dat ur not leacing
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«Reply #47 on: December 11, 2004, 01:19:23 PM »
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------Chamatey chaand ko tota howa tara bana dala-----

Chamatey chaand ko tota howa tara bana dala
Meri awaragi nay muj ko awara bana dala

Bara dilkash bara rangeen hai yeh shehar kehtey hein
Yahan per hein hazaroon ghar, gharoon mein loog rahtey hein
Mujay is sheher nay galiyoon ka bunjara bana dala
Chamatey chaand ko tota howa tara bana dala

Mein is duniya ko aksar daikh kar hairaan hota hoon
Na muj sai bun saka chouta sa ghar, din raat rota hoon
Khudaya tou nay kaisay yeh jahan sara bana dala
Chamatey chaand ko tota howa tara bana dala

Mere maalik mera dil kyon sulagta hai tarapta hai
Teri marzi, teri marzi pe kis ka zoor chalta hai
Kisi ko gul kisi ko tou nay angara bana dala
Chamatey chaand ko tota howa tara bana dala

Yehi aaghaaz tha mera yehi anjaam hona tha
Mujay barbaad hona tha mujay nakaam hona tha
Mujay taqdeer nay taqdeer ka mara bana dala
Chamatey chaand ko tota howa tara bana dala

Chamatey chaand ko tota howa tara bana dala
Meri awaragi nay muj ko awara bana dala
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«Reply #48 on: December 11, 2004, 01:21:43 PM »
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itni lambi posting luvbites ji???


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heart hope you 2 got the answer any hows its nice dat ur not leacing



yeah got the ansvver and its true tht im not leaving



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nice vvrk dear



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«Reply #49 on: December 11, 2004, 02:44:52 PM »
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yeh.....i told dis dumbo not 2 leave :evil:
u knw y he wanted 2 leave.....coz ppl here jus paste n copy others' stuff!!
Neways Chimpu writes awesome one liners...lol

lovebites...i think writin d whole poem ain't a v gud idea...i guess ppl like me dun sometimes bother 2 read d whole thingy Puzzled !
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«Reply #50 on: December 11, 2004, 03:05:00 PM »
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yeh.....i told dis dumbo not 2 leave :evil:
you knw y he wanted 2 leave.....coz ppl here jus paste n copy others' stuff!!
Neways Chimpu writes awesome one liners...lol

lovebites...i think writin d whole poem ain't a v gud idea...i guess ppl like me dun sometimes bother 2 read d whole thingy Puzzled !


well i agree with u i gave a very deep thought dats why now i am trying to write only 2 liners or little more excluding my topic coz i will be adding long one's here but not every time ....................!thanks 4 the advice

and thanks Heart 2..............................both of ur posts r awsome..........!
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«Reply #51 on: December 11, 2004, 04:32:32 PM »
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thnx luvbites.. vvaise mansi is rite.. lol

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har ek post itni lambi likhoge to kuch posts skip karni padengi

last page pe aisa hi tha.. sara page tumhari posts se bhara tha

they vver nice... but mujhe nahi lagta sabne efforts liye honge padhne k liye.. rest u r smart



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«Reply #52 on: December 11, 2004, 04:35:40 PM »
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yeh.....i told dis dumbo not 2 leave :evil:
you knw y he wanted 2 leave.....coz ppl here jus paste n copy others' stuff!!
Neways Chimpu writes awesome one liners...lol


and thanks Heart 2..............................both of ur posts r awsome..........![/b]



thnx luvbites ji... meri baat aur hai.. mujhe lambi posts likhna pasand nahi hai.. ya ye keh sakte ho k chah k bhi nahi likh sakta main... my bad luck   sad5  :cry:  sad5



n thnx mansi   :hug: lol
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«Reply #53 on: December 11, 2004, 04:55:23 PM »
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thnx luvbites.. vvaise mansi is rite.. lol

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har ek post itni lambi likhoge to kuch posts skip karni padengi

last page pe aisa hi tha.. sara page tumhari posts se bhara tha

they vver nice... but mujhe nahi lagta sabne efforts liye honge padhne k liye.. rest you r smart



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ur welcome budy and thanks 4 ur advice well i already mentioned above i gave a very deep thought on it and i came on it dat i should post 2 linears  ............................!once again thanks and shukriya also 2 u mansi..........for the advice u will be seeing my post limited to 2liners or 4
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«Reply #54 on: December 11, 2004, 08:32:46 PM »
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lol..lol..lol

dil pe mat le yaar glasses2

main to apne jaise logo ki baat kar rahi thi
kuch Chimpu jaise bhi hote hain jo sab kuch padhte hain :wink:
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«Reply #55 on: December 12, 2004, 05:41:17 PM »
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hua hai jab se dil-e-nasaboor be kaboo
kalam tujh se nazar ko bare adab se hai
agar sharar hai to bharke,jo phool hai to khiley
tarhan tarhan ki talab,tere rang-e-lab se hai
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«Reply #56 on: December 15, 2004, 01:00:18 PM »
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hua hai jab se dil-e-nasaboor be kaboo
kalam tujh se nazar ko bare adab se hai
agar sharar hai to bharke,jo phool hai to khiley
tarhan tarhan ki talab,tere rang-e-lab se hai


Wah!!!
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«Reply #57 on: December 15, 2004, 02:58:11 PM »
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hua hai jab se dil-e-nasaboor be kaboo
kalam tujh se nazar ko bare adab se hai
agar sharar hai to bharke,jo phool hai to khiley
tarhan tarhan ki talab,tere rang-e-lab se hai


Wah!!!


thanks...........................!

Mujhay khabar thee meray baad woh bikhar jaata
So us ko kis kay bharoasay pe chhorrh kar jaata
Woh khushboooan main basa tha misal-e-saaya-e-abre
Miaan-e-sehn-e-chaman main idhar udhar jaata
Woh koi nashaa nahin tha kay toothta mujh main
Woh saaniha bhi nahin tha kay jo guzar jaata
Woh khuwaab jaisa koi tha nigaarkhaana-e-husn
Main jitna daikhta utna he woh sanwar jaata
Shikast ho gaya pindaar-e-aaina wurna
Yaqeen kar main teray ishq say mukar jaata
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«Reply #58 on: December 16, 2004, 06:31:41 AM »
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nice work.............lovebites,,,,,,,,................mansi............. tongue3
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«Reply #59 on: December 16, 2004, 10:18:30 AM »
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------Chamatey chaand ko tota howa tara bana dala-----

Chamatey chaand ko tota howa tara bana dala
Meri awaragi nay muj ko awara bana dala

Bara dilkash bara rangeen hai yeh shehar kehtey hein
Yahan per hein hazaroon ghar, gharoon mein loog rahtey hein
Mujay is sheher nay galiyoon ka bunjara bana dala
Chamatey chaand ko tota howa tara bana dala

Mein is duniya ko aksar daikh kar hairaan hota hoon
Na muj sai bun saka chouta sa ghar, din raat rota hoon
Khudaya tou nay kaisay yeh jahan sara bana dala
Chamatey chaand ko tota howa tara bana dala

Mere maalik mera dil kyon sulagta hai tarapta hai
Teri marzi, teri marzi pe kis ka zoor chalta hai
Kisi ko gul kisi ko tou nay angara bana dala
Chamatey chaand ko tota howa tara bana dala

Yehi aaghaaz tha mera yehi anjaam hona tha
Mujay barbaad hona tha mujay nakaam hona tha
Mujay taqdeer nay taqdeer ka mara bana dala
Chamatey chaand ko tota howa tara bana dala

Chamatey chaand ko tota howa tara bana dala
Meri awaragi nay muj ko awara bana dala



Waaah bahut Badhiya ji !! Lovebites ji!!! :D
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